Field-Control Nagamori Toshi

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71 vote(s) since August 14, 2007 03:19

The Artwork (47) (66%)

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Posted on August 14, 2007 03:19

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*Announcement: 5/30/08 - I've completed and uploaded two new characters for your critique!
The Lightning Country Sisters, Seiwa Arashi and Seiwa Reika!

My third entry for Naruto-Arena. This guy will give your teams more control on the battlefield.

___Kita Miyoko__Gosuto Nobu _Nagamori Toshi _Kikuchi Nariko_ _Seiwa Reika__Seiwa Arashi_

Posted on August 14, 2007 03:21

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kinda good

Rips from Anbu & row =D<3

Posted on August 14, 2007 03:24

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Hes kinda a mix between Shodaime and Nidaime dont ya think?

Posted on August 14, 2007 03:35

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Hes kinda a mix between Shodaime and Nidaime dont ya think?

yeah, he does share similarities between the two. Less effective in some respects, more capable in others. Wanted someone a little more flexible than either to support area of effect teams without causing a chakra shortage/conflict.

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Posted on August 14, 2007 05:44

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Needs art now!

Does Sleeping really need 2 randoms? Aside from the defense increase, aren't the costs for it and Overgrowth just swapped costs of 1010's prep/stun? That might just be me, though...

Somehow I'm reminded suspiciously of MTG... Maybe cuz of Overgrowth?

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Posted on August 14, 2007 05:47

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this is cool

good job

Thanks Killa for the sig

Posted on August 14, 2007 08:16

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Needs art now!

Well originally the sleep stunned them for 2 rounds and did 5 damage each round and had a cooldown of 4. Combined with the fact that Overgrowth doesn't end unless you end it yourself (meaning potentially perma-prepped), it made TenTen inferior in everyway. As one of my goals is always to never make an existing character obsolete, I trimmed it down to work just like TenTen and Zabuza's stun but not share the same chakra types.

What's MTG stand for?

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Posted on August 14, 2007 08:50

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Magic The Gathering.

Seriously, needs art now!

Didn't we discuss this before? I really feel like we did...

Advice of the Week: Natural talent beats hard work every time.

Nemo wants YOU to help him in his quest. Talking in 3rd person ftw.

Witty line here.

Posted on August 14, 2007 09:21

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Quote by ChrisNemo

Magic The Gathering.

Seriously, needs art now!

Didn't we discuss this before? I really feel like we did...

Does magic the gathering use a lot of plant techniques or something?

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Posted on August 14, 2007 09:23

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This is pretty good and is a Shodaime/Nidaime mix. Nice.

The art is good too ^_^

The only problem I have is that Overgrow can last forever and looks like it's stackable.
I'd make it lasts 5 rounds or until Firestorm Funeral is used. Also, I'd write it that it cannot be used once in effect (making it unstack-able, but still having it cooldown-less).

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Posted on August 14, 2007 09:27

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Yeah, your second statement is exactly what I intended but was unsure that I would need to specify that. I'll add that to the description then.

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Posted on August 14, 2007 09:33

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Hes kinda a mix between Shodaime and Nidaime dont ya think?

I want an entirely new character with a move set that we haven't yet seen, if they are still doing the custom character thing,Your artwork alone will give you teh victory.

Posted on August 14, 2007 09:42

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Hes kinda a mix between Shodaime and Nidaime dont ya think?

I want an entirely new character with a move set that we haven't yet seen, if they are still doing the custom character thing,Your artwork alone will give you teh victory.

As much as I would like that aswell, it's pretty hard to accomplish that without creating entirely new code. As far as I can tell, the mod's (namely: Laupman) aren't too keen on writing new code. Even for official characters. So we are infact limited to working with what already exists and after 50 characters or so, all we are doing is shuffling numbers and colors and cooldowns. So yeah, it's either more of the same or back to the drawing and coding board.