Ari's Poem- How Long...?


 Topic: Ari's Poem- How Long...?
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  Posted on February 15, 2009 17:00
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Hey, how long does it take
for a memory to go away?
How quickly can it be gone
when it’s engraved in one heart?

Under the gray sky
how many tears will be shed?
How many dreams will be gone by tonight?

There’s only one life
with numerous possibilities
So, continue to move forward

How many eyes will have to cry
before one memory is erased?
How many people can forget and forgive
and let all the pain melt away?


How many times
will one body and soul be wrecked
until all those memories
have all gone away?


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  Posted on February 15, 2009 17:03
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How many eyes will have to cry
before one memory is erased?
How many people can forget and forgive
and let all the pain melt away?
lol .. nice good job !!
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is perfect 10/10 :amused
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  Posted on February 15, 2009 17:03
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Magekyou12 is so much better now.:noworry

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  Posted on February 15, 2009 17:04
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cameron1 wrote:
Magekyou12 is so much better now.:noworry

xD

A poetry contest can prove that statement as the truth or lie. :noworry
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  Posted on February 15, 2009 17:05
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10/10 wonderful youv outdone yourself again ari
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<3 this is epic. Like the word Epicurism..just epic. :D
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  Posted on February 15, 2009 17:07
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noobpwner wrote:
10/10 wonderful youv outdone yourself again ari

Honesty tends to do that when you write poetry or any piece of writing, thank you also.

@jamestheking13- lol. Wow epicurism, best word ever xD

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  Posted on February 15, 2009 17:07
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just.. perfect!

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  Posted on February 15, 2009 17:08
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Shino*Girl wrote:
noobpwner wrote:
10/10 wonderful youv outdone yourself again ari

Honesty tends to do that when you write poetry or any piece of writing, thank you also.

@jamestheking13- lol. Wow epicurism, best word ever xD

Thanks<3
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  Posted on February 15, 2009 17:09
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jamestheking13 wrote:
Shino*Girl wrote:
noobpwner wrote:
10/10 wonderful youv outdone yourself again ari

Honesty tends to do that when you write poetry or any piece of writing, thank you also.

@jamestheking13- lol. Wow epicurism, best word ever xD

Thanks<3
No probs to one of my newest friends. =o

Three cheers for a new and cool friendship X3 !
  Posted on February 15, 2009 17:11
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4 more cheers cuz we can count!
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Shino*Girl wrote:
Hey, how long does it take
for a memory to go away?
How quickly can it be gone
when it’s engraved in one heart?

Under the gray sky
how many tears will be shed?
How many dreams will be gone by tonight?

There’s only one life
with numerous possibilities
So, continue to move forward

How many eyes will have to cry
before one memory is erased?
How many people can forget and forgive
and let all the pain melt away?


How many times
will one body and soul be wrecked
until all those memories
have all gone away?


___________________________

I wrote it in my awesome notebook in like 10 minutes, probably less than that, the inspiration came from this song [[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eeY_ShOKL28 ]click here[/url]], and simply my emotions and the fricking truth (obviously :oh)

Comment and whatever floats your boat~
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  Posted on February 15, 2009 17:13
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jinkotsie wrote:
Shino*Girl wrote:
Hey, how long does it take
for a memory to go away?
How quickly can it be gone
when it’s engraved in one heart?

Under the gray sky
how many tears will be shed?
How many dreams will be gone by tonight?

There’s only one life
with numerous possibilities
So, continue to move forward

How many eyes will have to cry
before one memory is erased?
How many people can forget and forgive
and let all the pain melt away?


How many times
will one body and soul be wrecked
until all those memories
have all gone away?


___________________________

I wrote it in my awesome notebook in like 10 minutes, probably less than that, the inspiration came from this song [[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eeY_ShOKL28 ]click here[/url]], and simply my emotions and the fricking truth (obviously :oh)

Comment and whatever floats your boat~
wow i love u :oh

'Kay, that's nice. :oh