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  Posted on January 8, 2009 00:44
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My Writing Showcase. I Intend To Put More Here Than A Description, But At The Moment I Must Study For My Finals.
Her wrote:

I'd walk her home and sometimes stare
She leaves me behind and asks why I'm standing there
My brain tingles thoughts rushing through my head,
My stomach churns and i cant believe that she was in my bed.
An innocent person now of my past,
Beautiful in every way tho it wasn't meant to last
I try not to reminisce but I cant dismiss ya
And they swore up in down I was in love with Allyssa
I did too until I Iaid eyes on her.
I couldn't look at a picture of her without bearing a smirk.
I was surprised she even liked me
Really a goddess like she?
I asked her out from nowhere, hell, even surprised me!
She said yes! was elated but didn't wanna show it
After 2 seconds of dating i didn't wanna blow it
But she wasn't normal.her personality sublime
Unlike my other past crushes,she didn't treat me like slime.
Saw her at the mall and i knew instantly
That that day was going to end real intensively
It wasn't just the "S" word, we was makin' love
Perfect harmony her body fit me like a glove
Not a happy ending though, not even close
My mom brought me news that really burnt the toast
We were moving now mind u this was the same day
I asked God in heaven, why the hell did it turn out this way?
Tell her or not? Couldn't leave her hangin'
But tellin her then would make it seem like I was only interested n bangin'
Now I'm dangin', whats a bro to do?
"Bae, I'm sorry I have to break up with you"
"We're moving next week, I know, Yea it sucks, bu-----"
She slaps me once, twice, thrice, flees, and now I'm stuck
I walked past her locker on my last day of school
She didn't say a word 70 degrees out but I'm cool
My heart was frozen on her and yea now I got a girl
But she doesn't compare at all, to her.


-Written Nearly 2 Years Ago-
Relations wrote:


On The Phone, With You Girl
Just Now Leavin, The Hood Girl
I Know Its 3:00 And Stuff
But Get Up And Wash Up
So I Can Rub Some Oil Of Olay On Your Body
And When Im Thru You Can Massage Me
Go, I Can Let You
So Put Go Put On Somethin Special
Before I Sex You
And Take Your Whole State Of Mind To An Entire Other Level
Im Talkin Bout Bout Somethin Sexy To Leave Me In Awe
A Red See Thru G-String With The Matchin Bra
I'll Be Your Mustang, If You Can Ride Me
And Then Lay Beside Me
And Tell Me That You Like Me
Luv Me
Touch Me
I Touch You
Then Luv You
Cuz When I See You In That Corset Baby
I Go Dam Crazy
Jaw's Drop
And Heads Turn And Drool Might Drip
Cuz Yo Body Tight And Fit
And That Lingerie Is A Nice Fit
I Might Trip
But It Aint No Tellin Wat We Can Do Today
Candle Lit Bedroom, White Wine On Yo Bustier
And Im Lick It Off, Because Its Yo Time
Close Yo Eyes
Open Thighs
We Can Do The Slow Grind
She Got Me Lyk McDonald's Cuz Im Loving It
When Im Stickin It
Rubbin It
Lickin It, From The Back Of Her
Touchin It
Ticklin It, When Im Waxin Her
To Fufill Her Fantasy Is My Only Desire
Besides To Lift Her Up To My Face And Take Her Higher
With My Tongue
And Go Inside Her And Excite Her
Her Breasts In My Mouth Like Infant Passifier
She Call Me Baby
I Call Her The Psyche Because I Drive Her Crazy
Her Eyes Hazy
Cuz She High Off The Magical Liquid Up Out My Magic Stick
I Never Come Too Quick
I Stick Shift
When I Change Gears
And When I Go Deep She Sheds A Tear
Thats When I Pullout, My Back Is What She's Scratchin
So I Go Downtown To The Salad Bar And Eat Some Salad
Then The Belly Button, I Suck The Skin Off Her Neck
Then I Jet To The G-Spot, Where Its Hot & Wet
She Want Me Next
Its Not Just Sex
Untitled wrote:
Wait. . .i got somethin better than that,
It comes back like karma
What goes around comes around
But I lie 2 myself and say it aint so
I loosened my hands on her waist, but still cant let go.
I'm not big on expressin feelings so u just gotta know,
I care 4 u
I'm there 4 u
If u find yourself suffocating, I'll be the air 4 u
Get lost in the city, I'll call the mayor 4 u
Lose ya shoes then I'll cop a pair 4 u
Flat tire, I'll get the spare 4 u
No other nigga can care like how i care for u
Romance is exquisite
Techniques are splendid
Gimme about an hour more than a minute
But wait, I aint finished.
Never put another nigga over me again
Cuz they playin 4 the minigames
But I'm playin 2 win
And no other man could do it just how I do
No matter how old, how smart, how well he know u,
Or what he's been through
Tryin to replace me is an illiterate gesture
Because i might be a flirt, but baby girl I am just-yours
So next time you think about him, think about me
Compared to my S-Class, your others a C
No matter how much i try 2 shake that L word come back,
Similar to a crackhead lookin for a nickle sack
Or a football comin to the running back

Untitled wrote:

Her imperfections effervescent
She grows finer everyday
Her shortcomings transparent
They all washed away
I cant imagine Earth lit
Without her lovely glow
A God must there be in heaven
For she loved me so
Her essence indescribable
Her beauty divine
The man upstairs
Took alot of time with her design
Untouchable, inconcievable
Yet amable and kind
If only she were mine..
The Extent wrote:

Whenever You Aint There
Its No Air
And It Aint Fair
Its Like A Roller Coaster Of Depression At A State Fair
And Niggaz Actin Like I Aint Care
But I Do Care
You Just Think That I Might Care
Dreams Of Me Losin You,Got Me Suffocatin In Nightmares
I Need You Right There
I Mean Right Here
On The Left Of Me In My Plans
And A Token Of My Love On Yo Left Hand
For You Im The Best Man
For You Im The Hus-band
How You Expect Me To Breathe If You Aint My Breath
Its Like My Heart Dont Beat If You Aint The Rhythem In My Chest
How You Expect Me To Live Babygirl I Need You
I See You
I Taste You
I Feel You
I Breathe You
Without You My Lungs Clogged Up Like Somethin Was Blockin It
So Tell Me How Im Supposed To Breathe If You Aint My Oxygen
What Good Would Heaven Be
If I Aint Up There With She?
If She Aint With Me
Then Heaven Just Gonna Have To Be Patient
Cuz To Leave Her On This Earth, I Just Couldnt Take It
And To See Her With Another Man, I Just Couldnt Face It
The Simple Thought If Abandoning Her, I Just Hate It
And By The Time She Got To Heaven
My Soul Would Already Be Shredded Into Seven
My Eye's Couldnt See Somebody Else Loving
Kissing
Touching
Missing
Hugging
Her The Way I Do
A Road Trip To Heaven Can Wait
So If God Calls Me Home, Ima Tell Em To Re-Write My Fate
Thats The Chance I'll Take
Aslong As Your Laying Next To Me When I Wake
I'll Be Okay
Cuz I Dont Wanna Leave Her
Becuz She's Hotter Than A Fever
If The Angels Tryed Kidnapped Me When They Came Down
Then They'd Have To Turn Around
Ryan Would Be Dissapointed
Gramps Would Be Confused
Juane Would Be Like "Whats Wrong Wit This Dude"
But They Dont Understand I Need You Lyk A Heart Needs A Beat
So I Pray To God Every Night I Go To Sleep
That I Be On Earth When I Awake
Becuz I Dont Wanna Leave You, Heaven Can Wait
Silly Me wrote:
I thought it was love until I was uninterested.
I thought could trust her, with all the time invested.
I thought you were supposed to be there for me
Love and care for me, bear with me
Not desert and abandon me cause I wanna take a different path
And I thought that I could trust you to hold everything I told.

I thought me and you would be cool as cold forever.
I thought we would grow old together.
I thought you was the realest nigga I knew.
I knew it was too good to be true.
I thought that you would would be by my side.
I thought you were my ride or die.

I knew I was stupid for the first.
But the second was even worse.
I knew yo ass was shady,
But damn, c’mon baby,
I knew we were best friends.
And you were my girlfriend.
The person that I trusted the most,
Said "Fuck you!" And kicked me off the boat.

I hope now I’ve got the love of my life,
Who can help me through the pain and stay through strife.
I hope now I got best friends that’ll be there to the end.
I hope now my best friends aren’t a fad, and fade like trends.

I’ve been through so much in my life.
Good and bad, joyful and sad.
And now, I just want to relax.
But I can’t I’m only 17, I got the rest of my life ahead of me.
So let me hop in this cab, and take this ride, go to the lab and fix my stride
.
My Two Feet wrote:
It seems when things go wrong
I cant do a thing but weep
Turn my back on the world
And fall off my two feet.

It seems I'm not strong enough
To hold my own weight
It seems my two feet
Cant hold there place.

My life is always sour
I can never get it sweet
every time things start going right
I fall off my two feet.

My two feet!
My two feet!
My two feet!
My two feet!

Why is it when I try to stand up
I fall back down
Right off my two feet
Hard on the ground.

But I want to stand up
I have to stand up
So im pushing all this weight
All the way up!

My two feet
My two feet
I'm standing all the way up
On my two feet
Strawberry Passion wrote:
Without you in it my life is like a white board
No writing
Like having my heart washed, yeah its shiny
Life without you is like a life without living, I only have one passion, and thats giving.

Back to you everything I took,
Your innocence, and joy
Sacrificed my queen for a rook.
Not a good look

This was all given by Cupid.
but I made her look so stupid.

I CHEATED
I'd never repeat it
God, was I heated
Damn, she wasnt heated?
Felt like my heart would freeze and stop beatin
Man I was straight sneakin

And the LOVE I FELT, i will always cherish,
But the LOVE THAT WAS BUILT, almost perished
A river of tears built up, but my pride ensnared it
The letter I wrote, she made me watch her tear it

How did I fuck up with the baddest dime?
I was all hers, she was all mine
Her image stays forever burnt into my mind

Damn I fucked up,
Man Lucked up.
Other chicks tryna holler? Shut the fuck up

Hadn't talked to her in damn near 3 years.
I told her my fears, she showed me her tears,
By the grace of God she took me back
Maybe she was love drunk like I was...
A few too many beers?
I love her. Period, from her toes to her hair
Playin my cards right
Cuz losing her I couldnt bear!

Dream Material wrote:
Dream material is the phrase
Dreams during the nights and the days
I imagine during the day when i'm awake
Me, Prince charming, her, my Cinderella
But she only lasts during the SUN
Because when the moon comes out, my nightmare shows, and that’s no fun

And upon me it bestows the feeling of wishful hope
Hope that this all will end soon.
That i can jump on a balloon and be carried away
Or high enough that it pops and wakes me up out of this disastrous daze.

Wake up to a blaze, that’s puttin me in a haze
So now i dream in three different ways.
Night, day, and haze, dreaming about Hell, Heaven, and daisies.

Daisies being my lovely wonderful ladies
And how together we act so crazy
And around them i have a natural blaze

So now for me it's back to school days
Keeping up them grades
And acting my age.
So one day I can see me on the front page.

NOW THATS SOME DREAM MATERIAL...

.
All I See(Unreleased) wrote:
All I see today is my sisters gettin preggo
Cuz she got a man dat she dont wanna let go
Rise above
Only allow the one you truly love
To keep you for life, be his wife
make you right
All I see today is my brothers bein G's but I stay around
All because I told em I'd stay down
They clown, hit helpless folks
But violence is a vicious cycle
I aint tellin jokes
All I see today is a corrupt government
they take the truth and cover it
For they love hurtin
What I wanna see is a world with peace
Can we love each other
As sisters and brothers?
At least?

What? wrote:

Love is a right.. What???
It’s a privilege.
A privilege to those who have hearts.
Who have pure hearts, who have real hearts.
Love is from the heart, not the head, the poker or the smarts. . .

Love isn’t a right, it’s a feeling
A feeling like no other. A feeling worth seeing with more than eyes
A feeling worth holding on to with more than your hands
It’s a whole ‘nother sense on its own on.
And true love is shown, not only with the grown,
But to the young too, young at mind and at heart
It’s a principal of life, to find someone to love
It’s a gift of life from the one above.

Love isn’t a right, it’s a truth and trust.
Without trust, there is no love.
Without truth, there is no trust.
Without trust, relationships go bust.
“Nothing can come between us.”
That’s a piece of bullshit.
You gotta work at it
Ain’t no automatic
Only after 50 years can you finally believe it.
Everlasting love. 10% trust, 25% work, 15% love,
And 50% luck. All given from God, and the
Angels above.
Gazing wrote:
Looking up
Seeing the one you want
Reaching high for it, but you
Just cant seem to touch it
It looks so close, but is really
As distant as your mind from heart

The story of my life, star gazing...
I look up and see a shooting star
My wish~ That all the pain and hurt
I caused would go away.
That no matter what
The ones I love will always stay.
That I'll live to see another day.

Scouring the sky from the front porch
See these random flickers like a mini-torch.
Its the stars that shine the brightest in the city
Wantin her with me, to watch this phenomenon.

I go to the country, I see millions, billions of stars.
I pick the one brightest to me. The one i can see. I put it in my pocket,
Twist and lock it
The one over my heart, then I start to go with it
Work at it, try to make it my passion, gotta do
Some more gazing to see if its my fashion.

Lookin up
Star
Gazin
See the one you want
Reaching for it, but you
Just cant seem to touch it
It looks so close, but is really
So far.
My Sunset wrote:
My sunset's being covered by the clouds.
How?
Wow!
Wiping tears away with a towel
The trust is gone, never to return
The train flooded with the emotions felt.
The scar burns,I know I left a bigger one,
But the one given to me, unexplainable, non-replacable.
Never to be healed.
Always to be filled.
What the fuck!?

My sunsets being covered by the clouds.
I can't watch it go down.
I have to do my best to try and blow them away.
For the sake of me, for the sake of us.
Damn I cant see,
The clouds still there?
Can you see them?
I can. man, this ain't cool.
Will the stress dissolve,
Or am i a fool?
Am i that broken leg on the stool?
Or am i gettin thrown into the pool?

My sunset is being covered by clouds.
The reason why I cry.
The reason I don't get high.
The reason why I get drunk and look to the sky.
And ask my God why?
Like I'm getting cut constantly by scythes.
So deep.
So very deep.
I'm fired up,
Up so steep. Can't sleep.
But I'm gonna, I'm about to rise up and wise up.
Expand my lungs and blow.
Got two gone, just three to go.
Gotta go deeper. breathe harder.
Still blowing, two more down,
Just one left now.
But it won't go away. no matter how much I blow,
Or which way.
Not today.
It's not gon' get the best of me.
So falling to my knee's, I blow!{no homo}
Now the WORLD knows.
Can't a thing hold me back.
Nothing can keep me on my back!
Under The Gun wrote:
What have we become?
Living our Life under the gun,
Like having innocent blood on your hands is fun....
But you don't want to be treated like another number.

You yell and claim CRIPS and BLOODS then want to fight
Like violence is gonna make it all right..
So what happens if someone pulls out a knife?
Or robs you of your life..then the gun is what you are under...

Its a shame how I have to watch my back
In fear that someone will attempt to attack
This life is a race in which I'm too frightened to run....
So I'm forced to live it under the GUN.


RIP:
Cedric Gill
Chris Walker
Delilah Jackson
Alan Jackson
Michael Renest
Karl Hollis
Moments In Love wrote:
There are moments in love where you doubt
Your inhibitions cling close so you won't get hurt again
Though love is a feeling you cant do without
It's scary to know someone can affect you so deeply
Shake the very core of your soul
Relinquish you of all control
There are moments in love where you sit back and listen
Though pitch black had it been
From nowhere they brought light
From silence came sound
You appreciated things a little more
It opens your eyes wide with surprise
There are moments in love where Hell intrudes
Meaningless feuds and pointless fights arise
You doubt what had once been the best feeling ever
The last thing you'd think it was is a test from God
But hold on so you can experience more unless ur sure..
There are moments in love where Euphoria flows
The person knows you're meant for them
Kisses are electric, touches leave you vibrating
The very thought removes all hard and cold
Leaving soft and warm..
This cant end
But there are moments in love where love takes a break
It never completely disappears...if its true
But its just not the same
Smiles dont rush to your lips when you speak their name
Goes on vacation from two hearts that once beat as one
Love is done.
Genesis Leader| Tell Me I Aint Cold| Journeying To Become A True Hip-Hop Head.
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  Posted on January 8, 2009 00:44
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My Ace wrote:
You are my ace more than a best friend
You'd bust your ass to offer some help you could could lend
When my health was slippin, you said I need to get in shape
Thats a true friend, you wouldn't have said shit if you were fake
And all the arguments we make,all and the shit that we take
All the shit that we break, or broke,
It had to eventually fade
And bring the mature side out
Started gettin girls and shit
And made it our own personal law to never call a girl a bitch
Not a pact that was written in stone
But came from our sense to judge right from wrong
We fight
We strong
I'm proud of u dawg. you could be doin drugs,
Or slangin em
Or on the street poppin them slugs.
We even battled in our freestyle rhymes
Got personal, sometimes creeped outta line but it was fine
You got yours so now I gotta get mine,
Build our goals off each other
You're like my fuckin brother,
Your mom is like my mother
Blood couldnt bring us any closer to each other
If i needed it u'd slap me in the face and vice versa
and i'm not particularly laced but it could've been worse, uh, and
Even tho that aint hardly the case,
You Forever my road dawg, my nigga, My Ace.
Buffet wrote:
If revenge is a dish that is best served cold
Then add a little spice
Just a pinch of spite
Just to be bold.

If you eat to live and you don't live to eat,
Don't eat ur way...
Through my word buffet,
There's enough 2 go around 4 a second treat.

If what goes around comes around is known to be true,
Then be kind to others,
Treat them as sister or brothers
Do onto them as you would like done to you,

If love is blind and has its own mind,
See your loved ones for who they really are
Because sometimes you see,who you think they may be...may not be up to par
One day true love you may find

If blood is thicker then water
The buffet will offer you blood punch
And everyday when the clocks @ 12 at my buffet there is lunch
Between blood, secrets are kept harder

So come around and dine with me
Eat as many words that you can see
Some are deeper words with more intensive meaning
Some may see words with little feeling
You might come across words with malice and hate
But beneath my table cloth of righteous and meaning
Are the words that i ate.
The “L” Word wrote:
Love at a distance.
Love at first glance.
Love at the first word spoken and the last kiss goodbye.

Time stands still for true love.
Real love.
Never ending, can't get enough of, better the second time around love.

Wish you were here with me love.
Want to feel your touch love.
Say "Ok, I love you...ttyl" love

Miss you love.
Just want to kiss you love
*Never letting go love.

Cry when you're not with me love.
Wonder where we went wrong love.
Sign your last letter, "...Love you always....Goodbye Love"

Never wanted it to be over love.
Lets start over love.
Hope you still feel the same way as me love.

The beginning of a good book.
The very first chapter.
The "the end...and happily ever after"

My first love.
Last love
My "I'll love you forever"

Love love?
I dont love love
Because not even love loves love
Candy Got Me wrote:
School was so hard man
I never knew getting a question wrong could make you feel so little.
I made sure no one was looking and pulled out a pack of skittles.

Girlfriend just cheated.
I feel so low.
I never felt worst.
There's always my colorful pick me up, starburst.

Life really sucks.
Sometimes I just want to fly away.
I just want to feel like a king.
If only I could put down these damn jellybeans!

I want to stop this addiction!
I really really do!
I'm not making any progress though
I can't quit snickers too!

All this candy has me trapped!
I just can't stop because I feel
So cool and happy.
I just go in my corner and eats some laffy taffy.

I spend all my money on candy.
Hope I don't become a bum
I'm not gonna really care
As long as I have some bubble gum

I have a goal in life.
I want to be a dancer
They told me I can't get on stage
With some jolly ranchers.

I'm an outsider to the world
My family is who I miss
Man, skip family!
All I need is a Hershey's kiss!

All this candy really has me trippin.
I'm tied to this drug called glucose
And his friends sucrose and fructose.

Sugar will have you feenin in school.
Feels like your going in circles when your sittng in your stool.

I wish I could break free.
Why can't I just go back to the way it used to be?
Before I felt trapped like slavery?
Oh well, time for another Reese!
Your Spell wrote:
Your Style Is Unique
Doin Magic Like A Witch
Playin Tricks- On My Mind
Stuck On You Like A Glitch
I Killed The Pimp In Me For You
I Spent Bills On You
Put No One Above You
For One Reason
And One Reason Only,
Because I Love You
I'm Pushin Mountains Up Cliffs Everyday
From Sunrise To Sunset, I Love You In Every Way
Its Bittersweet Whenever I See You, In A Way
I'ma Have To Tell You Bye, Too Hard To Say
I'm Runnin Miles Through Rivers
On Airplanes Away, I Don't Cry Or Wimper
Flinch Or Shiver
I Hate To Take Trips
I Can Feel My Heart Drip
Missin Your Eyes And Lips
Thighs And Hips
I Feel It
Bleeding Thru My Vains
Screaming Out In Pain
Hollering Out Your Name
Sittin In First Class Thinkin Of You And Going Insane
When I Come Back You The First Number I Dial
And When You Answer The Phone, I Crack My First Smile
Looking At Pictures Of You
Thinking Bout What I Would Do
If The Sky Wasnt Blue
And You And I Were Through
Could I Pull Through
I Doubt That That's True
But Im Good
I Love How I Can Taste Yo Lips When We're Kissin
Closer Than Close, Holdin You, And I Just Feel Lifted
High Then A Airplane
And Geeked As Hell
When We Speak, You Can Tell
That I'm Under Your Spell
Fade wrote:
Souls intertwined
Level of love divine,
They'd think we'd unwind
Yet we escalate over time
We're universes from perfect
But your flaws are perfections for me
And I'd give the world twice for you
Because you're worth it,
You honestly deserve it
We've elevated
Millions of miles beyond like
Forget a Klondike,
What I do for you.
Take you anywhere,
Make all your dreams come true
I look into your eyes
And drown in pure beauty
I could never lose you
And you dont want to lose me
We'd be lugubrious
For the rest of our days
Make no attempt at finding this feeling again
Because we could never take our eyes peeling again
Feeling like we're handicapped and need wheeling again
Heads reeling again
We'd lose our mind
If ever it had to..
Fade...
Fuck You Too wrote:
Fuck me?
Fuck u too.
Thought u was there for me like i was there for u
Thought u were true
Nope, just another hoe
Thats not the only reason i said fuck u though.
We were cool once, best of friends
You betrayed me again
So fuck u then
Told my business, half of it lies
Yo fake ass friends too,
Fuck u guys.
We were ride or die
Like tic and tac
But your boyfriend told u that i was whack
Thought u were above it
But u just an act
Fuck me, huh bitch? Well fuck u back!
Let Your Eyes Listen wrote:
Let yours eyes listen, as the sky glistens.
Birds whistlin.
Bums trippin.
Kids getting whippings.
The scenery you see is impossibly cool .
Splashes coming from the neighbors pool.
Blocking the sound from your mind like a linebacker
Letting your eyes listen...

Now Watch.....

Wrapped up in my hearing,
Restoring to my sense of sight.
Watching my surroundings.
Looking for my groundings.
Watching people bow down.
Watching others juggle.
Juggle what?
Their lives, thats what.
The families torn apart from drugs, liquor, and weed.
The relationships broken up because of greed
Friendships thrown away because of the
Liars,
Betrayers,
And sneaks.

Still listening with my eyes.
Now i look to the sky, and I hear words from wise, clouds.
Looking at bunnies, lions, and dinosaurs.
Paying no attention to the whores
In the front of me.
Dropping to their knees.
Turn my head three quarters, to somebody shorter,
A caring auntie of 1, walking with her sisters daughter,
And i notice my brother, pulling up with my mother.
And i think to myself, I'm lucky to be covered.
By a family that cares.
Mother and father don't drink, smoke or shoot
Lucky me. My friend's mom is a prostitute.
Women have the power, but she only want the loot.
And others can get their way because they're cute
I treat my girls with utmost respect,
Never overstep, yet, never neglect
Never lay a hand on them.
They're to good for that.
To be smacked, nah, never that.
Then i see my friends walking up the street,
And how cool we seem.
Its like life's complete.
Been together since we were in diapers.
None of us liar's. Never would throw one another in the fire
All of us loyal. All of us blunt,
And upfront.
I still cant hear, so I'm listening with my eyes.
Then I realize,
I cant complain.
I've got it made.
Family, friends, and
The love of my life
Home and a phone,
Can't be real, more like a Twilight zone
But it must be, because I can hear... it
With my eyes instead of my ears...shit.
Clothes to wear, food to share,
People who care.
Now i can hear,
I've listened with my eyes,
Suddenly I see no profit in telling lies,
Whispering goodbyes, when byes are never so
Looked to the skies and see that
Even though the other day I busted my kneecap
Even though I failed my test
I'm a good kid, and still they dont see that
God loves me so..
Truly.
Sometimes what you hear through ears are all lies
Sometimes we just need to listen with our eyes.
Ha wrote:
For Heart Break We Think Love Is The Cure,
Minds So Clouded But It Just Feels So Pure,
Heart So In It, But The Mind's Insecure,
You Fallin So Fast, You Hope They Are Too,
Givin All You Can, Tiny Hints, Small Clues,
Wanna Slow Down, But The Feelings Got Ya Hooked
Hurt Feelings From Ya Last Kinda Got You Shook,
Is It Lust Or Love, Or Is It Really Just You,
Same Look in Our Eye's, Matchin Heart Beats too,
Is It High School Lunch, Or Home Made Food,
Basically Is It Masked, Or Is This Real With You,
Combined Be Nature Like Grass You'll Grow,
Now This Opposites Feelins Begin To Show,
Panic, OMG What If I Can't Let Go,
Trust This Once The Last Said So,
But They Bring Much More To Your Emtions Door,
Both Trade Trust Key's Guards Drop To Floor,
Nothings Down Like Clouds We High keep Up,
At The Point Where We Start To Lust,
Hold Up Wait... I'm In Love..
Wow.
Untitled wrote:
Yes Hurt Will Make You Cry,
I Thought I Wasn't The Type,
I Keep Speakin On You
Like Ya Face Was A Mic,
I Guess You Focused On The Left,
So That Makes Me Right,
My Mind Is In Outer Space
That's What Makes Me Write,
They Start Off As Everything
That You could Eva Want,
Then They Switch Faces
And Everything's A Front
Somebody You Don't Know,
First It's Baby I Love You,
I Put No-one Above You,
Then Rain, Sleet, And Snow
Now You Cant See,
Blind To What You Knew,
And Then Went From Us,
To Simply Me And You
But Your Feeling's Grown Strong
Doubts In The Abyss
It's Like You Keep Fallin Deeper
Everytime That You Kiss,
Love Killed Your Common Sense,
And The Important Signs You Miss,
Believin Everything They Say
Cause Love Is Leadin The Way,
You Forget That Love Is Blind,
And That It Has No Face,
Your Friends Claim They Cheatin,
You Say He's Not Like That,
Your Body's So Confident,
But Your Mind Goes Crazy,
Tryin To Escape Their Presence,
Like Where's The Closest Door,
Now Tear's Begin To Fall
Like The Rain When It Pours,
Try To Find A Private Spot
While Your Finger's Dial Rapidly,
Now Your Prides Dead,
Then You Question Them Like Jeopardy,
Fills Your Head Up,
He Says it's Just Your Insecurity,
Spit You A Couple Words
And Now You're Happy Go Lucky,
But In The Back Of Your Mind,
Somethin Still Seems Funny,
Make Your Way To Where They Stay,
With A Ring In The Seat,
Playin A Mutual Favorite Song,
Then The Memories Speak,
About To Pull Off The ONE KNEE,
Not Prepared For What You See,
Think Back To All The Sign's
That Your Heart Made You Miss,
See Hurt's Winds
Begin To Clear Love's Mist,
Catch Them Givin Someone The Same Kiss-
That Made You Feel Like This,
You Go Blank, 90* But Ya Body's So Cold,
Somebody Who Know's, Do You Deal Or Fold?........
Murder wrote:
She Got Dreads Like Busta Rhymes Did
She Smokin Like Bob Marley
Not Tobacco, Black N Milds, Or Weed
I Mean She Smokin Hot Like 100 Degrees
On The Celsius
Her Walk Is The Sexiest
I Met Her On Sunday
The Day Before Monday
Walkin Down The Street Like Tyra On A Runway
She's Coming My Way
I Jump Off The Stoop
Put My Game Face On Like A Nigga Bouta Hoop
Got The Number
I Called Her And She Told Me That She Wondered
If I Would Call Her
She Thought That I Would Stall Her
But Contrary To Her Belief's,
I Picked The Phone Up Ready To Speak
She Told Me She Had Her Heart Broken, I Reasured Her I Wasnt That Type
She Said Her Ex Was The Bad Type
An A-Class Ass Wipe
The Next Day She Saw One Of My Hoes Leavin My Crib, Then She Called
I Told Her It Was My Sister, She Said I Was A Dog
I Told Her It Was My Sister
She Apologized, I Forgive Her
Weeks Later She Came To The Crib To Visit
She Said She Didnt Wanna Do Nothing But Chill And Kick It
I Was Cool With That
She Felt Comfortable With Me
We Listened To Music, Laid In The Bed And Watched TV
She Asked Me If I Was Feelin Her, I Told Straight Up
"You're My Everything And I Think I'm In Love"
She Blushed
Cheeks Turned Rosy
She Got On Top Of Me And Said "Hold Me"
She Told Me She Was Lonely
She Told Me She Would Die If I Was Phony
I Told Her I Would Die, If She Let Go Of Me
She Held Me Tighter
Pecks On The Cheeks Turned To Making Out On The Couch
And Sucking On Necks Turned To Breast In My Mouth
Both Butt Naked, She Hot In The Twat
I Said What You Want From Me, She Said Gimme All You Got
We Were Ready, Even Though Before We Had Remained Patient
But We Were So Ready, Ass Naked, We Changed Places
I'm On Top Of Her, Deep Between Her Thighs
Soft Moans Of My Name, Rolling Her Eyes
She Said Stop
I Went Deeper
She Don't Stop
I Went Even Deeper
I Pulled Out And She Opened Her Mouth
Put Her Tonsils On My Head Until My Children Came Out
I Laid Her On Her Back, Put My Tongue Between Her Thighs
She Began To Breath Harder, And She Started To Sigh
She Came
And Went
Then Came Back Again
She Got On Top Of Me And I Went Back In
For Hours This Lasted
Then She Went Home
And That Night When We Were Talking On The Phone
She Told Me She Was In Love All Over Again
It Felt Like She Had Been Born All Over Again
It Felt Like She Lost Her Virginity All Over Again
She Said She Was Happy I Was More Than A Friend
The Next Week She Saw The Same Girl From Before
On The Porch With Me, Almost Just Like Before
I Told Her She Was My Sister
But She Saw Me Kiss Her
She Didnt Call Me For Days
Until I Sent Her A Message Sayin Stop Playin Games
She Told Me I Broke Her Heart
She Said She Was About To Die
I Told Her I Was Sorry
She Told Me I Was A Lie
She Told Me That She Hated Me
I Told Her The Opposite
She Told Me I Was A Hoe Ass Nigga And Hung Up
She Told Her Older Brother, The Next Day He Decided To Run Up
He Got Whooped, She Got Upset
She Said Hated Me, I Said "You Wasnt Sayin That When You Was Hot, All Wet"
She Slapped Me
She Said "Q, You Killing Me Softly"
She Grabbed Me, Started Crying, I Said "Get Off Me"
She Started Going Crazy And Causing A Scene
She Started Stalking And Following Me
The Next Day She Sent Me A Picture
It Was Her And Another Nigga
I Told Her Didnt Care And She Flipped
She Recorded A Video On Her Phone Of Her Trying To Slit Her Wrist
I Called The Police But They Were Too Late
I Told Her To Chill, I Told Her To Wait
She Wrote A Note Telling How I Killed Her Inside
How I Assassinated Her Heart, And Slaughtered Her Pride
She Also Said I Was A Slut And Didnt Deserve Her
She Accused Me Of Premeditated, Hard, Hot, Wet, Slow ,Fast, Rough, Deep, From The Back Murder
Rain wrote:
Rain on me
Wash away these impurities
So everyone can see
The true beauty

Rain on me
Cleanse my face
So i'll no longer look like a disgrace
So i can be in a new state

Rain on me
Rinse my hands
Turn back the sands
Stop me from killing that man
Tears wrote:
Tears are the words the heart can't say
Tears express the emotion we want to convey
Tears are one of the reasons we pray
Tears are universal
Tears can't become commercial
Because the moment tears become unsocial
Or better yet, the moment tears become meaningless
Thats the moment emotions begin to seam
And emotions become fake
When we smile for other's peoples sake
Because being genuine seems like a waste
When smiles leave a crappy after-taste
When every confrontation begins with "get the fuck out my face"
So now every tear i shed, or let slip
I appreciate because it lets me know I still have my grip.
My Goodbye wrote:
The lyrics used to be ridiculous
But now thinking its too meticulous.
Writing used to make me so proud
But now, I'm sick of writing when i I'm down,
No smiles,
All frowns,
Writing just to clown.
It seemed like i was upward bound
But my spring has unwound
But my pen, can no longer poetically rhyme for my tongue.
Writing this is so damn hard, but not because it's emotional,
But because it's cold, and it seems so forced.
My flow cant take its course.

So right here, right now,
I take my final bow.
I'm dropping my pen, my sword, my dagger.
Continuing my life with a different type of swagger.
Because my writing has come to a halt from a slow stagger.

So with all my heart it pains me to say goodbye.
But i wanna leave on a high.
This is my Black Album, my 23 to 45.
And now i sigh,
As my many fans cry
And ask why
What is this? Ur lyrics arent dry
Sorry, but this is my good-bye.
Goodbye.
My Comeback wrote:
Dancing...

For awhile had to become my outlet, my passion.
In the rain, late night splashin.
All my feelings were clashin.
It was there, at that point in my life,
Where there weren't many writers of my type.

It took a friend, and a debate,
To put me back in that state.
And with those last few words, it felt so great.
I had to return, never too late.
Coming back with even more on my plate.
So now i simply state:

I proceed to the front lines to take on this fallacy
This rap, these-- excuses for poetry
I've been training like Rocky, now I"m out of retirement
Better than ever, changing the game and it's name.
It's no longer rap, we reverting back to Hip-Hop.
So writers without passion should just let it go
Cause by my clock, your times up.
You've had your fun for these last couple of years
But now the real poets are done sheddin tears.
We've returned to compose excellence about dreams and fears.
So here's my warning...
Hip-Hop is no longer dead, It's no longer about drugs, sex, and bread.
Heard what i said?
We back to the real shit.
Back to the lyrics.
Genesis Leader| Tell Me I Aint Cold| Journeying To Become A True Hip-Hop Head.
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Reserve ~1 More
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Final Reserve ~ Will Be Edited
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uhh....whos gonna read all that? O-o
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Agreed who will read it all me is lazy :cry
  Posted on January 8, 2009 00:52
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campig wrote:
Agreed who will read it all me is lazy :cry
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Clearly it wont be either of you who reads it so how about you take your spam elsewhere?
Thanks, have a good day.
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Pzychoflame wrote:
uhh....whos gonna read all that? O-o
AK-47's would spin you counter clockwise!
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  Posted on January 8, 2009 20:16
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I haven't read all of the poems, but I've read two so far, and you know how much I love your poems, so, I don't need to explain my feelings about the first two poems :blink

But, I'll defiantly read the rest of them, and comment so...

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  Posted on January 10, 2009 03:43
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Nice Q. Im still reading them...

Bishes to lazy to read...:notrust
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  Posted on February 1, 2009 16:32
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i am halfway thru reading them... 10/10 ZOMG BORDERS *spazes*

i know u did it for me

hey for all u lazy idiots who spam for no reason gtfo and kindliy kill urself. and do the internet a favor =D

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  Posted on February 4, 2009 02:02
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Done..Nice Q but the bad part about it you left us....

We miss you..:sad
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  Posted on April 20, 2009 22:54
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gj on your poems q, 10/10:cheesy

my fav one is Tears
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  Posted on April 20, 2009 22:56
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9/10 i didnt read all of them though .-.