.::Untitled Poem::. by Ari.


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  Posted on November 22, 2008 14:30
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I'm no superhero
nor am I a guardian angel
I have no powers
I'm just simply me

Surely if you call my name
no matter how far I am
Surely I'll appear at your side
No matter how the long,
the journey may be
I maybe have no powers
But, surely I can act like I do
If it means that I protect you

I'll continue to cry
as I walk along the cold sidewalks
and as the time fades away
once again into endless despair
I only hear echoes
as I trudge in dark hallways
and no longer seeing refined light ahead
like in the past days

Sure, everyone has changed
but who knows if it's for the better
But, no matter the obstacles
I'll continue to protect

I know we both suffer in pain
But, surely I can hold back your tears
and hold your hands for support
So, who cares if I may have no powers
Who said that you need one to help others?
Please, I just want to talk to you
I don't want to have a war of words
I just want to truly embrace your sorrowful self


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It has a meaning I suppose, and suppose to cheer people up because when I was writing it, it cheered me up.

Anyways, comment, rate, etc. :]

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  Posted on November 22, 2008 14:31
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SHIT LOL nah joking thats nice 10./.10


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  Posted on November 22, 2008 14:33
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wow that was pretty intersteing lol i love the opening

  Posted on November 22, 2008 14:33
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thats nice
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 14:34
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wow its really nice
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 14:34
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10 It Relates Too Someone Close Too Meh And Im Sure She Can Cheer Her Behind Up If She Read This.
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 14:34
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Lolz... nice o.o

I wanna ask you how much time it took you to make it ? :l

8.6, liked the theme
  Posted on November 22, 2008 14:36
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9/10.

Only thing I didn't like was the line "No matter how the long".

That just doesn't seem to be proper english.

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  Posted on November 22, 2008 14:37
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Nice one ari. <3
The flow is nice, though it's hard to find.
Nonetheless, great poem. <333
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 14:37
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Quote by Pein_of_the_Dark
Lolz... nice o.o

I wanna ask you how much time it took you to make it ? :l

8.6, liked the theme


It took me about 4 maybe 5 minutes to type up ._.

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  Posted on November 22, 2008 14:41
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WOW! You're really good at making poems ?/10
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 14:44
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what, no rhymes...5/10

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