Final Poetry Battle RATE


 Topic: Final Poetry Battle RATE
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Poll: Who's better?
7 vote(s) since November 22, 2008 07:18
Lazy_Genius_13 (6) (86%)
Zelos0Wilder (1) (14%)
Neither (0) (0%)
Tie (0) (0%)
  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:18
zelos0wilder
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#1
Zelos0Wilder---

Blue, blue is the sea to-day,
Warmly the light
Sleeps on St. Andrews Bay --
Blue, fringed with white.

That's no December sky!
Surely 'tis June
Holds now her state on high,
Queen of the noon.

Only the tree-tops bare
Crowning the hill,
Clear-cut in perfect air,
Warn us that still

Winter, the aged chief,
Mighty in power,
Exiles the tender leaf,
Exiles the flower.

Is there a heart to-day,
A heart that grieves
For flowers that fade away,
For fallen leaves ?

Oh, not in leaves or flowers
Endures the charm
That clothes those naked towers
With love-light warm.

O dear St. Andrews Bay,
Winter or Spring
Gives not nor takes away
Memories that cling

All round thy girdling reefs,
That walk thy shore,
Memories of joys and griefs
Ours evermore.
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Lazy_Genius_13---

The long nights stand,
Leaving me cold and loveless
Remembering your arms
That loving temptress
They made me a man
But now I’m lonely
Scarred from harm
Holding just my only
It’s been a few months
Since our words last met
It’s been a hundred suns
Since our love was said
You’re with another now
You’re happy so you say
You want me to stay put
No longer to head your way

We were gonna be together
Forever safe from harm
We were supposed to be forever
Now I’m just missing your arms.
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-I wake up every morning at nine and grab for the morning paper. -Then I look at the obituary page. If my name is not on it, I get up.

-To be or not to be...for that is the question.

-Plan your work, work on your plan and your plan will work.
-In the book of life, the answers are not in the back.
  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:21
ItachiUchia12
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#2
woot my suggestion was taken!!!!!!!!!!!! xD anyways i say lazy o.o sorry zelos

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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:22
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#3
....zelos
that is not your poem

i know it because of this

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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:22
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#4
Quote by Lazy_Genius_13
....zelos
that is not your poem

i know it because of this

Link
i'm sorry i was to lazy to type another poem
|Smart and wise|

Credit goes to Juan a great GFXer.

-I wake up every morning at nine and grab for the morning paper. -Then I look at the obituary page. If my name is not on it, I get up.

-To be or not to be...for that is the question.

-Plan your work, work on your plan and your plan will work.
-In the book of life, the answers are not in the back.
  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:24
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#5
Quote by zelos0wilder
Quote by Lazy_Genius_13
....zelos
that is not your poem

i know it because of this

Link
i'm sorry i was to lazy to type another poem


well dats y u lost











  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:24
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#6
Quote by zelos0wilder
Quote by Lazy_Genius_13
....zelos
that is not your poem

i know it because of this

Link
i'm sorry i was to lazy to type another poem

not the point, you claimed a dead man's work as your own
not cool at all
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:24
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#7
Quote by Lazy_Genius_13
....zelos
that is not your poem

i know it because of this

Link

At least he copys & paste well
edit : xD only zelos voted for himself
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:24
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#8
Quote by Lazy_Genius_13
Quote by zelos0wilder
Quote by Lazy_Genius_13
....zelos
that is not your poem

i know it because of this

Link
i'm sorry i was to lazy to type another poem

not the point, you claimed a dead man's work as your own
not cool at all
Yea i guess your right.

itachi_uchia-Yea, yea.
|Smart and wise|

Credit goes to Juan a great GFXer.

-I wake up every morning at nine and grab for the morning paper. -Then I look at the obituary page. If my name is not on it, I get up.

-To be or not to be...for that is the question.

-Plan your work, work on your plan and your plan will work.
-In the book of life, the answers are not in the back.
  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:27
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#9
Quote by zelos0wilder
Quote by Lazy_Genius_13
Quote by zelos0wilder
Quote by Lazy_Genius_13
....zelos
that is not your poem

i know it because of this

Link
i'm sorry i was to lazy to type another poem

not the point, you claimed a dead man's work as your own
not cool at all
Yea i guess your right.

itachi_uchia-Yea, yea.

lols, i tend to end up being right in most aspects

so when can i expect that sig, lols
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:28
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#10
Quote by conan1993cr
Quote by Lazy_Genius_13
....zelos
that is not your poem

i know it because of this

Link

At least he copys & paste well
edit : xD only zelos voted for himself
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lol

  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:30
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#11
wow. plagiarizing is the greatest sin of all one can commit as a writer

zelos, you fail.

even ur name is plagiarized.
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:40
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#12
Wow both are good. I chose tie

Sigg made by me!
  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:40
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#13
Quote by Phurman
Wow both are good. I chose tie
dude zelos ripped his poem

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  Posted on November 22, 2008 12:41
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#14
SHAMELESS SELF PROMOTION

If you're not going to rip poems Z0W, you might want to think about joining POTW #3 - theme: night (link in my sig)

And Lazy, how about it? Be good to get some of your poetry in there too ^^
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