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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:07
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Hmmmm..
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:08
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lols, ok then zelos
you post one for a new topic, or PM it to me and i'll make the topic

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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:09
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I'll pm you my poem and you make the topic is that good?
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:10
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I'll pm you my poem and you make the topic is that good?

that's fine
any set theme for the poem
i was thinking loneliness or heartbreak
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:11
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I'll pm you my poem and you make the topic is that good?

that's fine
any set theme for the poem
i was thinking loneliness or heartbreak
any theme is fine
But my poem is so freaken long just pm me your poem ok?
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Credit goes to Juan a great GFXer.

-I wake up every morning at nine and grab for the morning paper. -Then I look at the obituary page. If my name is not on it, I get up.

-To be or not to be...for that is the question.

-Plan your work, work on your plan and your plan will work.
-In the book of life, the answers are not in the back.
  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:13
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I'll pm you my poem and you make the topic is that good?

that's fine
any set theme for the poem
i was thinking loneliness or heartbreak
any theme is fine
But my poem is so freaken long just pm me your poem ok?

ok then, but you realize length gets you no where in poetry it's depth

but i'll message it, but that means you get to make the topic
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:13
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we can either decide between ourselves using mutual respect
or we can do a few to determine worth then set 2 up for judging

also....i find that highly unlikely


ok. but i think ItachiUchia12 's suggestions is much better
post ur best work, and then poll it

besides, me blowing the 2 of you away isn't unlikely
it's highly possible

in fact, here's one of my poems to blow you away
ready?

Blow You Away

Blow, blow, blow
off you go
ho, ho, ho

so, were you blown far away?
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:14
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Quote by Lazy_Genius_13

we can either decide between ourselves using mutual respect
or we can do a few to determine worth then set 2 up for judging

also....i find that highly unlikely


ok. but i think ItachiUchia12 's suggestions is much better
post ur best work, and then poll it

besides, me blowing the 2 of you away isn't unlikely
it's highly possible

in fact, here's one of my poems to blow you away
ready?

Blow You Away

Blow, blow, blow
off you go
ho, ho, ho

beat that!

lols, ok then, if you want me to beat it then here

Part of Two

The sun is sinking,
Her mind is thinking
While my skies are blinking,
Blinking from dark to bright
It all depends upon the light
The light in her eyes
They control my skies

What must I sew?
Where can I sew us together?
However can we survive this weather,
This weather that tears others apart
When all we have is a single heart

Where do we go?
Where can I go?
Where?
When I’m only a part of two

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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:14
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I'll pm you my poem and you make the topic is that good?

that's fine
any set theme for the poem
i was thinking loneliness or heartbreak
any theme is fine
But my poem is so freaken long just pm me your poem ok?

ok then, but you realize length gets you no where in poetry it's depth

but i'll message it, but that means you get to make the topic
okay ill be waiting-goes to pms-
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Credit goes to Juan a great GFXer.

-I wake up every morning at nine and grab for the morning paper. -Then I look at the obituary page. If my name is not on it, I get up.

-To be or not to be...for that is the question.

-Plan your work, work on your plan and your plan will work.
-In the book of life, the answers are not in the back.
  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:16
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PS> here i fixed your poem

Blow You Away

Blow, blow, blow
Off, off, off you go
Ho, ho, Hobey ho ho
Off, off, off you go
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:18
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lol. i can't believe u took that seriously

really. i'll post one of my proper poems here
then you decide
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:19
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lol. i can't believe u took that seriously

really. i'll post one of my proper poems here
then you decide

yes, humor me and post one

and actually i wasn't being serious...i just wanted it to flow a bit better
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:19
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It's posted!
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Credit goes to Juan a great GFXer.

-I wake up every morning at nine and grab for the morning paper. -Then I look at the obituary page. If my name is not on it, I get up.

-To be or not to be...for that is the question.

-Plan your work, work on your plan and your plan will work.
-In the book of life, the answers are not in the back.
  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:21
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lol. i can't believe u took that seriously

really. i'll post one of my proper poems here
then you decide

yes, humor me and post one

and actually i wasn't being serious...i just wanted it to flow a bit better


make it flow a bit better?
lol. u crack me up.

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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:26
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lol. i can't believe u took that seriously

really. i'll post one of my proper poems here
then you decide

yes, humor me and post one

and actually i wasn't being serious...i just wanted it to flow a bit better


make it flow a bit better?
lol. u crack me up.

w8

yeah made it flow better, it was too abrupt before

and i'm waiting
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