Poetry Battle


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  Posted on November 22, 2008 06:48
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Anyone want to have a poetry battle winner gets a sig.
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 06:50
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if you want some1 to know u don't rip show some work e.e and i would battle u but i lost my isnpiration right now

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  Posted on November 22, 2008 06:50
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lol i wont trust u if u stole a name from somebody xD
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 06:51
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For the last time the name was an accident my friend zachary said to use it.
So you can't blame me.
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Credit goes to Juan a great GFXer.

-I wake up every morning at nine and grab for the morning paper. -Then I look at the obituary page. If my name is not on it, I get up.

-To be or not to be...for that is the question.

-Plan your work, work on your plan and your plan will work.
-In the book of life, the answers are not in the back.
  Posted on November 22, 2008 06:53
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lols, whatever
i'll do a poetry battle wit you Zelo
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 06:55
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Quote by Lazy_Genius_13
lols, whatever
i'll do a poetry battle wit you Zelo


ok here i go:

And so it came to be
this isolation that I am
I can only look to me
to find the way it all began -
this confusion, constant
hunger for something more than this
I strive to find this being
that I envision, yet seem to miss.
Could it be that I am empty-
or maybe a little lost?
Could it be that I am lonely,
or seek happiness at any cost?
This never-ending Something
that I am living deep inside,
depicts the illusion of myself
and all I have to hide.
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Credit goes to Juan a great GFXer.

-I wake up every morning at nine and grab for the morning paper. -Then I look at the obituary page. If my name is not on it, I get up.

-To be or not to be...for that is the question.

-Plan your work, work on your plan and your plan will work.
-In the book of life, the answers are not in the back.
  Posted on November 22, 2008 06:57
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and here is mine

For You

For you my skies no longer stand dark,
Long into the hours of day
For you my heart has sung right from our start

With you my mind stands clear
Glimpsing no longer through the haze
As long as I can call you my dear
Love no longer seems a maze

For you my skies no longer stand dark,
Long into the hours of day
For you my heart has sung right from our start

With you my rapids slow to a calm
Love’s no longer a flowing river
You fix my wound’s with loving balm
It no longer stands, joyful and bitter
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 06:58
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Dang nice one

Now a friendship kind of poem:

Sometimes they come, sometimes they pass
Your friends will stay if you don't betray or lie

Or leave them behind
Just put this on your mind

A friend is what you need
To succeed in this life

In this world were you can't live you can't breath
Life will be unfair but your friend will be there

To give you hope, and faith
And a path that is right to take

This will lead you to your dreams
That you never thought would come true

That is being friends forever with you.
Sometimes you forget

What your friend has done
You just stab them in the back

And leave them behind
But when it comes to them

And they don't do the same
You just turn your back

And do it again
But one sunny day

You will be alone
Then you will realize

that all you once had is gone.
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Credit goes to Juan a great GFXer.

-I wake up every morning at nine and grab for the morning paper. -Then I look at the obituary page. If my name is not on it, I get up.

-To be or not to be...for that is the question.

-Plan your work, work on your plan and your plan will work.
-In the book of life, the answers are not in the back.
  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:00
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this is the closest i come to writing about friendship but i'll give it a go

You’ll Never Know

If I’m sorry you’ll never know
Cause from your life you’ve severed me so
Severed me so I may never harm again
Severed me so I may never be a friend

If the point was to hurt me back
Then of pain there is no lack
There is no lack of pain in my eyes
There is no lack of pain to darken my skies

From your life you’ve severed me
And from our life I’m haunted
Happy couples I only see
And from them I’m daunted

The memory of starlit days
Paints the world of grey
As the colors of a memory age
And the painting starts to fade

If I’m sorry you’ll never know,
Cause from your life you’ve severed me so

Timothy Weiermann (yes this is me)
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:02
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Darn it your good at this now one of my good ones:

I hide behind a mask
You can't see my face
Looking at first glance
I'm in a happy place
The truth is, that's a lie
But you can't really tell
that in the back of my mind
I think the world should rot in hell
What's the point of living
If we are all going to die
What's the point of being happy
If in the end we're going to cry
But this is something no one sees
This is something no one knows
And yet deep inside of me
This feeling of hatred grows
So even though this mask reveals a happy side of me,
I use the mask as a shield to look at what others can never see.

Beat that!
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Credit goes to Juan a great GFXer.

-I wake up every morning at nine and grab for the morning paper. -Then I look at the obituary page. If my name is not on it, I get up.

-To be or not to be...for that is the question.

-Plan your work, work on your plan and your plan will work.
-In the book of life, the answers are not in the back.
  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:05
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#11
here then

Stolen From The Sun

The light in our hearts,
Is stolen from the moon
Scarred thorough with the marks
Of failing attempts to woo

Seeking for love,
Rising again
Fleeing like a dove
Yet returning like a friend

Stolen from the sun
Our joyous days are
But for eternal light
You’ll have to seek far

Seeking that peace,
The bliss given to few
All the pain would cease,
Without me giving it to you

Stealing from the stars
Stealing their eternal light
Hiding our scars
Praying for what might

Praying for what might be
Praying for what we’ve sought to seek

The light in our hearts,
Is stolen like the moon
Scarred thorough with the marks
Of failed attempts to woo

Timothy Weiermann


and for the next here's a challenge, write a quatrain, only a 4 line poem, here's mine

As I lay beneath the trees
Remembering what was you and me
The welling tears caress my face
As I begin to forget a lover’s embrace
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:05
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#12
there's something wrong in here

who decides who wins?
obviously, neither the 2 of you

and i could blow you 2 away with any of my poems
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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:06
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Ok:

Water in a faucet,
like poetry on the mind.
Hope is there when you turn a tap,
but the source has been refined.
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Credit goes to Juan a great GFXer.

-I wake up every morning at nine and grab for the morning paper. -Then I look at the obituary page. If my name is not on it, I get up.

-To be or not to be...for that is the question.

-Plan your work, work on your plan and your plan will work.
-In the book of life, the answers are not in the back.
  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:07
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true make a new topic and post one of u best poems and make a poll for wich is best and let da ppl decide

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  Posted on November 22, 2008 07:07
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Quote by Harion
there's something wrong in here

who decides who wins?
obviously, neither the 2 of you

and i could blow you 2 away with any of my poems

we can either decide between ourselves using mutual respect
or we can do a few to determine worth then set 2 up for judging

also....i find that highly unlikely
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