...::::Careless Thoughts Gallery::::...~Takeru89/Zhao_Yun

Zhao_Yun Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 2000 Joined on: December 1, 2007

#1 ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Unseen Moonlight The moonlight screams in the night, screaming for freedom of light, pointing at the stars that have lost their grace, forcing to hurry before its too late, because the fog is getting stronger, it is getting a wall without trust, without feelings in this nightmare; in a grave of mortality, stars are falling but we can't see them, the fog is too strong for our measure, we lose the light that protected us, now we are covered in bloodstained lust, a coat of the darkness which lasts to last, exists to survive anger, to stay dead. Lost Call me nameless, 'Cause no one knows my name, Call me fearless, 'Cause i went through cries of pain. Don't try to help me, I'm already lost in eclipse, No one can see, How i fought against it. Darkest Corner When you are down, you can count on me, When you are lost in darkness, Know i be there to set you free. I Can't Win The old days are gone, We all have changed, Now I'm left outside alone, I can't be anymore inane. We chose different ways, Our joint fate is faded, Past colors became gray, But you don't even hate it. All is buried in oblivion, Your affection disapeared, And left me without Yin, Thats why i can not win. Our Past-Future Can you see the broken sky, The sky who was so high, So high no one dared to see, Now they dare but for what fee? So mankind chose their future, A future not ment to be sutured, This suture will still grow fast, Too fast to let mankind ever last. This way is really walked too long, Too long to not make it wrong, Wrong because of the departed past, The past which still lasts. The End See the stars who shines upon, Facing the ground on my front, It hurts!,It hurts!, those words, My worst!, My worst! Trying to reach the mountains top, But my wings won't open and i drop, It hurts!,It hurts!, those tears, My fear!!, My fear!! Running as fast as i can towards the light, Sharpness ends my life, without a fight, It hurts!!!, It hurts!!! those reclusiveness, My lonelyness!!!, My Lonelyness!!!, it ends? Your Way When you feel your wings are broken, When the night don't becomes the day, When the door is closed not open, When your colorfull life turns to grey. Then let your doomed soul be joined, Then your wings are going to be healed, Then your immeasurable pain can be avoided, Then your greyness is going to be sealed. So gain your power to reveal your soul, Don't try to look back your lost way, Go towards the light, don't lose again control, And don't forget where you stay. Revealed by a lost soul: My Poem My heart is broken, The sky is falling, Lonlyness is calling, Hope don't even gives me a token. The world has no sence, Everything is a fence, Nothing's the same, I think my heart is going to get insane. Sadness, Fear and Lonlyness, A spear pierced my heart, I shed a tear for this crazy thing called love. Too Late Walking through my damned life, Try to see it from other sights, Just to see what went wrong, To know where i really belong. Walking the whole way back and for, Just to find the right source, Where all begun to fade away, Just to find the place to stay. But i can not find the place, It seems like the craziest race, So no way to know my own fate, Its just a bit too late. The One 2 different sides fighting within me, Caught by both sides to feel never free, Living in 2 worlds and belonging to none, Thats my fate thats why i call myself: The one. Questions Thinking about life, Is that what i do right? Am i walking the true way? Or did i already start to stay? Try to think about all I've done, Is my work leading me to sun? Am i near my felicitousness? Or am i already caught in darkness? The anwsers can be found with me! *Just let your soul be forever free*, *Take your innerself out of you*, *And you will know the truth of you*. Life Life is filled with anger, Everyone a stranger, Never reached goals, One under billion souls. Fighting from day to day, Searching a place to stay, There is no sense, no fate, Not even the key to the gate. Blind because its invisible, Deaf because its unbearable, Soundless and so never heard, Thats the way life goes absurd. llllllllllll.......................:::::::::::::::::My Poem Gallery:::::::::::::::::......................llllllllllll lllllllllll......................:::::::::::::::::My Drawing Gallery:::::::::::::::::.....................lllllllllll super duper upper pawnsome sig made from the other Tak also known as Takachi Member of Kenzoku

Zhao_Yun Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 2000 Joined on: December 1, 2007

#2 Destiny Nothing seems to move right, Its just an inner fight, Me vs Me, To set my true soul free, To fly with the light of life, Than it will end here from my tears. Why my heart is split? Why i hate that i love? Why my soul reaches for heaven? Why my body stays in hell? I'm totally lost, So damn near but not touchable! So lovely but not acceptable! My mind is named sorrow! My strength is called pain! What hurts the most? I think i know which way destiny build for me, But i can't accept this destiny! But what to do? She will never hear me. Contrition I loved us, I loved our trust, I loved you. Forgot about love rules. I was such a fool, I wasn't there, I was nowhere. I made mistakes, I made our grave, I made it all wrong. Hate our sad songs. I hate that you gone, I hate to be lost, I hate that this are my costs. I regret. The Way to Love A flash of lightning hit my heart, Totally caught by lovely deeds, Cute grace showed me truly art, But this lost love raised my needs. Hard to find the sweetest grace , But the hardest need to be solve, The search is worth to see her face, Just to find the way in her love. Love is surely a crazy game, But you need to follow her way, Even if you must suffer pain, Destiny will lead you to ray. But thats still a long way to go.... Fly I am flying, Everything full of joy, My heart keeps crying, But that don't matter at all. My wings spread to fly, Every move just hurts, But its worth to get that high, And to listen angel words. No one knows what you feel, Its a secret that is deep, Its just your heart who sees, Its your love with his needs. Cover yourself in Love, And let your wings shine, You will never get enough, Of the life sweetest wine. Fly away, Follow the love you miss, Your heart will always stay, To wait for the real kiss Chase Shadows of affection, Everywhere i gaze, Never known reactions, All just bitter chase. I try runing away, Nowhere i can hide, It looks like i am fey, There is no more right. Light has become darkness, Hope has become fear, All gone of my frankness, No one out there near. Where? Where to look? Where to feel? Where to reach? Tears made brooks. Blood faded. Water is cold. All is lost. Nothing real. Life's a crush. I am blind. My heart stoned. Hopes can't leach. TIme of Justice A time of red flowers, of flying dreams, we were like 2 towers, unbreakable, unhumanly powers, recreating. But time changes unpredictably, time can even turn love into pain. It was a lovely time, but went away, love became any crime, got imprisoned, thrown into dirty grime, executed. Let me go Keep choking a loving heart, still stay innocent, your hands: cover of the dark, murder in the night. Tied up from crestfallen love, deceived by your eyes. Pain i suffered; not enough, twinges are rising. Release me from rain, disjoint my glacially chains, I won't talk in vain. Can you promise me? To let go and let love be? To set my heart free? Cear View The hardest pain needs to be broken, rivers of sorrow have to dry, cold wind is made of oaken, fire is ment to shine, earths are bound to quake, ore has to age, hope is sake, blinding truth. The Flood Streets are awash, the rain chases, trying to hide. Runing to you, hope to be safe and to feel warm. Wait i forgot, you caused the rain, you froze my soul. My heart gives up, I guess i drown, I will die here. ailuJ Adorable eyes, Endearing smile, The whole world a lie, You: the true nile. My heart is taken, My soul is yours, Nothing can break it, One gorgeous course. I can't admit it. I know that he ... wouldn't forgive me. I'll disable it. My darkest fight. Love doesn't need light. Language Once upon a time there was a father of three kids. His name was Latin, his first son was called English. English was pretty eloquent, kind and polite, timid but smart, unsure about his existence. Latin's second son was called Spanish. Español estaba elocuente, fogoso y fuerte, mimoso pero cerril, partido en su existencia. Latin's third son was called German. Deutsch war ziemlich eloquent, groß und tüchtig, sturr aber lieb, gepaltet durch die Existenz. Before Latin died he told his children: " ~ Linguae confidimus ~ - In language we trust - But we need to trust together. " ... and they lived happily ever after. llllllllllll.......................:::::::::::::::::My Poem Gallery:::::::::::::::::......................llllllllllll lllllllllll......................:::::::::::::::::My Drawing Gallery:::::::::::::::::.....................lllllllllll super duper upper pawnsome sig made from the other Tak also known as Takachi Member of Kenzoku

Zhao_Yun Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 2000 Joined on: December 1, 2007

#3 The Pain of Truth You fly to the sky, To see what everyone hides, That is how it dies. Dream-Heart My dream found a heart, A heart not living apart, Without relief sought. What makes you weak Sorrow and sadness, A way a bit too reckless, It feels just feckless. The Origin The wind splits the sea, The earth is falling on me, The fire shows free. Vain Pain crushing my heart, I look back to lost effort, We became a bort. Fall Apart Silver rain falls down, Try to gain the bottom ground, Just insane, the sound. Lonely Struggle Left outside alone, Darkness is my only home, Fighting on my own. Génjitsu The wind of chaos, Wins brightness for darkness sake, Light and dark: grey. Cold Frozen by shadows, Hearts split their pain at snow, Ice changes our soul. Our New World Winter time has come, Everything has became cold, We will freeze to death. The Game of Life Cold winds despair clouds, The sky tries to reach the stars, Trying, not reaching. A Lions Hauteur Fallen lion cries, All efforts got no meaning, The lion screaming. llllllllllll.......................:::::::::::::::::My Poem Gallery:::::::::::::::::......................llllllllllll lllllllllll......................:::::::::::::::::My Drawing Gallery:::::::::::::::::.....................lllllllllll super duper upper pawnsome sig made from the other Tak also known as Takachi Member of Kenzoku

Yuuki Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 586 Joined on: April 30, 2008

#4 first post and i gaf of reserving,...

swantontojeff Rank: member Forum Rank: Chuunin Posts: 398 Joined on: December 1, 2007

#5 Kinda sad-ish.. i like though. Noob gfx ________________ D rank missions. All completed. C rank missions. All completed. A rank missions. All completed:amused S rank missions. All completed Shippuden missions. 9 completed.

orochimaru768 Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1737 Joined on: July 3, 2007

#6 Are you done with reserving Tak? (SWT) And they are nicey It has begun.

Zhao_Yun Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 2000 Joined on: December 1, 2007

#7 yeah i'm done with reserving o.ö llllllllllll.......................:::::::::::::::::My Poem Gallery:::::::::::::::::......................llllllllllll lllllllllll......................:::::::::::::::::My Drawing Gallery:::::::::::::::::.....................lllllllllll super duper upper pawnsome sig made from the other Tak also known as Takachi Member of Kenzoku

orochimaru768 Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1737 Joined on: July 3, 2007

#8 Zhao_Yun wrote: yeah i'm done with reserving o.ö Make more o.o It has begun.

Zhao_Yun Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 2000 Joined on: December 1, 2007

#9 i made a little banner for my showcase and will edit my potw poem o.ö llllllllllll.......................:::::::::::::::::My Poem Gallery:::::::::::::::::......................llllllllllll lllllllllll......................:::::::::::::::::My Drawing Gallery:::::::::::::::::.....................lllllllllll super duper upper pawnsome sig made from the other Tak also known as Takachi Member of Kenzoku

sasuke_50 Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 5096 Joined on: March 31, 2008

#10 omg !you touched my heart:cry

Zhao_Yun Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 2000 Joined on: December 1, 2007

#11 sasuke_50 wrote: omg !you touched my heart:cry hope thats the only thing i touched o.ö llllllllllll.......................:::::::::::::::::My Poem Gallery:::::::::::::::::......................llllllllllll lllllllllll......................:::::::::::::::::My Drawing Gallery:::::::::::::::::.....................lllllllllll super duper upper pawnsome sig made from the other Tak also known as Takachi Member of Kenzoku

Zhao_Yun Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 2000 Joined on: December 1, 2007

#12 *bump* and gonna try to make a better banner and to put more structure in this showcase o.ö llllllllllll.......................:::::::::::::::::My Poem Gallery:::::::::::::::::......................llllllllllll lllllllllll......................:::::::::::::::::My Drawing Gallery:::::::::::::::::.....................lllllllllll super duper upper pawnsome sig made from the other Tak also known as Takachi Member of Kenzoku

Zhao_Yun Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 2000 Joined on: December 1, 2007

#13 *bump* Ok i added a new banner and made it all more structered o.Ö hope now my poems are more readabele o.Ö llllllllllll.......................:::::::::::::::::My Poem Gallery:::::::::::::::::......................llllllllllll lllllllllll......................:::::::::::::::::My Drawing Gallery:::::::::::::::::.....................lllllllllll super duper upper pawnsome sig made from the other Tak also known as Takachi Member of Kenzoku

Dreaming_Forever Rank: member Forum Rank: Chuunin Posts: 422 Joined on: October 11, 2008

#14 Wow, lovely showcase! Lonely Struggle Left outside alone, Darkness is my only home, Fighting on my own. This short poem was the best though. It's been awhile.

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