Friendships


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  Posted on November 15, 2008 01:41
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(inspired by a dear friend, and a girl)
(hope you enjoy)

Friendships are made
Friendships are lost
But the ones I have
I hold so close
Fearing that if I don’t hold on
They will slip away
Like a tree in the fall
Clinging to its leaves
Hoping that spring will come soon
A few leaves break away
So do a few pieces of my heart
But as the spring comes
New leaves grow
Friendships are found


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  Posted on November 15, 2008 01:42
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wow that was deep

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  Posted on November 15, 2008 01:42
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BRAVO>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>BRAVA
  Posted on November 15, 2008 01:43
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nice that was depth
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  Posted on November 15, 2008 01:43
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This was ok. i guess.
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  Posted on November 15, 2008 01:43
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I liked it
  Posted on November 15, 2008 01:43
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Nice.

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  Posted on November 15, 2008 01:44
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9/10. Very nice sonnet.

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  Posted on November 15, 2008 01:44
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yeah i heard that one already .

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  Posted on November 15, 2008 01:44
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is better than the other
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  Posted on November 15, 2008 01:44
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good job
  Posted on November 15, 2008 01:45
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thanx for the comments

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  Posted on November 15, 2008 13:01
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It's a good poem (in fact, its a great poem) and I don't want to burst you bubble, but sonnets, by definition, have to rhyme (I'm not saying "It doesn't rhyme, so its not a poem", I'm all in favour of free verse, but the sonnet, as a form, follows strict rules)

The most common rhyme scheme that I'm familiar with in sonnets is the Shakespearean sonnet, which rhymes

a-b-a-b, c-d-c-d, e-f-e-f, g-g

Although there are various other forms, such as the Italian sonnet etc, they all rhyme

But other than that, seriously, the poem's really good
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