Ari's Poem.


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  Posted on November 13, 2008 02:21
Shino*Girl
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How shrouded is your heart in darkness?
Is it corrupted in this spotlight?
Can I possibly know...?
I continue to walk down endless hallways
no more pain, is in my mind but it
burns in all areas of me
I no longer feel the need to live, but
that’s selfish living is a privilege I have earned
I’m naïve why have I thought life is easy?
Could I embrace all this pain?
Could I embrace all this deceit?
Could I embrace all of this dream?




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  Posted on November 13, 2008 02:23
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I feel like reading so I read.
Your poems are awshum ari! <3
  Posted on November 13, 2008 02:23
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Nice you should see some of my poems.

Also you would be a nice friend if were friends basically im asking wanna be friends.


8/10
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  Posted on November 13, 2008 02:24
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7.5/10So many poems o.o
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  Posted on November 13, 2008 02:24
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6/10.
Ehhh...It's okay i guess.
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  Posted on November 13, 2008 02:25
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Ur poems confuse my head

Don't worry its a compliment kinda

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  Posted on November 13, 2008 02:39
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Very Nice, i hope you make anothero new one, when you do PM ME, no seriously, PM ME WHEN YOU DO. :)
  Posted on November 13, 2008 02:41
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Hey nice one 8/10
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