Ari's Poem.


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  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:36
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I will wish to a star
a star shrouded in darkness
slowly dying
Simplistic things cannot be
wished upon, may I be lying
who knows?
Once again the bell tolls
upon this decaying land
stirring nothing but dust,
pain, and blood
But, surely I’ll hold
everything close to my own heart
even when time is dripping
away, and no stars are view
Soon let’s grasp each others
hands, and analyze
our mystifying wishes
and embrace each other
no matter how much pain we are in
Surely, if we try hard enough
a wish could come true
and this world of ours
could become a purer place




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It has a meaning I think.

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  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:37
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nice poem I like it
  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:37
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It has no meaning.
Its hawt. <3
  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:38
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Well, I started to not like it close to beginning because it was too emo sounding, but the farther I got, the better it got.

8/10.

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  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:38
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7/10
a few lines sound... broken apart like they should be seperated diff :O
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8/10..
I liked it..
Nice job..
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  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:39
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9/10 awsome


  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:39
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=o

I love it

10/10
  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:40
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8/10 Smexy Peom Ari :3
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  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:40
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Sound glad it sounded happierish at the end it was gonna make me depressed from the sadness x.x
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  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:40
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"Stirring nothing but dust"

Reminds me of the Waste Land, and I love the Waste Land :) Good job!
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  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:43
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10/10 thats cool

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  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:47
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that's so nice o.o'
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  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:48
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omg another famous ARI poem!!!!!100/10 I LOVE THE POEMS!!

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  Posted on November 14, 2008 20:08
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nice...XDXDXD






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