(::) Let Your Eyes Listen (::)

QBZRaikage10 Rank: member Forum Rank: Warm Cookie Posts: 2163 Joined on: June 3, 2007

#1 Let your eyes listen Let yours eyes listen, as the sky glistens. Birds whistlin. Bums trippin. Kids getting whippings. The scenery you see is impossibly cool . Splashes coming from the neighbors pool. Blocking the sound from your mind like a linebacker Letting your eyes listen... Now Watch..... Wrapped up in my hearing, Restoring to my sense of sight. Watching my surroundings. Looking for my groundings. Watching people bow down. Watching others juggle. Juggle what? Their lives, thats what. The families torn apart from drugs, liquor, and weed. The relationships broken up because of greed Friendships thrown away because of the Liars, Betrayers, And sneaks. Still listening with my eyes. Now i look to the sky, and I hear words from wise, clouds. Looking at bunnies, lions, and dinosaurs. Paying no attention to the whores In the front of me. Dropping to their knees. Turn my head three quarters, to somebody shorter, A caring auntie of 1, walking with her sisters daughter, And i notice my brother, pulling up with my mother. And i think to myself, I'm lucky to be covered. By a family that cares. Mother and father don't drink, smoke or shoot Lucky me. My friend's mom is a prostitute. Women have the power, but she only want the loot. And others can get their way because they're cute I treat my girls with utmost respect, Never overstep, yet, never neglect Never lay a hand on them. They're to good for that. To be smacked, nah, never that. Then i see my friends walking up the street, And how cool we seem. Its like life's complete. Been together since we were in diapers. None of us liar's. Never would throw one another in the fire All of us loyal. All of us blunt, And upfront. I still cant hear, so I'm listening with my eyes. Then I realize, I cant complain. I've got it made. Family, friends, and The love of my life Home and a phone, Can't be real, more like a Twilight zone But it must be, because I can hear... it With my eyes instead of my ears...shit. Clothes to wear, food to share, People who care. Now i can hear, I've listened with my eyes, Suddenly I see no profit in telling lies, Whispering goodbyes, when byes are never so Looked to the skies and see that Even though the other day I busted my kneecap Even though I failed my test I'm a good kid, and still they dont see that God loves me so.. Truly. Sometimes what you hear through ears are all lies Sometimes we just need to listen with our eyes. More freestylish then you're probably used to from me. ~QBZ Get Genesized Bitch.

Mata_Ratos Rank: member Forum Rank: Warm Cookie Posts: 2563 Joined on: January 12, 2008

#2 I read the title. That doesn't seem physically possible. Biggest failure ever, by me. | Best vid ever, because I said so. | Epic, so epic... Quote by fissp hey all of u fuck u, mata-ratos is right and all of u are bitch ~Zomg, I gots a topic closed by THEE luapman himself~ | Bob the builder FC o.o | I feel no shame

fireproof Rank: member Forum Rank: Warm Cookie Posts: 1934 Joined on: January 14, 2007

#3 I reed the 1st part I'll bookmark and read it later

ChibiiChann Rank: member Forum Rank: Snowman Posts: 1033 Joined on: October 9, 2008

#4 Smarterest poem evars/. ::Intermediate GFXer,Gimp 2.6 user:: ::cool song o.o:: Untitled clan page

press_man Rank: member Forum Rank: Warm Cookie Posts: 2410 Joined on: August 29, 2007

#5 i would say 6/10 but its pretty long and i like end so 8/10 nice dude. FallenLegacy

wilderbeast Rank: member Forum Rank: Snowman Posts: 910 Joined on: May 16, 2008

#6 I read the first part to but i have a short attention span lol tht of about 65 secounds

zdninja_13 Rank: member Forum Rank: Candy Cane Posts: 5617 Joined on: July 31, 2007

#7 Quote by Mata_Ratos I read the title. That doesn't seem physically possible. Not physically but it means to stfu and watch carefully. Let ur eyes be your eyes. Hi q. ur not in the chat. *is gonna read poem now* SWITCH EDIT: as always. ur peoms bring tears to my eyes. 8/10 q.. u make me proud. (-------------/---------------------.:::Genesis Lambda:::.---------------/--------------------) Quote by Seer of the People The capacity to learn is a gift. The ability to learn is a skill. The willingness to learn is a choice.

jim8794 Rank: member Forum Rank: Gleeful Child Posts: 497 Joined on: June 3, 2007

#8 i like it it was long but i was ok ...::(Sig's made by me):.:(Sexy GFXer):.:(lvl 38):.:(streak +18):.:(clanless)::... ::::::::::::::::::::::::

wilderbeast Rank: member Forum Rank: Snowman Posts: 910 Joined on: May 16, 2008

#9 nevermind i read it all anyways .... wow 10/10 ur good

QBZRaikage10 Rank: member Forum Rank: Warm Cookie Posts: 2163 Joined on: June 3, 2007

#10 Quote by Mata_Ratos I read the title. That doesn't seem physically possible. I dont usually report people, but I'd really appreciate if you didnt spam my topics. Quote by wilderbeast I read the first part to but i have a short attention span lol tht of about 65 secounds You seem kinda noobish, so.. Get Genesized Bitch.

sutari_toru Rank: member Forum Rank: Snow Hare Posts: 184 Joined on: July 4, 2008

#11 Quote by fireproof I reed the 1st part I'll bookmark and read it later same here Quote by obiki01 sutari you're an iddiot.lmao you always make me laugh

Master_Clazz Rank: member Forum Rank: Snow Hare Posts: 79 Joined on: May 27, 2008

#12 Wow It was Good You have a Gift my friend 9/10ish Alts For The Win Play With Me And I React Like The Army

NLG-loves-TMILL Rank: member Forum Rank: Fruitcake Posts: 10 Joined on: November 10, 2008

#13 awesome! bravo..... 10/10

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