(::) Let Your Eyes Listen (::)


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  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:15
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Let your eyes listen
Let yours eyes listen, as the sky glistens.
Birds whistlin.
Bums trippin.
Kids getting whippings.
The scenery you see is impossibly cool .
Splashes coming from the neighbors pool.
Blocking the sound from your mind like a linebacker
Letting your eyes listen...

Now Watch.....

Wrapped up in my hearing,
Restoring to my sense of sight.
Watching my surroundings.
Looking for my groundings.
Watching people bow down.
Watching others juggle.
Juggle what?
Their lives, thats what.
The families torn apart from drugs, liquor, and weed.
The relationships broken up because of greed
Friendships thrown away because of the
Liars,
Betrayers,
And sneaks.

Still listening with my eyes.
Now i look to the sky, and I hear words from wise, clouds.
Looking at bunnies, lions, and dinosaurs.
Paying no attention to the whores
In the front of me.
Dropping to their knees.
Turn my head three quarters, to somebody shorter,
A caring auntie of 1, walking with her sisters daughter,
And i notice my brother, pulling up with my mother.
And i think to myself, I'm lucky to be covered.
By a family that cares.
Mother and father don't drink, smoke or shoot
Lucky me. My friend's mom is a prostitute.
Women have the power, but she only want the loot.
And others can get their way because they're cute
I treat my girls with utmost respect,
Never overstep, yet, never neglect
Never lay a hand on them.
They're to good for that.
To be smacked, nah, never that.
Then i see my friends walking up the street,
And how cool we seem.
Its like life's complete.
Been together since we were in diapers.
None of us liar's. Never would throw one another in the fire
All of us loyal. All of us blunt,
And upfront.
I still cant hear, so I'm listening with my eyes.
Then I realize,
I cant complain.
I've got it made.
Family, friends, and
The love of my life
Home and a phone,
Can't be real, more like a Twilight zone
But it must be, because I can hear... it
With my eyes instead of my ears...shit.
Clothes to wear, food to share,
People who care.
Now i can hear,
I've listened with my eyes,
Suddenly I see no profit in telling lies,
Whispering goodbyes, when byes are never so
Looked to the skies and see that
Even though the other day I busted my kneecap
Even though I failed my test
I'm a good kid, and still they dont see that
God loves me so..
Truly.
Sometimes what you hear through ears are all lies
Sometimes we just need to listen with our eyes.


More freestylish then you're probably used to from me.

~QBZ
  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:16
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I read the title.
That doesn't seem physically possible.
  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:17
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I reed the 1st part I'll bookmark and read it later

  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:17
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Smarterest poem evars/.
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  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:18
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i would say 6/10 but its pretty long and i like end so 8/10 nice dude.
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  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:18
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I read the first part to but i have a short attention span lol tht of about 65 secounds
  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:19
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Quote by Mata_Ratos
I read the title.
That doesn't seem physically possible.
Not physically but it means to stfu and watch carefully. Let ur eyes be your eyes.

Hi q. ur not in the chat.

*is gonna read poem now* SWITCH

EDIT: as always. ur peoms bring tears to my eyes. 8/10 q.. u make me proud.
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The ability to learn is a skill.
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  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:19
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i like it it was long but i was ok

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  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:20
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nevermind i read it all anyways .... wow 10/10 ur good
  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:20
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Quote by Mata_Ratos
I read the title.
That doesn't seem physically possible.


I dont usually report people, but I'd really appreciate if you didnt spam my topics.

Quote by wilderbeast
I read the first part to but i have a short attention span lol tht of about 65 secounds


You seem kinda noobish, so..
  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:21
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Quote by fireproof
I reed the 1st part I'll bookmark and read it later
same here
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sutari you're an iddiot.lmao you always make me laugh
  Posted on November 13, 2008 01:24
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Wow It was Good You have a Gift my friend
9/10ish
  Posted on November 13, 2008 12:42
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awesome! bravo..... 10/10