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Posted on November 12, 2008 01:42

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This story was made by ME. NO ONE else made this. All of the content below was not taken or ripped in ANY way. On a side note: I have bookmarked this, and if I see anything in any way too much alike with this storyline, I will make a note of it. Enjoy, and happy reading.

Summary: 2012, the year it all came into fruition. The foreseen apocalypse was brought to be true, as a nuclear war broke out on December 23rd, at 24:00 hours exactly, leading to the most radiation and bloodshed known to mankind. All the survivors were among people in bomb shelters, protecting them from radiation and death, and likely had a natural-born immunity (see any apocalyptic movie for more information on 'natural-born immunities'.) to the radiation, which was rare, and in the thought they were the only people alive, they went utterly insane. The bunch that didn't go insane, homicidal, or both, were in Europe, usually Russia or Germany. A Russian war veteran who wasn't noticed much, although he was, in his own way, a genius, was among those who went insane. He went insane from the inside, and hid it. This man, Alular Wright, went to his homeland, Lithuania, as a priest, and preached to Lithuania of a utopia, and attempted to convince them that he was the sparkle of hope. He took it over and formed an army, which would destroy any country that denied him as a leader of the utopia, which was not what he'd promised. He promised a war-free world, and that his army would dissolve after the dream had been realized, but his "utopia" was in his eyes something that if his subjects disobeyed him, they were to be executed. Two and only two of his soldiers found this out. Josef McGovern, a German man who had hated the idea of a utopia in the first place, had served in his army to get close and assassinate Alular, found out the devious man's plans during his first attempt to murder him, and aborted the tactic immediately so he could find a way to execute Alular without getting the death-sentence and having a follower continue his 'dreams'. The other man, Jonathan Richardson, an Irish man, who was hypnotized at first like thousands of others, but upon meeting Josef, he found that Josef spoke the truth, so they fled into uncharted areas. They fled to a major bombing site, Hiroshima, Japan, in any transportation possible. Although, they didn't plan on going to Hiroshima, the place where survivors were insane, homicidal, or both, so it was a surprise to them.

Chapter 1; Part 1: The journey

"Dimmit Jonathan! This is Hiroshima!!! We're dead meat if some maniacs want a piece of us!" Said Josef, angrily. Jonathan sighed, and said, "I know, I know...let’s just keep goin'..." and they continued to walk down what seemed like a graveyard of fallen life. Corpses scattered the ground, and it felt as though someone was holding a knife to their necks. Josef was lightly gripping his knife, as they had left behind everything they had left. Jonathan was somehow calmly walking, looking at the red and black sky, as if he was a child, and saw a toy up in the sky. "I wonder what Alular is going to say when we get him with his pants down...will he kill himself? Or will he take the knife into hell, like a man?" Said Jonathan, almost grinning. Josef, clearly aggravated, yelled out loud, "I DON'T CARE IF HE DRINKS POISONED APPLE JUICE! I JUST WANT HIM DEAD!!!" as they continued walking upon their journey, but something was amiss...something was lurking...watching...and it was in high numbers, ready to kill, and clearly insane.

End of Chapter one, Part one.

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Posted on November 12, 2008 01:44

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Posted on November 12, 2008 01:45

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Oh no not 2012!! That's the year I'm graduating!!!!

<--- freshmen a.k.a. fresh meat lol

Posted on November 12, 2008 01:46

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thats alot of reading
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Posted on November 12, 2008 01:47

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Posted on November 12, 2008 01:48

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Interesting very interesting, but when you're doing the chapters.

You could do it like this :

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and so on it makes your writing look less jumbled up. Anyways, nice job.

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Posted on November 12, 2008 01:49

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Oh and yes it was a pretty good piece of literature I guess

Posted on November 12, 2008 01:50

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Isnt 2012 the year the world ends? o.0

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Posted on November 12, 2008 20:44

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I've decided to keep track off this by updating it as I see fit. Chapter 2 should be done and revised by tomorrow.

ANY AND ALL SUGGESTIONS ARE GREATLY APPRECIATED.

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Posted on November 13, 2008 22:39

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Due to an upcoming exam at my school, I must study. Chapter 2 has been completed but must be revised. The next releasement should be Saturday OR Sunday. Sorry for the prolongment, I don't have much choice but to study write now

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Posted on November 15, 2008 15:10

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Still with all the 2012 crap. I hope it really happens so we really all do die. But....I have to see the preps die first. My happy ending counts dodgammit! <.<

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Posted on November 15, 2008 15:14

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Posted on November 16, 2008 20:23

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Great job you are talented. I love the idea about radiation (it is just like chernobil).
HA, the year 2012 is the year my country i suposed to join EU

i wonder if Alular is going to extermenate the jews like Hitler did, cause exterminating jews never becomes an old subject.

just keep it up and good luck on the exam!!

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Posted on November 22, 2008 02:22

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I finally got some time on my hands; here is chapter 1 part 2!

Chapter 1 Part 2 section 1; Assault

Low, dark, and disturbing murmuring clouded the air as Jonathan and Josef stammered their paths out of the hell-on-earth infected territory, but they kept along, ignoring it, although it came closer and closer. "This is shit! Let's just give them a knife to the brains Jo'!" whispered Jonathan fiercely. Although inside Josef wanted to, he could not hurt another human being after the apocalypse. The horror of seeing his family die, the terror of watching the explosions engulf everything he loved only about a year or so ago, he had decided to expel violence from his life, and take Alular down with the power of truth, which forced a reply, "What makes us different from Alular if we do this to people who survived? He's spreading hell in the form of redemption and peace. I don't see the difference. Violence IS hell in the image of redemption and the only way to cause peace. You can attack them, but good luck doing it alone." This, as most things did, caused Jonathan to hold back, but only for a moment, for his aggravation finally overcame him. Jonathan quickly charged in the direction of the murmuring, but it vanished and reappeared in a whole new area, almost as if it was an illusion...

Not a really long part/section, but most of these sections will be considerably short. Next section should be around soon!

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