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20 vote(s) since November 10, 2008 01:30

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Posted on November 10, 2008 01:30

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Some people think that when it comes to suicide, a bullet to the brain is the best way. It’s quick, painless, and easy.

And that’s where they’re wrong.

Dead wrong.

The one factor people forget to add into the equation is time. Time. It takes time to pull a trigger, it takes time for a gun to fire, it takes time for a bullet to enter your skull, it takes time for the bullet to reach your brain, sending your consciousness into oblivion, sending you into oblivion.

What is expected to take less than a second, in fact, can take a very long time when that second happens to be your last.

Like crossing into a black hole, you never really make it into the black hole itself, the sheer astral force reaches beyond the laws of physics and pulls time itself into infinicy.

So takes the time of a bullet reaching the brain.

It is painful. Bullets hurt. A bullet bursting through the roof of your mouth, through your skull… hurts. Some consider the pain. Most don’t, but some do. They perceive it to be short lived. They perceive it to equal out to less pain than living with an abusive step-parent, or less pain than a wife walking out on you, or less pain than even surviving adolescence. And that is their mistake.

If the last thing in this universe you do is a mistake, it probably would have been better had you not existed at all.

After a while you begin to grow accustomed to it. Sometimes you wonder how you’re even able to feel it at all. Then you remember that’s a silly question. It will never be answered. It can never be answered.

You don’t see. You don’t hear. You don’t smell, or taste. But you feel.

And that’s all you feel.

I know my advice will never reach you. I know it will never save you. But I feel better knowing I said it. Or did I say it? I don’t remember. But I feel better. Not much, but a little. Even a little bit can amount to a lot when the timeframe is forever.

So please, I politely offer my advice, take it and treat it as the best advice ever given.

Don’t pull the trigger..

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Just something that sparked into my head about a day ago..
Comment if you want..

Dont want your negative thoughts posted here..
Just comment on the short..

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Posted on November 10, 2008 01:32

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Well, that's interesting good comparisons and word usage.

It's good...really good.

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Posted on November 10, 2008 01:34

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ya never tought of it tht way

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Posted on November 10, 2008 01:34

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good comparisons

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Posted on November 10, 2008 01:35

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okkkkk i guess sooo

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Posted on November 10, 2008 01:36

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Whoaaa... O____O;;
Yu should be like, given an award or something for writing that.. .___.'
Honestly.. i think yu can, and probably already did, save a lotta people already.
*high five?* D:

Posted on November 10, 2008 01:37

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If your dumb enough to pull the trigger that's their problem.

Posted on November 10, 2008 01:48

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lol nice lmao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111

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Posted on November 10, 2008 01:53

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Wow, that was GOOD. Seriously, you could do something with this.

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Posted on November 10, 2008 01:53

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Wow, that was GOOD. Seriously, you could do something with this.

something like what..?

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Posted on November 10, 2008 02:12

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That was awesome :O

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Posted on November 10, 2008 02:47

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very nicely written.

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Posted on November 11, 2008 20:45

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lol nice lmao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111

there nothing to lmoa about in that dude, i know the precise angle hes coming from, the thought of pulling the trigger all too many times, so i understand him completely

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Posted on November 12, 2008 00:59

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I seriously almost shed a tear from reading this, it's so friggin' good. It's like you just walked up to some suicidal man, looked him in the eye, and asked him "why?". This link is going in my signature, and never leaving, it's so good.

Thank you for actually posting something people can think about, not sit there and type "gtfo" or "noob". This is probably the best topic I've read on the NB forums.

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Posted on November 12, 2008 20:50

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Im glad you enjoyed it..

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