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press_man Rank: member Forum Rank: Warm Cookie Posts: 2410 Joined on: August 29, 2007

#1 just alittle poem hope you like. I'm feeling the tough but it gets no were im dying inside and i feel no air trying harder and harder to reach the top but fall in dispair climbing with passion but dying from sarrow wanting to live but having to die i feel no pain but i have to cry to cry out i must find the strengh to look behind scared i might die from a glance or even a peak of the eye i burn and not with fire Its so bad like getting fired I might die in the bed try not to cry my last word to the word not a farwell or good-bye just alittle letter telling how i died FallenLegacy

-xRenjix- Rank: member Forum Rank: Snowman Posts: 1322 Joined on: November 3, 2008

#2 5/10............. i have quit n-a ive got caught ban evading once again I quit all shops etc. u can find me on soul arena when its out with my user as -xrenjix- i love u all u cn still pm this accnt

mellovegaara Rank: member Forum Rank: Snow Angel Posts: 745 Joined on: July 6, 2008

#3 Woh.......AWESOME <----Rczrczreal

spazzymacademia Rank: member Forum Rank: Fruitcake Posts: 8 Joined on: February 19, 2008

#4 i like the beginning and the ending, but i think the middle is a lil disjointed uh... 8 out of 10

Lady_Hinata Rank: member Forum Rank: Warm Cookie Posts: 2181 Joined on: July 30, 2008

#5 8/10 Char Collection||Cool siggy||Tsuru Clan|| Winner of CCC # 4 and Runner up of CCC # 11 ||Sig by Blake777||

Zhadow_King Rank: member Forum Rank: Warm Cookie Posts: 2354 Joined on: June 2, 2007

#6 If it was a rap, I would've rated it 10/10. But since it's a poem, I rate it 69/69. Fo' sho'. Kyokushinkai Warriors -

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