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 Topic: Blind-Combat Kunoichi: Sakaigo Kyomato
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Poll: So, what do you think of Kyomato so far?
76 vote(s) since July 5, 2007 20:16
I like her. (22) (29%)
Not good enough (23) (30%)
SEXYNOJUTSUSEXYNOJUTSUSEXYNO...what? (31) (41%)
  Posted on June 8, 2007 18:02
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#16
So... would you like me to verify her? Even if it's not perfect, I'm pretty sure the art qualifies.
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  Posted on June 8, 2007 19:39
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#17

Mission coming, I promise.
And yeah, thanks, please move it over, ChrisNemo
On another note, I can't believe people actually voted on that poll I'm amused.
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  Posted on June 10, 2007 06:56
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#18
Mission Posted and I'm looking for more opinated feedback, artwise. (Especially what images would you like replaced for something different.)

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  Posted on June 10, 2007 08:44
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#19
Hmm, the Virgin Sight looks nice, keep it as it is =D. Image distortion might need a bit more damage, but art looks ok in my eyes. Mind Stress... Ok, hard to tell what's going on the picture, but I guess it's part of it =P. This might need some reworking in art, but not as much as Illusionary Wall. It kind of looks... More distorted than necessary, otherwise, good one, definetily verifyable =).
EDIT: DOH! My brother needs to learn to log out >=I. This one was posted by Zar.


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  Posted on June 10, 2007 19:18
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#20
if you have too win 3 in a row with jiraiya doesnt the misiiion have to b legendary sannin
  Posted on June 10, 2007 21:31
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#21
Thanks Zar! Wow, really, thanks, that was a lot of feedback! Marry me, will you? And thank you again because you confirmed my suspicions about Illusionary Wall. This helps me a lot.

Yeah, you are right hyperjue... I put it between brackets because I was unsure of this about adding Jiraiya in the mission. Doesn't it look like too big a requirement for a fill-in character? :P
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  Posted on June 11, 2007 02:07
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#22
the art is good, but dont use too much motion blur.. it'll make people dizzy, although thats all up to you.

the skills are a bit overpowered, especially virgin sight. and mind stress costs TOO cheap for all its effects, i suggest removing one of its effects (remove chakra OR stun, not both) OR increasing its chakra cost.
  Posted on June 12, 2007 00:09
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#23
The funny thing is, some of those images are not -supposed- to be "blurred". Image Distortion, for example, or the Mission Pic. I'm flattered you could come by to comment, thanks Anchan! Also, thanks for input on the pm. Artwise, I'm reworking Virgin Sight and working on improving Mind Stress.

I think I'm leaving the organization of chakra, cooldowns, etc, to the admins.
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  Posted on June 12, 2007 00:18
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#24
how do you put a charactor on?
  Posted on June 14, 2007 18:28
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#25
Cooldown for virgin sight shoud be more
  Posted on June 15, 2007 04:36
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#26
mind stress is slightly underpowered.

virgin sight is overpowered.
  Posted on June 15, 2007 20:55
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#27
i like her good job need better pic though!
Do u dare to annoy me!!!!
  Posted on June 19, 2007 07:32
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#28
Merph. Any idea how I can make this:



turn into this:


?


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  Posted on June 19, 2007 11:02
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#29
r u using pscs2? layers, blur, smudge
My characters:

  Posted on June 20, 2007 01:36
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#30
Um. Good idea. Nice to see you back, renedave! =) I should comment in your new character in short^^
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