Blind-Combat Kunoichi: Sakaigo Kyomato

Unborn Rank: member Forum Rank: Genin Posts: 88 Joined on: February 18, 2007

#1 Please, leave a comment saying what you think. Ch Template v1...something. Background: The Tesurto bloodline traces back to a history of tragedy, a tradition of bloodline persecution and accidental killings. Unexperienced youngsters or elders victims of passion so killed each other off. And so, the most of the users has passed away. A clan is unexistent. The eldest of them gouged his eyes out to live peacefully amongst the villagers. This is because the power of the Tesurto is to kill... Nobody in her village would train Kyomato Sakaigo (was not let in at Ninja Academy), so she settled up towards other lands. She wears the land emblem tatooed on her left shoulder and a cloth is covering her eyes. Kyomato is more inexperienced than most shinobis her age; her studies centered in genjutsu and blind combat to allow her avoiding direct confrontation which could trigger the Tesurto. She is currently in search for a sensei, and to the date she is 16 years old. ~*~ MISSION Please, leave feedback, especially art-wise. --Alternative to Tesurto image-- --Alternatives for the Mission Pic-- Sexy no Jutsu: 12 votes Mind Stress (Jumping for Attack): 8 votes. Image Distortion Bigger: 4 votes. CUSTOM NINJAS MUST-CHECK: Saeri Neburo, Aoshingo Namida, Trickster Goji, Niro Satsu, Shirayuki Himeko, Hachirou (Anything by Madrigal), Kieru Haya & Kaishi Sakora! Sakaigo Kyomato: click.

ChrisNemo Rank: member Forum Rank: Kage Posts: 3607 Joined on: August 19, 2006

#2 I remember her! What happened? She got all ugly-fied! Or am I thinking of someone else...?^^;; Advice of the Week: Natural talent beats hard work every time. Nemo wants YOU to help him in his quest. Talking in 3rd person ftw. Witty line here.

Damie0-4 Rank: member Forum Rank: Chuunin Posts: 397 Joined on: November 29, 2006

#3 cool but change the name from virgin's sight to something else.

sasuke70496 Rank: member Forum Rank: Missing-Nin Posts: 2861 Joined on: June 2, 2007

#4 too powerful Ava and sig by omarkillgore

ChrisNemo Rank: member Forum Rank: Kage Posts: 3607 Joined on: August 19, 2006

#5 No she's not... Though I do think the stun+chakra destruction is a tad overpowerd... Anyway, would youlike me to move this right now or let it sit here for awhile getting suggestions? Advice of the Week: Natural talent beats hard work every time. Nemo wants YOU to help him in his quest. Talking in 3rd person ftw. Witty line here.

Unborn Rank: member Forum Rank: Genin Posts: 88 Joined on: February 18, 2007

#6 Quote by Damie0-4 cool but change the name from virgin's sight to something else. If you don't mind me asking, why? Is it suggestive? O.o You think it's good enough to be verified? ^^ Why, thank you ChrisNemo! It's the same for me, maybe wait a bit more? I'd like to see what else can people tell me. Thanks. But how, uglyfied? It's the same character; the previous version had badquality But if you have an idea that you liked from the previous version more, let me know. CUSTOM NINJAS MUST-CHECK: Saeri Neburo, Aoshingo Namida, Trickster Goji, Niro Satsu, Shirayuki Himeko, Hachirou (Anything by Madrigal), Kieru Haya & Kaishi Sakora! Sakaigo Kyomato: click.

ChrisNemo Rank: member Forum Rank: Kage Posts: 3607 Joined on: August 19, 2006

#7 He feels you're insulting him for having virgin eyes. wait, that would apply to me too then... ^^;;; nvm, scratch that, anyhoo... Wasn't she verified before? Didn't you read my sticky? Um... I guess I was thinking of a different character. Advice of the Week: Natural talent beats hard work every time. Nemo wants YOU to help him in his quest. Talking in 3rd person ftw. Witty line here.

Unborn Rank: member Forum Rank: Genin Posts: 88 Joined on: February 18, 2007

#8 No, she wasn't verified before. I would have PMed you otherwise. But, good, if it passed as a previously-verified character, it's a good sign ;) The name comes from the bloodline, with which she kills. Except, it should be Virgin Sight, not Virgin's Ouch! So... she is not attractive? I feel the pain in my ego. CUSTOM NINJAS MUST-CHECK: Saeri Neburo, Aoshingo Namida, Trickster Goji, Niro Satsu, Shirayuki Himeko, Hachirou (Anything by Madrigal), Kieru Haya & Kaishi Sakora! Sakaigo Kyomato: click.

ChrisNemo Rank: member Forum Rank: Kage Posts: 3607 Joined on: August 19, 2006

#9 Erm.... Just not my type, maybe...? ^^;; Advice of the Week: Natural talent beats hard work every time. Nemo wants YOU to help him in his quest. Talking in 3rd person ftw. Witty line here.

renedave Rank: member Forum Rank: Chuunin Posts: 450 Joined on: February 23, 2007

#10 i remember this character hehe... her profile pic is better now. i guess what makes Mind Stress a bit overpowered is because of the anti-Sharingan effect. it's prolly ok with just the stun+destroy chakra. Virgin's Sight is frightening even if it's only usable when she only has half of her health, i think you should add a random to the chakra requirement. imo she's really meant to annoy opponents with those set of skills... they have some sort of cohesion, i like it. My characters:

Unborn Rank: member Forum Rank: Genin Posts: 88 Joined on: February 18, 2007

#11 Yeah, they all make reference to image/sight, and thanks^^ I note the Sharingan thing and will most possibly remove it -- it looked like a pretty idea back at the time since Sharingan (aka, Sasuke) relies so heavily in eye contact. So I take the Sharingan thing and that should even it, and compared to Sakura's stun+damage I never thought Kyomato was too powerful. Also, adding random chakra to VirginSight, noted. Thanks, you have been most helpful :) CUSTOM NINJAS MUST-CHECK: Saeri Neburo, Aoshingo Namida, Trickster Goji, Niro Satsu, Shirayuki Himeko, Hachirou (Anything by Madrigal), Kieru Haya & Kaishi Sakora! Sakaigo Kyomato: click.

Ruduen Rank: member Forum Rank: Genin Posts: 169 Joined on: September 22, 2006

#12 It's probably the mouth. The hair and nose are OK, but the mouth just doesn't seem too feminine to me. But yeah, the character seems pretty good. The only thing that really worries me is Sight's low cooldown. I'd probably raise it to 2, since it's pretty inexpensive to work with. Of course, considering she has no defense raising move, below 50 health is a little bit of a liability, I'll admit. Well, I guess we'll find out. I think it's a pretty well balanced character overall. ... ... ... I have a part-time job as an NPC.

Zure Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 759 Joined on: June 2, 2007

#13 I like it! But you should decrease "Image Distortions" Cooldown to one and increase the damage done to the enemy to 25 (compare it with neji's skill: one bloodline, one random/ cooldown 1/ all enemys lose 15 health and neji's invulnerable for one round) Quote by DRN I have the typing speed of a Praying Mantis! ~{Where is your DRN quote!? Don't have one? Steal one!}~

Unborn Rank: member Forum Rank: Genin Posts: 88 Joined on: February 18, 2007

#14 Oh, thanks Ruduen! I would wish the main drawing would look more like a Naruto animation pic and I don't know if it's an issue with coloring, but I definitely have to improve the mouth thing. Thanks for the imput, Zure You are the first to tell me to boost up an attack O.o That one is similar to Neji or Chouji's (one red chakra / cooldown 3), but I was thinking Image Distortion should be an unimpressive attack, as opposed to Virgin Sight. (Hence ID's cooldown being higher than VS's.) It really should be tried out in game before I could really tell for sure if Kyomato is under- or over-powered. I think I'm more preoccupied with the art right now. CUSTOM NINJAS MUST-CHECK: Saeri Neburo, Aoshingo Namida, Trickster Goji, Niro Satsu, Shirayuki Himeko, Hachirou (Anything by Madrigal), Kieru Haya & Kaishi Sakora! Sakaigo Kyomato: click.

jake111 Rank: member Forum Rank: Academy Student Posts: 17 Joined on: August 9, 2006

#15 where is the mission Here start watching Katekyo Hitman Reborn http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vHbIgsgCZoo

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