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Posted on August 26, 2008 23:29

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I met someone
crazy enough
not tough
i spoke to her

Someone said she is lesbian
went on rampage
filled with rage
fell down to sleep

Yes the same girl
something in the way
the problem is she is gay
I love the feeling

I know no rythem but it sounds nice with my epic guitar

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"Peoms" is my current collection of poetry. I have two so far - "Document7" which I self-published (thirty six pages of epic win) and this one (Peoms)

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Posted on August 26, 2008 23:30

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itz ok keep trying(i tink it would sound gd w/ a guitar)

1st tut
2nd tut
3rd tut
4th tut

Posted on August 26, 2008 23:31

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Made ME cry.

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Posted on August 26, 2008 23:31

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penissssssssss............
jk
no homo but its just tht i am not feeling da poem

Posted on August 26, 2008 23:31

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wow i like it dan 8/10

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Posted on August 26, 2008 23:31

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Blah i don't like it >_<
4/10.
Sorry no CnC to make it better TT-TT

Posted on August 26, 2008 23:32

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it kinda sucks i give it a 4/10

Posted on August 26, 2008 23:33

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is good way to express ur self 10/10

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Posted on August 27, 2008 00:35

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the poem needs alot of work... 4.5/10

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