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Yondaime538 Rank: member Forum Rank: Kage Posts: 4911 Joined on: November 9, 2007

#1 Well Today I went To School and my LA teacher said we had to do a poem on anything and i just finish mine right know so rate and tell me suggestion to make it better Unlicensed Love On a summer's day long, long ago I fell in love and I'll never know Just what it was that made me feel So drawn to her, what the appeal That set my pulses so to race When e'er I gazed upon that face Of one who was scarce but a child Yet even then could drive me wild I'll never know the how's and why's I lost my heart to Hazel Eyes But when I got that long sought kiss I knew I'd found my Perfect Miss My elfin girl from down the lane And I'll never let her go again For how could I describe our love? Romantic love, all hearts and flowers No way to count the days and hours Spent in self-indulgent wishes And thoughts of long awaited kisses Of sweet embraces, tender sighs And gazing into love filled eyes Oh yes, it is that kind of love Or, is it yet the love of passion The ecstasy that knows no ration That shuddering nerve-tingling feeling The climax with your senses reeling The wondrous joy when you discover That sweet surrender to your lover Oh yes, it's that kind of love too. Or even yet a love that grows One that cares and one that knows That sees beyond the outer skin Into the person deep within That loves the spirit and the soul The inner self that makes the whole Built on trust and empathy A love you know was meant to be The love we share is all these things A love that has no need of rings A love you never need to doubt A love I cannot live without A love to last us all our days A love I'll share with you always - Yondaime538- - Goryo Chandra - My Song -

Kakashi_pwnzor Rank: member Forum Rank: Kage Posts: 4738 Joined on: September 4, 2006

#2 That was good... except for the fact you used the word E'er. that right there killed that whole chunk of the poem for me. XD 9.8/10 So we have decided, so let it be written and let it be done, that so as you think, so shall you become. Thanks to Ako of the Yakujo Jutsu Tenpo shop for the sig. Click the avvy for my Tektek gallery. Requests are accepted.

ceguinTXT Rank: member Forum Rank: Missing-Nin Posts: 2181 Joined on: December 23, 2007

#3 Good xD ahehae 9/10 you made? Ceguin* is -dominant | OFF Sign By:Me | *TAKA* | | My showcase Tournaments Entered: 25. Tournaments Won: 14. Área BR em decadência!! _Aeris_ is my etern rival ;D

acac Rank: member Forum Rank: Missing-Nin Posts: 1987 Joined on: February 15, 2007

#4 okkk.very deep sig made by acapella..thkx tournys won 14 lastest tourny won jenge's arashi tourny #1 2nd lastest tourny won: Kaorut warriors first Official Tourny

sakuralover555 Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1414 Joined on: June 11, 2007

#5 very deep dude great work 9/10 THANKS FOR THE SIG AKO *II* Sakuralover555 Character and Mission Collection *II* .::AKO GFX SHOP::.

kappa7 Rank: member Forum Rank: Kage Posts: 7415 Joined on: February 1, 2008

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