Black Chapter Chapter 1


 Topic: Black Chapter Chapter 1
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  Posted on August 24, 2008 23:40
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I'm still continuing the other side, but this is sumthin that I felt like writing

Kimioto opened his eyes. He'd only seen dark for, well, he didn't know how long... He looked around. He seemed to be in a lab like chamber. He felt a bubble hit his body. He looked down and noticed that he was in a huge water container. Two people came in. He couldn't remember anything. He wondered if this was a dream... Then his memory flashed back just as fast as a man walked in. His eye color was purple. His silver hair gleamed in the light of the window above him. His robe was black, different from the two others.
"Kiomoshi!!!" Kimioto yelled.
"Hello Kimioto. You weren't suppose to wake for another two weeks. If u stay awake much longer, the water could kill you. So just take the gas, and go back to sleep," Kiomoshi said calmly.
His face was blank. He turned towards the other, who had masks over their faces, and nodded to them. They pressed a button, and gas filled the container. Kimioto pounded on the glass. Cracks started to form. Kishimoto nodded again, and the two pushed the button once more. Another blast filled the container. Kimioto hit the glass one last time, and it broke. The gas was destroyed by the oxygen in the air. Kiomoshi walked through the door again. The other two were trying to follow. The water mixed with the oxygen was making a gas chemical. They were about to go through, when a hand grabbed one of them. It threw that person. The mask broke and revealed it to be a man Kimioto had known to travel with Kiomoshi. The hand grabbed the other, threw them up, and hit them in the stomach. The hand slid through the stomach like it was nothing. A giant wing flew out of the smoke, then another. The hand that had grabbed the two was turning gray, and the nails grew so sharp, they were as sharp as daggers. The smoke dissapeared as the wings flapped easily. Kimioto stood staring at himself. His eyes were red, his hair had grown, and his skin was a grayish-brownish color. He was afraid of what had happened, and then used his wings shot out of the room, going after Kiomoshi.
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Kiomoshi shot out the front door. His two scientists were no match for a person who mixed the water with the oxygen. It was how he obtained his power. He turned around, and saw smoke coming from the front of the building. It was hidden in the forest, so there was plenty of room to hide. But that wouldn't stop Kimioto. Kiomoshi's eyes turned purple. His hands moved up and a giant boulder followed them. He dropped in front of the path. He ran as fast as he could. His powers weren't as built up from being in a nuclear zone...
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  Posted on August 24, 2008 23:53
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whoh im boreding me big time
and i made a art agh.... ART IS A BANG!!
  Posted on August 24, 2008 23:57
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thanks... Don't spam
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  Posted on August 25, 2008 00:44
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I didn't read all of it but it's nice, good job bro
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  Posted on August 25, 2008 01:03
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Thanks shino. Could u try reading all of it... I read all of urs...
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