The Flood


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  Posted on August 22, 2008 23:44
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The Flood


Streets are awash,
the rain chases,
trying to hide.

Runing to you,
hope to be safe
and to feel warm.

Wait i forgot,
you caused the rain,
you froze my soul.

My heart gives up,
I guess i drown,
I will die here.
  Posted on August 22, 2008 23:45
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good 8/10 i like it
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  Posted on August 22, 2008 23:46
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9/10 i like it
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  Posted on August 22, 2008 23:46
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  Posted on August 22, 2008 23:47
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good 7/10


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  Posted on August 22, 2008 23:49
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8/10 nice poem..

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  Posted on August 22, 2008 23:50
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wat was ur inspiration?




































  Posted on August 23, 2008 00:00
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that was amazing...
at first it seems like u were talking about wheather...
but then u just bursted it out in amotion and that was amazing!!!!!!!!!!1

10/10
made by Dwath2055>>
  Posted on August 23, 2008 10:41
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Quote by bcheery2bcherry
wat was ur inspiration?

life
thanks for all your comments