Poem_ Guiding Stars

Shino*Girl Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 3177 Joined on: September 24, 2006

#1 This poem is dedicated to all the relatives and family friends that have died and past on to a better place, and write this poem truly made me want to cry but I tried my best not to. Enjoy. ~~~ I’ve often had days when I’d huddled in a corner watching the stars Wishing to fly without any cares in mind I’d often bring tears to my eyes, for the sky was so lovely And it forever warmed my heart But, my wishful thinking will never turn into reality But, I’ll fortify my thinking and think positively Until I can stand on my own two feet I’ll never fear what I’ll face in the near future And open my eyes to true light The true light each of you passed on to me Ah... I can no longer spot the stars in the sky Once I again I was shrouded in darkness, and began to cry But I see you’re still truly with me With every beat of my heart My love continues to grow ...So don’t disappear my not one but many guiding stars |Ars Amatoria|

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#2 thats an awesome poem ||Clanless|| Sig By Me Avy By Blake777Adopted By Brownie203 Cute-Neko-Girl Is My lil Sis My Character Clollection!

chem5 Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 757 Joined on: August 14, 2007

#3 I must say Shino, one of your better poems by far. As always, it takes place inside your unique style of writing that, quite often, breaks up the flow of your writing a tad too much for me. In this piece, it seems to work perfectly though. The images you create of a lone figure underneath the veil of the night sky, comforted by the soft gleaming of the stars and the belief that each, a guardian angel of sorts is somehow calming. It reiterates the idea that we hold onto those who meant the most to us in any way we can, finding them in the simplest of forms simply so we never really have to say goodbye. The transition to a somber setting when the image loses sight of the sky to the darkness is a great way to express just how much they meant to you. Had you left the poem at: "And open my eyes to true light The true light each of you passed on to me" I really believe it would have lost a bit of it's impact. Leaving it without balance would have made a few forget that..the stars aren't always shining in the sky. The memories aren't always one's that strengthen the soul. For every memory that makes us smile, there is another that can make us cry. Very nice work Shino, hope by bumping this a bit, that more people take the time to take notice of this small gem of a poem. Quote by blindyful Chemmy Chemster Chemmeh Chemed Chemified El'chemo Chemwem SuperChem Chemers Chemdaman Chem>ChEmErS Chemerster Chemsy C5 Chemsay Chemzorz LordChem Chemtron Chemonic Chemeon Chemzard Chemcom Chemstreet GossipinChem CHEMTODAY Chemtimes Chemchews DarkFireChem RedChem Chemroth Chemture Chemccx Chemsama Chemkun Chemchan Chemv Cheman Chemgakure Chemrachi MissChem Chemsoup..............Hello ._. Clan page Clan Profile Page Mostri Requirement page

hamjammer Rank: member Forum Rank: Missing-Nin Posts: 1775 Joined on: June 2, 2007

#4 is this a poem you will submit .::Ars Amatoria::. Credits for sigs go to gy6tera7 (top),-_yondaime_- (bottom) Ava: gy9tera7

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#5 Love the poem hun <3 QT_PIEx <----click|Rest in Peace Regan||Sig By SL poo| i'll be her pedo of course (smirking nod) |michalV| |SasukeLover27| |Latest| |Power| |Ichigo|

habib_uchiha Rank: member Forum Rank: Chuunin Posts: 387 Joined on: September 17, 2008

#6 i make evan poem but i keep them in my book in i dont want nobody to see them my poem is wath i fell from my heart then i right them so ya i make poem sis of n-b:saeryu Cool sig made by Amaya.

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#7 So gr8 I could cry!!! :|:My FC:|::|:Char Collection:|:I'm Back, Watsup!!! All gfx done by me

thousandsunfire Rank: member Forum Rank: Kage Posts: 4177 Joined on: November 14, 2007

#8 that was pretty good. i dont really like the flow though, you seem to break sentences into pieces and it makes it a little awkward to read (imo). -sig and avatar by me N-A Engine Shippuuden Character Collection Seethe - Latest Chapter - Chapter 5 Released

Shino*Girl Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 3177 Joined on: September 24, 2006

#9 Quote by thousandsunfire that was pretty good. i dont really like the flow though, you seem to break sentences into pieces and it makes it a little awkward to read (imo). Everyone tells me that and it true. I'm great at jotting down words and stuff but placing those words in senstences with a decent or somewhat decent flow is challenging for me. But, thank you for reading my poem. |Ars Amatoria|

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