_Valkyrie_ Chapter One_

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Posted on August 12, 2008 22:14

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First chapter of the new story I'm working on the prologue and summary are in my siggy just click the 'Valkyrie' link. And please if you have nothing positive to say such as 'Too much to read" or "What is this?" etc. keep those words to yourself and don't post here. And for those who read and enjoy it, leave a comment please. Thanks! : ) (Btw sorry for any time spent having a hard time reading this >_<)

Chapter One-Opening

Antrinko paid little attention to the introduction speech the teacher was giving. All she could do was fall into a trance by the new student’s crystal blue eyes, they we’re mesmerizing.
“Antrinko could you please give Miss. Kizuna brief tour of the dorms and this institutes other facilities?” the teacher questioned Antrinko, snapping her out of the trance. “Yes sensei I surely will show Kizuna around our school…”

Later on towards the afternoon hours Antrinko and Kizuna walked down the long spacious hallways of the dorms, Antrinko was conducting the tour as she had promised. Kizuna would often stop and point at items and ask questions, that Antrinko answered quickly and without error. Even though Kizuna talked she seemed shy and timid to Antrinko.
“So Kiz chan, how old are you?”
“Kiz chan?” Kizuna stuttered.
“Yes, kawaii nickname isn’t it?”
“I’m fifteen!”
“Hmm?”
“That’s how old I am!”
Kizuna retorted. Antrinko smiled and then slung her arms over Kizuna’s shoulders.
“You know you’re kind of kawaii yourself Kiz chan…”
Antrinko chuckled slightly, “You remind me of a lone flower begging to be greeted and pampered by the warmth of friends…”
“Friends?”
“Yes, friends. I can tell you don’t really have any…”

‘I do Antrinko chan…but I can’t tell you about them.’

“My family moves around a lot so I barely make any friends…” she frowned. Antrinko pulled her up against her ample chest, “You now have one though.”
Antrinko winked.
“I’m the first flower to bloom; you’re no longer a lone flower!”
Kizuna sniffled.
“Alright Ant-chan.”
“See shortening others names is more kawaii and fun~!”
Antrinko pulled a key out of her pocket, opening a lock to a door with etched words, Kizuna read them to herself. ‘F-7.’ Antrinko quickly flipped the light switched on, and grimaced once she caught a glimpse of a red dot far off in the sky.
“That stupid computer system shield is illuminating the peaceful skies once more…” Antrinko pouted, before walking into the room and throwing herself down on the bed towards the left side of the room.
“All your clothes, and supplies are here so just chill out alright its Saturday tomorrow so I’ll show you around town and-“
Kizuna quickly kicked off her shows and laid her head against Antrinko’s chest making them both blush.
“I’d rather stay here and chat to you Ant chan...”
Ant smiled patting Kizuna’s hair.
“Alright then Kiz chan.”

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Posted on August 12, 2008 22:15

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Nice...

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Posted on August 13, 2008 06:36

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Intresting, to say the least. Can't wait to see the rest.

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Posted on August 13, 2008 10:54

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peice of shit!

Posted on August 13, 2008 10:57

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heres a better 1!

chapter 1 the vagina

once ther was a town called hfshefgehgry, it died then regrew! then came along a vagina and a dick. the dick said 2 the vagina ''i love u wanna get married''? no u fuck! id rather be maaried 2 a bum!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! well time 2 go!

Posted on August 15, 2008 11:54

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Don't spam. Your story was sickeningly terrible in case you were wondering.

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Posted on August 18, 2008 02:41

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nice

tell me when chapter 2 is out

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Posted on August 18, 2008 08:53

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