Ichiba and Manda, yahooooooooo!


 Topic: Ichiba and Manda, yahooooooooo!
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20 vote(s) since July 27, 2008 19:55
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  Posted on July 27, 2008 19:55
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#1




I want to inject some new concepts about making a character: more possibilities, and draining HP is not only one way to finish a life


any opinion about my ideas in these character?
- demon & spirit as characters
- technique contains possibilities of success
- deferred effect (Sudden Underground Attack)
- deferred instant kill
- death by means other than drained HP

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  Posted on July 27, 2008 19:57
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#2
overpowered bad pics overall 5/10

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  Posted on July 27, 2008 19:58
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#3
the shukaku's forced sleep technique needs rewording...but good!

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  Posted on July 27, 2008 20:00
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7/10
because its kinda overpowered but good.
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  Posted on July 27, 2008 20:00
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overpowered bad pics overall 5/10


at least not bad pics -_-

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  Posted on July 27, 2008 20:02
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which one do you mean overpowered?
Ichibi costs lots to summoned and can be killed with 3 stun, it maybe also bad hurt before being summoned
Manda has lots of possibilities affecting her

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  Posted on July 27, 2008 20:04
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6/10.
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  Posted on July 27, 2008 20:19
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i need feedback, tell me your change suggestion pleaseeeeeeeee

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  Posted on July 27, 2008 21:26
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Manda is a bit dicey.... Ichibi is overpowered, can do 99 damage? Overall 7.5/10
Also, you need to put less 'good's in the poll. At least put 1 'bad'.
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  Posted on July 28, 2008 09:14
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i like manda ..especially wrap's effect
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  Posted on July 28, 2008 11:45
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Quote by byakugan_2008
Manda is a bit dicey.... Ichibi is overpowered, can do 99 damage? Overall 7.5/10
Also, you need to put less 'good's in the poll. At least put 1 'bad'.


i cost 4 different chakra and one more nin to deal 99 damage
and it's just 99 damage, that character has not dead yet and can still earn you a chakra next round
and if you have 50 HP, you lose only 49 not 99

itsn't it too cheap or overpowered? huh?

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  Posted on July 28, 2008 16:12
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i like them ^^ ~ 7 overall
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  Posted on July 29, 2008 10:33
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any opinion about my ideas in these character?
- demon & spirit as characters
- technique contains possibilities of success
- deferred effect (Sudden Underground Attack)
- deferred instant kill
- death by means other than drained HP

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  Posted on July 29, 2008 19:12
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overpowered 4/10
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  Posted on July 29, 2008 23:49
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overpowered bad pics overall 5/10

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