Mugenji, time/space specialist (FINAL, with MISSION)

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90 vote(s) since June 5, 2007 02:22

Perfect for the game! (54) (60%)

Good, but needs some adjusting (27) (30%)

Sorry, he's not for the game (9) (10%)

Posted on June 5, 2007 02:22

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UPDATE:
- shortened and MISSION description and made the required rank lower.
- also changed the wording on Mugenji's character description to reflect the changes i made in his background story.

Summary:
Lockdown: is the preparatory skill, much like Shikamaru's meditation.

Yin Yang Stasis Technique (YYST): is skill that basically disables Mugenji and his target. It doesnt make him invulnerable but merely makes him really HARD. both can't move for 3 turns although the player using Mugenji can opt to remove the stasis early by doing any skill OR most probably use FC on the target. YYST works as a disabling skill, a stalling skill or a defensive skill.

Flicker Cut (FC): is your primary option for removing YYST, your coup de grace. if the target has both Lockdown and YYST, it does 60 damage max. if it only has YYST (which is possible), it only does 50 damage. if target only has Lockdown and no YYST, then it's 35 damage. if the target has neither Lockdown or YYST, FC does 25 damage.

The Hidden Scrolls of the Watchers
Info:
- B Rank mission
Requirements:
- At least Special Jounin

Description:
- In his quest for Immortality, Orochimaru learned of the Shigakka, a small unaligned nin organization of historians whose agents were said to live hundreds of years. The Shigakka are unlikely to share their secrets, but regardless, Orochimaru is sending his agents and followers to snuff out the Shigakka's agents, especially its Oracle of Time.

Rewards:
Character unlocked: Muto Genji

Mission Goals:
Win 15 battles using a team with at least one Sound Nin.

mission notes: i made the mission like so just to give Sound nin users a little incentive for using a sound nin. there's just so many of them I'm tempted to make the mission goal something like "win 15 battles with a team composed entirely of Sound nins". But i probably won't, it's good as is.

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Posted on June 5, 2007 02:33

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so cool and u make awsome characters

i've got places to go and people to kill

Posted on June 5, 2007 03:36

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Wow! I love this character!
The Ying Yang stasis technique is really well thought!

Just one thing. I'm not sure that your art fits with the naruto world design...

Still I really like it!

Posted on June 5, 2007 04:18

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Godd Damn!!! The pics just get better and better.

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Posted on June 5, 2007 08:03

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this is so good and a very good thinking about the yin yang stasis. u could be invulnerable the whole game, but then again ur opponent could be too. it's like this: ur 1vs1 activate stasis after 2 turns when stasis is about to end do flicker cut. on the next turn another stasis and so on. it gives a very good idea with guys who can do undefendable damage like CSS with fell flight and stasis and flicker cut. he rocks i'll give it a 10/10 and also all ur other characters are also super good

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Posted on June 6, 2007 10:30

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thanks :D

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Posted on June 10, 2007 13:20

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Yeah, the wording of YYSF is what creates so many oddities. Since you've got it at 100% damage reduction, moves that ignore defense are still extremely useful. Of course, it does apply on both ends, but the enemy doesn't really prepare for it as much. Still, since the costs mean it can't be used too often in most cases, it should be fine.

I might consider cheapening Flicker Cut, though. 40 damage isn't that much when you already need to spend 3 chakra and 2 turns preparing for it, and you need to spend 2 more chakra actually attacking. 20 without preparation is understandable, but 30 with a preparation move, even that with a random chakra, isn't too much. Look at Temari, Shikamaru, and Kin's moves. Most of them have a better damage potential, and Shikamaru's attack does more damage for a near equal cost when you compare Shadow Imitation + Neck Bind to YYSF + Flicker Cut.

Oh, but in regard to this:

Quote by riholehiste

No, you can't actually continually use stasis field here. Since it has a preparation move, you'll need to stop using it every few rounds or so. Plus, if you want to to be much use, you'll have to be using up chakra in order to attack everyone else, so you might not have the chakra you need to continually use it. Plus, remember that 100% damage reduction is not invulnerability. People can still use a stunning move to stop him from doing it again.

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Posted on June 10, 2007 13:29

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nice i remember the first time i saw your characters they were already nice back then now this is the first time i see the new ones and i can tell u really made them improve alot

if ud ask me id want to see them in game youll do great

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Posted on June 10, 2007 14:41

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good character

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Posted on June 10, 2007 18:40

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#10

Nice character and drawings. I know this is a final version so your probably not taking suggestions. However, in keeping with the time theme, how about make lockdown read:

Mugen ji releases his focused chakra slowing down time around his opponents. For 4 rounds his opponents have only 45 secs to act instead of the usual 60 seconds.

Of course, then it won't have the lockdown effect. Just a thought.

Posted on June 11, 2007 03:51

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#11

i really have nothing to say here. Perfect. Although flicker cut I'd have probably a 1 round cooldown... just to balance it out just a little more.

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Posted on June 11, 2007 12:50

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#12

@Ruduen: i see... i'll think about it.

Flicker cut DID start out as a much stronger technique (it used to do 60 damage), it's been toned down quite a bit during it's stay in the verified section. now it only does a max of 50 damage (if target has BOTH lockdown and YYST).

your pointing out Shikamaru and temari has gotten me thinking and i MIGHT consider boosting flicker cut again. thanks for the help! much appreciated.

Suzume | Mugenji | Koto | Goji

Posted on June 12, 2007 15:33

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