Suzume, poison specialist (FINAL. with MISSION)

anchan Rank: member Forum Rank: Snow Hare Posts: 78 Joined on: August 18, 2006

#1 UPDATE: - the MISSION has now been updated. shortened the description and made the rank requirement lower. Summary: Black Chrysanthemum Claw (BCC): is your basic startup skill. TC follows from it, and then BIP. the Festering wound effect lasts 5 turns so that a player can "infect" all the available targets on occasion, giving him more options for TC targets. Taint Chakra (TC): is a modified stun - poison skill. it "stuns" if the opponent decides not to take damage from it, and poisons if the target decides to take an action. It will do minute damage in the beginning, but will really become more apparent once the target is already at critical health. So it's a poison skill in the beginning, and a stunner in later parts of the game. Black iris Purge (BIP): is your Coup de grace. whether or not the opponent decides to ignore TC and take damage or not move at all, BIP gives you the power to kill if needed. It will take long to chain to it (from BCC to TC) but 50 undefendable damage is worth it. Mission: Hana's Shrouded Garden Info: - B Rank mission Requirements: - At least Special Jounin Description: - Poison specialists have long been in search of the legendary Poison Master's secret garden. Hana's garden is said to have the rarest and most potent plants poisons in the world. Shizune from the Leaf and Kankuro from the neighboring Sand are some of the few hot on the trail leading to the secret garden, where its Guardian waits and watches. Rewards: Character unlocked: Hanabi Suzume Mission Goals: Win 10 battles with Kankuro in your team. Win 5 battles with Shizune in your team. Suzume | Mugenji | Koto | Goji

demon_lord_dante Rank: member Forum Rank: Snow Hare Posts: 210 Joined on: June 3, 2007

#2 that person is so cool and the pics look great sweet skils i've got places to go and people to kill

anchan Rank: member Forum Rank: Snow Hare Posts: 78 Joined on: August 18, 2006

#3 thanks! :D Suzume | Mugenji | Koto | Goji

Reesan Rank: member Forum Rank: Warm Cookie Posts: 2216 Joined on: November 16, 2006

#4 Cool, pretty good too... nice drawings. Amaya + me = in niggership.Br0jj4x + me = in Elaza Lain damn it. Puko.(nrd) MOVING!

anchan Rank: member Forum Rank: Snow Hare Posts: 78 Joined on: August 18, 2006

#5 thanks for the compliment :) Suzume | Mugenji | Koto | Goji

renedave Rank: member Forum Rank: Gleeful Child Posts: 450 Joined on: February 23, 2007

#6 welcome back bro, all your characters rock... i'm betting suzume is the frontrunner among your set would you consider changing her surname? hanabi is the younger sister of hinata hehe My characters:

Ruduen Rank: member Forum Rank: Snow Hare Posts: 169 Joined on: September 22, 2006

#7 Claw is more or less a cheap preparation move, right? But since it lasts on one character for two rounds, they have a chance to partially defend... The main thing is that Taint Chakra's damage potential isn't nearly as high as Black Iris Purge. In most cases, people will try to avoid using that character if there's deterrent. However, even if they don't, most character's moves only use 2 chakra at best. On average, you'll do 20, maybe 30 damage with that move. Very few characters will actually have the moveset where they'll be used enough to even match the damage done by Black Iris Purge. I'd consider maybe allowing Taint Chakra to also lead up to BIP, or perhaps boosting its damage slightly. ... ... ... I have a part-time job as an NPC.

tnaruto Rank: member Forum Rank: Warm Cookie Posts: 2748 Joined on: January 10, 2007

#8 cool, i like em

anchan Rank: member Forum Rank: Snow Hare Posts: 78 Joined on: August 18, 2006

#9 @Ruduen: i'll take that into consideration. I've always thought that how the moves lead up to BIP takes too long... so either i'll go for your suggestion OR boost BIP's damage, to make it more worthwhile to use it. thanks for the insight! much appreciated :D Suzume | Mugenji | Koto | Goji

HatakeJoshua Rank: member Forum Rank: Candy Cane Posts: 5554 Joined on: June 2, 2007

#10 great art and cool concept...a little weak in my opinion. plz comment my character in my siggy ^^

yugi25 Rank: member Forum Rank: Snow Hare Posts: 150 Joined on: October 15, 2006

#11 its very good! I LIKE CERIAL AND CHOCOLATE MILK

anchan Rank: member Forum Rank: Snow Hare Posts: 78 Joined on: August 18, 2006

#12 OK guys, a Black Iris BOOST on the next update. i've decided. Suzume | Mugenji | Koto | Goji

lee78 Rank: member Forum Rank: Warm Cookie Posts: 2406 Joined on: January 12, 2007

#13 i have to agree. ALthough your moves are quite splendid, i have to question:her works are kind of like dosu, with one attack leading to another, but for this one, she HAS to have that 1 random on to do her other attacks, creating a problem. And, considering her 2 round effect of her festering effect, and her 1 round cooldown on the 15 damage, she could only really attack 1 person at a time. Example: her, lee, garra vs. shizune, sakura, tsuande. She uses poison on tsunade, then next turn, uses her 1 ninjutsu 1 random. Then she uses her 1 random on sakura. Bam, her tsunade poison is gone. If she could, she could have marked, then 1 nin 1 random, then did her other 1 nin 1 random. It would probably kill tsunade, butyou just wasted a long back breaking 2 or 3 turns earning all that random, 2 nijutsu, not being stunned, walled, or have no ninjutsu chakra etc. I'd suggest removing the cooldwon on her 15 damage, or raising her 2 rounds to 3 rounds poisoin. Signed, Lee78 We-R-Heavenbound.Click here for highly, sophisticated words that you may or may not know.

Ruduen Rank: member Forum Rank: Snow Hare Posts: 169 Joined on: September 22, 2006

#14 Yes, the chain may be a bit too long now. Still, considering she does a fair amount of damage for relatively little chakra, and she has a relatively usable backup attack, I think she's pretty reasonable. Honestly, what I was thinking is letting BIP do damage from either Taint OR BCC, but it deals more damage if you use it with Taint. But this works too, more or less. I suppose if she's accepted, any balance needs will be fulfilled. ... ... ... I have a part-time job as an NPC.

anchan Rank: member Forum Rank: Snow Hare Posts: 78 Joined on: August 18, 2006

#15 point taken. let me think about it again, i MIGHT just change her according to Ruduen's suggestion. Suzume | Mugenji | Koto | Goji

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