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Posted on July 17, 2007 00:27

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Devin Altwright: He's fine.

Frank Gekko: Reptile Form needs to last less time, it makes his moves too powerful, about 3 rounds is good. Also Constricting Spear should do 10 damage or 20 damage in reptile form, it's already quite strong with no cooldown.

Tom Deacon: Time Out suffers the same problem as the earlier move. This time, just make it so that none of the other skills can be used during Time Out. Speed Time should cost 1 Genkaku, 1 Random.

Kira Bradley: She's fine.

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Posted on July 26, 2007 04:55

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Here is the third installment of characters, and I will make missions for the first unlockable characters after this post.

EDIT: Here is the update on the Squad Teamleaders. Please help in making my E.O.W. Arena and the E.O.W. Collection a reality by telling the mods and admins about my collection.

Edward Johnson: He is the Teamleader of E.O.W. and is an excellent fighter. He wears two large mechanical gloves and uses Chi-based attacks to fight his foes. Combined with his super strenght and his chi attacks, he is a powerful opponent.

Piston Punch Combo: Edward's signature move. He first punches an opponent with his fist, and then he attacks with his other hand with even greater force. (Deals 40 damage to a single target. 1 Melee, 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Energy Volley Strike: Edward throws a barrage of energy blasts at the enemy team to destroy any forces against him. (Deals 25 damage to the enemy team. 1 Bloodline, 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Maximum Impact: Edward charges a gigantic amount of energy into his palm in the shape of a ball, and then, combined with the power of the energy ball, he hits his enemy and sends the enemy flying. This is Edward's ultimate attack. (Deals 40 Piercing Damage, and the enemy cannot use physical skills for 1 round.1 Melee, 1 Bloodline, Cooldown: 1)

Teleport: Using his Chi, Edward teleports to a safer location away from the enemy. (Edward is invincible this round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Bryce "Jackal" Newman: He is the leader of Team Dynamite and is mainly a weapons specialist and his naihatsu power is super speed and strenght. His main weapon is his sword and his gadgets that help him in battle. He is normally silent, but always gets ready for a fight.

Seven-Star Slash: Bryce slashes his opponent a repeated number of times at fast speeds. (Deals 20 damage each round for two rounds. 1 Melee, 1 Random, Cooldown: 1)

Black Star Bomber: Bryce uses his gadget, Black Star Bomber, to inflict damage to an enemy and disables their defense. (Deals 15 damage to a single target and the target cannot defend properly for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Naihatsu Drainer: Bryce uses his favorite gadget, the Naihatsu Drainer, to drain a person of his/her Naihatsu little by little. (Destroys one of the enemy's naihatsu each round for five rounds. 2 Bloodline, Cooldown: 6)

Flash Bomb: Bryce uses a flash bomb to stun the enemy while he hides to a safer location. (Bryce is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Zane Metaru: He is the teamleader of Team Dark Knights and has bones that are made of an organic material that is stronger than most metals and as hard as diamonds, can regenerate bones and energy at an extremely fast rate, and can manipulate his bones at will, which is his bloodline power from both the Kaguya & Metaru families. His powers and his combat skills make him a powerful warrior.

Regeneration: Zane can quickly regenerate bones, heal his wounds, and recover his naihatsu while he can regenerate. (Heals 35 Health Points and recovers one Bloodline energy to Zane. 2 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Bone Spikes: Zane creates spikes from underground to attack his enemy and to stun them. (Deals 20 damage to the enemy team and stuns them for one round. 1 Bloodline, 1 Random, Cooldown: 2)

Bone Sword: Zane's bones create a sword-like bone, which comes out from his hand. He then strikes the opponent with great force. (Deals 20 damage to a single target and stuns the target for one round. 1 Melee, Cooldown: 0)

Bone Skin: Zane hardens his skin to pure metal to protect himself from enemy attacks. (Zane is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Nina Scott: She is the teamleader of Team Star. Mainly, she is a healer to aid her allies in need, but her power is to control energy in the shape of stars. With her healing abilities and her star power, she is a dangerous opponent.

Mystic Healing Palm: Nina combines her energy into her hand, and then places her hand on the damaged area, and then heals her ally. (Heals an ally for 50 health points. 1 Naihatsu, 1 Random, Cooldown: 1)

Star Storm: Nina creates enough stars to send a barrage of stars at the enemy team. Once the stars have hit the target, they explode on impact. (Deals 15 damage to the enemy team. 1 Naihatsu, 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Mystic Armor: Nina creates an armor made from her own naihatsu energy to increase her powers and to make herself more resistant to enemy attacks. (Nina takes 25 percent less damage and Star Storm does 100 percent more damage for four rounds. 1 Bloodline, Cooldown: 3)

Star Shield: Nina creates a giant star to defend herself. (Nina is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Keylin Yokami: She is the Teamleader of Team Sukai and she uses Spirit Energy as her main energy source. Her spiritual power is that she can create weapons using spirit energy, and she can create minions to protect her and her allies. Combined with these skills, she is a battle and support ally.

Phantom Sword Barrage: Keylin creates swords using spirit energy, and uses the swords to attack her enemies. (Deals 10 damage to the enemy team each round for 3 rounds. 1 Genkaku, 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)

Phantom Minion Protection: Keylin creates phantoms to protect her and her allies from danger. (Protects the entire team for 1 round. This effect can instantly stack and can be used more than once per turn. 1 Genkaku for one PMP, Cooldown: 2)

Phantom Lance: Keylin creates a large, powered-up spear using a lot of spirit energy. She then throws the lance at great speed and hits the target. Since this is made of spirit energy, it has mystical properties and can not be defended against. (Deals 40 Piercing Damage to a single target. The enemy cannot be targeted by friendly effects for 1 round. 1 Genkaku, 1 Random, Cooldown: 1)

Spirit Shield: Keylin uses her spirit energy to create a small force field to protect her from any damage. (Keylin is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Scott Nowiki: He is the Teamleader of Team Avalanche, and his naihatsu power is that he can create ice from thin air, similar to his pupil, Snow. He uses his elemental skills and his summoning skills to aid anyone in need of assistance.

Freezing Palm: Scott coats his entire hand with ice and naihatsu energy, and then attacks his opponents with his cold fists, paralyzing his enemy as well. (Deals 15 damage and the enemy is stunned for 1 round. 1 Melee, Cooldown: 0)

Blizzard Ball: Scott creates a giant ball of ice from the air, and then throws it upon his enemies. (Deals 15 damage to the enemy team and stuns them for 1 round. 1 Bloodline, 1 Random, Cooldown: 2)

Major Summoning: Ice Spirit Tougen: Scott summons his ally, an Ice Spirit named Tougen who increases Scott's attack power and defense by intense levels. (Scott's attack power is increased by 200 percent and his defense is increased by 66 percent for five rounds. In the two rounds after the five rounds are finished, Scott cannot use a skill for three rounds and takes 25% more damage. This can be only used once per battle. Only one major summoning can be used once per team. 1 Melee, 1 Naihatsu, 1 Bloodline, 1 Genkaku, Cooldown: 255)

Ice Wall: Scott creates a wall of Ice to defend himself from enemy attacks. (Scott is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Selene Kienra: She is the team leader of Team Fumez and a teacher at the Rienhart Academy. Her naihatsu power is the ability to steal health using Syphon Energy, just like Alaster Academy's Dan Morrison. With her Syphon energy and her twin daggers, she is a tricky enemy.

Generation: Selene generates her Syphon energy to begin her offensive skills. (Activates her attacks and anyone who uses Melee attacks on Selene will have 10 HP stolen from them and given to Selene for four rounds. 1 Bloodline, Cooldown:4)

Syphon Dagger Strike: Selene uses her daggers and her Syphon energy to deal damage and take stamina away from her opponents. (Deals 30 Damage to a single enemy and gives Selene 10 HP. 1 Melee, 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Syphon Wave: Selene creates an entire wave-like energy come from her body, stealing stamina from her enemies from a medium range distance. (Deals 20 damage to all enemies and gives Selene 15 HP. 1 Melee, 1 Naihatsu, Cooldown: 2)

Defensive Manuever: (Selene is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Posted on July 27, 2007 04:18

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Minions of Darkness Missions:

The First Mission: Team E.O.W. has been assigned on their first training mission. The assignment is to train in combat with the other squads to gain experience in combat. Once the team has gained enough experience in combat, they will go on an official mission to battle the enemy forces.

Mission Info: Mission Name: The First Mission/ Mission Type: D Rank Mission

Mission Requirements: Student Rank: At least D-Rank Student

Mission Goals: Win 10 matches against anyone who is not apart of Team E.O.W. with Team E.O.W. members

Mission Rewards: The First Mission Completed
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The Battle Against Ima: Team E.O.W. is now ready for it's first mission, which is to battle an enemy called Ima. Her powerful moves makes this difficult, but if you can train with Team E.O.W., then you may have a chance to battle her and win.

Mission Info: Mission Name: The Battle Against Ima/ Mission Type: D Rank Mission/ Missions Completed: The First Mission

Mission Requirements: Student Rank: At least D-Rank Student

Mission Goals: Win 3 matches in a row with Blake in your team

Win 3 matches in a row with Adam in your team

Win 3 matches in a row with Enzeru in your team

Win 3 matches in a row with Nicole in your team

Mission Rewards: The Battle Against Ima Complete/ Unlock Character: Ima
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The Battle Against Replicon: Team Dynamite has to train hard to receive their mission to fight the criminal Replicon and defeat him. To do this, Team Dynamite must train to their hardest to win this fight.

Mission Info: Mission Name: The Battle Against Replicon/ Mission Type: D Rank Mission/ Missions Completed: The First Mission

Mission Requirements: Student Rank: At least D-Rank Student

Mission Goals: Win 3 battles in a row with Jerimaiah in your team

Win 3 battles in a row with Talmage in your team

Win 3 battles in a row with Bryan in your team

Win 3 battles in a row with Dustin in your team

Mission Rewards: The Battle Against Replicon Complete/ Unlock Character: Replicon
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The Battle Against Kura: Team Star has to complete their latest mission, which is to defeat Kura Inizuchi. To do this, Team Star has to train to their very limit until they are ready to face Kura and win.

Mission Info: Mission Name: The Battle Against Kura/ Mission Type: C Rank Mission/ Missions Completed: The First Mission

Mission Requirements: Student Rank: At least C-Rank Student

Mission Goals: Win 4 matches in a row with Blair in your team

Win 4 matches in a row with Sora in your team

Win 4 matches in a row with Shiri in your team

Mission Rewards: The Battle Against Kura Complete/ Unlock Character: Kura Inizuchi
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The Battle Against Skullron: Team Dark Knights must now face Skullron for their next mission. To fight Skullron and win, Team Dark Knights must create a perfect strategy and train hard before they can win against Skullron.

Mission Info: Mission Name: The Battle Against Skullron/ Mission Type: C-Rank Mission/ Missions Completed: The First Mission

Mission Requirements: Student Rank: At least C-Ranked Student

Mission Goals: Win 4 battles in a row with Jasper in your team

Win 4 battles in a row with Chris in your team

Win 4 battles in a row with Jeremy in your team

Mission Rewards: The Battle Against Skullron Complete/ Unlock Character: Skullron

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Posted on August 1, 2007 04:38

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Here is the fourth installment of characters in E.O.W. The Clones of Halogen. These characters are clones created by the corporation Halogen, and they were used to capture and defeat the first clone, Nicole, but thanks to Team E.O.W., the clones presented could not defeat and bring back Nicole.

Codename: Blossom: Blossom is the codename for the second clone created by Halogen. She is mainly used for close-quarters combat and for dangerous missions because of her healing abilities. With her power of manipulating flowers to use as an illusion, her combat skills, and her healing capabilities, she is a dangerous foe.

Healing Regeneration: Blossom heals her body by concentrating her naihatsu into the injured area to heal her wounds. (Heals 15 damage each round for 3 rounds. During this time, Dynamite Kick does 15 damage and costs 1 Random energy. Petal Dance cannot be used once Healing Regeneration is activated. 1 Naihatsu, 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)

Dynamite Kick: Blossom uses her super strenght and speed to deliver a crushing kick to the opponent. (Deals 25 damage to a single target. 1 Melee, Cooldown: 0)

Petal Dance: Blossom generates her naihatsu with the ground and the nature around her to create an illusion of many petals showering the opponent, making Blossom much faster and being able to disguise herself within the petals.(Blossom takes 33 percent less damage for three rounds and the enemy team's defense is weakened by 25 percent for three rounds. During this time, Dynamite Kick does 35 damage and costs 1 extra random energy. Healing Regeneration cannot be used once Petal Dance is in effect. 1 Genkaku, 1 Random, Cooldown: 5)

Dodge: Blossom uses her quick speed to dodge the enemy's attack: (Blossom is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Codename: Leech: Leech is the third clone created by Halogen. He is mainly used for investigation and for secret operations. His naihatsu power is to shoot or spit special leeches from his mouth that have the ability to absorb naihatsu and to explode when Leech gives the signal. With his leeches, he is very dangerous and must be faced carefully.

Place Leech: Leech places a special leech onto the enemy. (Places a leech onto the target until the target dies or the leech has exploded. 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Leech Absorbtion: The leech absorb's the enemy's naihatsu and gives it back to Leech thanks to a special bond between leech and his leeches. (Absorbs 1 Naihatsu and deals 10 damage to an enemy that has a leech on them. 1 Bloodline, Cooldown: 1)

Leech Explosion: Thanks to a special chemical in the leeches, the leeches can explode once Leech gives the signal from his brain. The Explosion will deal great damage to the enemy and anyone around them. (Deals 35 damage to the target who has a leech on them and deals 10 damage to the enemy's allies. This move removes the leech that was on the target. 1 Bloodline, 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Defensive Manuever: (Leech is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Codename: Armor: Armor is the fourth clone created by Halogen to capture Nicole. Her special abilities make her useful in combat and for defense. Her power is to create a substance that is more powerful than metal in the color of gold to either protect herself or her allies. Her powers make her a support member to her team, but she is reliable.

Golden Skin: Armor creates a living armor with the color of gold to protect herself. (Armor takes 75 percent less damage for five rounds. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)

Golden Barrier: Armor creates a gigantic barrier to protect her allies. During this time, Armor heals her allies inside the barrier as well. (Heals the team for 10 health points each round for two rounds and makes them invincible for those two rounds. 1 Genkaku, 2 Random, Cooldown: 5)

Golden Wall: Armor creates a golden wall to either protect her ally or she uses the wall to lift and smash her enemy. (Protects an ally for one round, or deals 25 damage to an enemy. 1 Genkaku, 1 Random, Cooldown: 1)

Small Golden Barrier: Armor creates a small barrier for herself to deflect enemy attacks. (Armor is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Codename: Virus: He is the elder brother and 1/2 of the fifth clone created by Halogen. His sister is the other half and also the fifth clone created by Halogen. Thanks to the books of the Heaven Mark, he can use the Heaven Mark to either aid his allies or to hurt his enemies. He uses weird, jellyfish-like beings to place on his allies and enemies to activate the Heaven Mark on anyone he chooses.

Summon Heaven Mark: Virus places a jellyfish-like substance on an ally or enemy. (Places a mark on the target to activate Virus's techniques. 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Heaven Mark: Unleash: Virus activates the Heaven Mark Unleash formation to either make allies more powerful or to cause pain to his enemies. (Virus gains one random energy for each ally with the Heaven Mark on them, and enemies take 15 undefendable damage when this is activated. 1 Naihatsu, Cooldown: 1)

Heaven Mark: Rage: Virus activates the Heaven Mark Rage formation to increase the power of his allies or to weaken the enemy's power. (Increases the attack power of any ally with the Heaven Mark on by 50 percent for one round, while enemies defense is weakened by 50 percent for one round. 1 Naihatsu, Cooldown: 1)

Defensive Manuever: (Virus is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Posted on August 1, 2007 04:54

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Very nice characters, only problem I have with em is that the leech guy is basically shino with damage XD

I support the name of N-B being changed to N-/b/

Posted on August 2, 2007 01:31

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Thank you, and yes I know that Leech is a different version of Shino except he does damage. But I think it is an excellent character and a marvelous addition to my collection. I will do the missions for the next set of unlockable characters in a little bit.

EDIT: I will have to post Talvin Korios here since there is no more room in the teamleaders area.

Talvin Korios: He is the teamleader of Team E.O.P. and is a unique individual. He is a half-Tensen demon. The Tensen are a cat-like race with Tao and Elemental powers. His element is fire, which makes good use with his Tao powers. With his Tao and Fire powers, he is an interesting opponent.

Blue Fire Dragon: Talvin combines his Tao and Fire powers to create a dragon made from blue fire to burn his opponents. (Deals 20 damage to all enemies and burns them for 5 damage each round for 3 rounds. The burning cannot be defended once in effect. This is doubled once Taoist Circle Trap is activated. 1 Naihatsu, 1 Random, Cooldown: 2)

Taoist Circle Trap: Talvin creates a large circle of energy that gives him and his allies strenght, disable any opponents defense, and prepares Talvin for his special attack. (Heals the entire party, including Talvin, for 10 HP each round for 5 rounds and disables all defense, including damage reduction skills, for 5 rounds. Activates Taoist Style: 100 Elemental Fists. 1 Genkaku, 1 Bloodline, Cooldown: 10)

Taoist Style: 100 Elemental Fists: This is Talvin's signature move and the most difficult for many Tensen to learn. Talvin's fists glow with energy, then he attacks his opponents with his fists 100 times, with every 20 fists being a diffferent element, starting with fire, then lightning, ice, earth, and lastly, Tao energy. Once it is finished, very few opponents survive this technique and the user is weakened once it is finished. (Deals 20 damage each round for 5 rounds with different effects each round. The first round burns the enemy for an extra 10 damage, the second round stuns the enemy, the third round stuns the enemy, the fourth round is unblockable, and the last round steals 1 naihatsu. Each effect has a 50 percent chance to work, and after the five rounds are over, Talvin cannot attack for 5 rounds. 1 Melee, 1 Bloodline, 1 Random, Cooldown: 8)

Tao Shield: Talvin creates a field of energy to block enemy attacks. (Talvin is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)

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Posted on August 2, 2007 04:44

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PM'd you about this. Either respond or add me on MSN. These characters need formatting. >_>

Posted on August 9, 2007 04:44

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Here are the next missions for the E.O.W. Collection called the Allies of E.O.W. Missions. These missions will unlock the allies of Team E.O.W. and I hope you like them, and give me your thoughts on them as well.

Allies of E.O.W. Missions

The Second Mission: Now that Team E.O.W. has proved themselves as a good team, Edward has another mission for them. Once they pass this mission, they may think about bringing in some new members.

Mission Info: Mission Name: The Second Mission/ Mission Type: C-Rank Mission/
Mission Requirements: Student Rank: At least C-Ranked Student

Mission Goals: Win 10 battles with only E.O.W. members on your team.

Mission Rewards: The Second Mission Completed
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The Task for Nicole: The Dumont Academy has three new students coming in from another basic academy. The first student's name is Devin Altwright, and he has to learn all about the school and needs to be taught more on combat. Devin has been assigned to Nicole, so Nicole can teach Devin how to be a better fighter and a better student. Before Devin will join Nicole and the others on missions, Devin would like to see Nicole's skills. If she can defeat some tough foes, then Devin will assist Team E.O.W. when he is needed.

Mission Info: Mission Name: The Task for Nicole Mission Type: C Rank Mission/ Missions Completed: The Second Mission

Mission Requirements: Student Rank: At least C-Rank Student

Mission Goals: Win 4 battles in a row with Nicole in your team

Defeat Blair Henson once with Nicole in your team

Mission Rewards: The Task for Nicole Completed, Unlocked Character: Devin Altwright
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The Task for Enzeru: The next new student is Frank Gekko, and his assignment is to become better with his ranged combat and to become a better student. He has been assigned to Enzeru so he can learn much more about ranged combat. Frank wants to see Enzeru in action so he can learn more, and if Enzeru can win his challenge, then Frank will train with Enzeru and the others to become better.

Mission Info: Mission Name: The Task for Enzeru / Mission Type: C Rank Mission/ Missions Completed: The Second Mission

Mission Requirements: Student Rank: At least C-Rank Student

Mission Goals: Win 4 battles in a row with Enzeru in your team

Defeat Bryan Knight once with Enzeru in your team

Mission Rewards: The Task for Enzeru Completed, Unlock Character, Frank Gekko
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The Task for Adam: The Third Student is named Tom Deacon, and his assignment is to master his naihatsu power to control time. He has been assigned to Adam to learn more of his power, since Adam can use psychic powers and would understand more of Tom's power than anyone else. Tom would like to see what Adam can do before they train together. Once Adam completes his challenge, Tom will train with Adam and the others and fight with them as well.

Mission Info: Mission Name: The Battle Against Kura/ Mission Type: B Rank Mission/ Missions Completed: The Second Mission

Mission Requirements: Student Rank: At least B-Rank Student

Mission Goals: Win 4 battles in a row with Adam in your team

Defeat Jasper Bigler Once with Adam in your team

Mission Rewards: The Task for Adam Completed, Unlocked Character: Tom Deacon
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The Search for Kira: Blake meets a new friend in Kira Bradley, and is impressed with her powers. Blake asks Kira if she wants to join Team E.O.W., but Kira needs help with a problem of her own. If Blake can help Kira defeat her enemies that would do her harm, then Kira will become a member of Team E.O.W.

Mission Info: Mission Name: The Battle Against Kura/ Mission Type: B Rank Mission/ Missions Completed: The Second Mission

Mission Requirements: Student Rank: At least B-Rank Student

Mission Goals: Win 4 Battles in a row with Blake in your team

Defeat Shawn Tyland once with Blake in your team

Mission Rewards: The Search for Kira Completed, Unlock Character: Kira Bradley

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Posted on August 9, 2007 06:11

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Just a note, I will be giving my feedback and possible suggestions in intervals due to the large amount of provided characters.

Blake D. Harrison:

I'd say this character is perfect, seeing as how he can produce a Tsunade / Shizune esque form of combat minus the healing features without suffering horribly to chakra costs.

Adam Ferguson:

I'd say he's rather perfect as well, seeing as how he introduces a Shikamaru effect minus the preparation, however even so, you balance things out with damage amounts, chakra cost and cooldowns.

Enzeru Del John:

Yet another great character, even though he may be particularly strong due to him using random chakra along with delivering quite noticeable damage, you balance him out perfectly with chakra costs and cooldowns.

Nicole:

She is fine as is. However, even with her rather powerful AoE attacks, the cooldowns and conflicts in chakra cost remedy it.

Jerimaiah Hughes:

As mentioned by Josh, the preparation should require at least a specific cost as it provides added benefits. As for light speed combo, It's perfect as is since it requires a prep just to do 25 damage for specific cost; Lowering it would just make it useless since it can't be used outside prep and would be weaker then your other characters using one random for 20 damage.

Talmage Brown:

He's rather overpowered, so I would consider changing Shining first to 30 damage and keeping the Energy Regeneration effect granting a 50% attack boost if given to allies, but changing the double damage boost to 25% if used on himself since the chakra drain move being enabled for three rounds is more then enough to make up.

Bryan Knight:

This character is decent as he produces a Kabuto / Jiraiya effect, only with offense being the focus, rather then draining and healing. However, like Josh I believe Distorting Soundwave should only be be usable twice on one specific character and sound wave having one extra random cost.

Dustin Brown:

I'd say his preparation move needs to have an extra random cost as mentioned by Josh
as it provides too many extra benefits for just one chakra. I'd say Niddle kiss is fine seeing as how another character can perform 40 damage while stunning with no prep.
The choji meat-tank esque move is fine as is.

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Ok Enaki lol great char. would like to see formating for them if someone helps you with that... (sry i can't lol i'm not good at that lol)

Blake D. Harrison: i might would make Puruzuma Oodzutsu 35 damage... it might be alittle overpowered...

Adam Ferguson: I think this is a well balanced good char.

Enzem Del John: For Fire i would make the 15 damage afterward uneffected by DR skills...

Nicole: Lions Roar i would make 25 AOE damage like Temari's is... same cooldown
Heavy lion Roar: make the cooldown 3 instead of 2

Jerimaiah Hughes: If possible make the prep a specific cost such as like 1 bloodline
2: Light speed combo is slightly overpowered... i would make it 20 damage OR make it 15 damage and stun the target.
3: Kinetic Strike: Does it destroy 1 blue energy or does it destroy 1 of any energy?

Talmage Brown: Energy Regen might be alittle overpowered... i would make it increase shining fist by 50% instead of doubleing it and make shining first only do 30 dmg no cooldown. Also if possible making the Cooldown on Energy Regen 5...

Bryan Knight: Sound wave is overpowered... take out the damage or increase the energy cost by say either 1 of the same cost or 1 diff. specific
Distorting Soundwave its overpowered slightly in my oppinion also... i would make the damage 15. Also this move should only work two times on a single opponent due to the fact that is all you can hit them with b/c of the cooldown :tounge

Dustin Brown: Needle Armor is overpowered for the cost... make it 1 blood 1 random.
2: Needle Kiss is overpowered... make its damage normally 15 and when Needle armor is in effect its damage 30...
3: Spiked Needle Ball is just like chouji'd Meat Tank :) just wanted to say that lol

AND thats all i got time for now Enaki... i'll do more later/tomorrow...

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Posted on August 9, 2007 17:37

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Enaki_Renraku wrote:

(This will take two to three posts to start this topic, so please do not lock this)

I am making a collection of characters based off an anime that I have been thinking of for quite some time now. Please make comments about my characters since I want to make them better, and if you can, please help me make artwork for some of these characters, since I am unable to do so since I am terrible at making art. This collection of characters will not be used in the custom made characters by me, but if you make the artwork for these characters, you may have full permission to use these characters, but give me some credit since I made these characters.

Default Characters:

Blake D. Harrison/ Adam Ferguson/ Enzeru Del John/ Nicole
Jerimaiah Hughes/ Talmage Brown/ Dustin Brown/ Bryan Knight
Blair Henson/ Sora Thomas/ Shiri Kazana/ Shawn Tyland
Jasper Bigler/ Chris Renalds/ Jeremy Irons/ Tyler Palmer

Unlockable Characters: Minions Of Darkness
Ima/ Replicon/ Kura Inizuchi/ Skullron

Allies of E.O.W.
Devin Altwright/ Frank Gekko /Tom Deacon/ Kira Bradley

Squad Teamleaders
Edward Johnson/ Bryce "Jackal" Newman/ Zane Metaru/ Nina Scott

Clones of Halogen
Codename: Blossom/ Codename: Leech/ Codename: Armor/ Codename: Virus/

More Coming Soon (Extremely Soon After someone posts or tomorrow)
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Here is the energy system of E.O.W., and let me say this before I begin: The energy of E.O.W. is made from four main energies (This is in order from the most common energy to the most rarest of energy that humans and people with powers have) Chi, Chakra, Naihatsu, Spirit Energy (Or also know as Reiatsu, if I am correct). Now here is the energy system:

Green: Melee And Weapon Combat (Melee): This is the most common attack that people use. People use hand to hand combat and weapon combat to battle enemies. When combine with other techniques, the attack is very powerful and can be used to the user's advantage.

Blue: Naihatsu and other energy attacks (Naihatsu): This is the attacks that are activated when people use their Naihatsu, Spirit Energy, Chakra, and/or Chi-based attacks that are powerful. When combined with other attacks, this makes the technique more powerful and the technique is even more powerful than before.

Red: Signature Techniques, Bloodline Moves, and Other Poweful Attacks (Bloodline): This is a person's most powerful attacks. This energy can be used to summon creatures, use techniques that only he/she can do, or attacks that the person has perfected to use for their very own. When combined with other moves, this makes the technique even more powerful, which results in more powerful summonings, ultimate attacks, or unleashing their fullest potential.

White: Genkaku Techniques (Genkaku): These techniques are used to create illusions, create spells, and to do other various attacks and techniques that are not technically qualified as naihatsu attacks. When combined with other techniques, the illusions are more powerful, and other attacks are increased in damage and summoning will be more easier.

Black: Random Energy: This is the random energy that is used by all people. Some random energy is mainly used by attacks that require little or no normal energy like puppet attacks and other attacks that do not qualify as Naihatsu attacks. When combined with any other energy, it increases the effect of that attack or technique.
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I will do my best to update everyday when I can, and please tell me what you think about all of my ideas, since I wish to do something with them, but not use them for the custom character contest, but you guys may use them if you wish, but give me some credit. I will create the first few characters in my next post. Thank you for taking your time to read all of this.

Good Idea!!! I really Like it! :cool

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Posted on August 9, 2007 17:59

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wow you must have really worked hard on making so many an anything i was gonna suggest has already been said by other people nice job

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Posted on August 9, 2007 18:39

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Thanks guys for helping me. I have changed some of the characters a little bit, and yes Joshwoo, Kinetic Strike destroys one of any energy. I will now update the E.O.W. Collection by adding new characters:

Yumaki Zen: Yumaki is a member of the organization Halogen and is Team leader of Team Helium. His Naihatsu power is to use proton energy as a weapon and blast his opponents with either an optic blast or a hand blast. His power, attack strenght, and his specialty of making bombs alone make him powerful, and he is devoted to his duty to serve Halogen.

Optic Blast: Yumaki blasts the opponent with his eyes and proton energy to create an optic blast to damage his enemies. (Deals 30 damage to a single target. 1 Naihatsu, 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Proton Beam: This is Yumaki's special attack, where he combines his proton energy into his entire hand, and then unleashes it onto the opponent in the shape of a beam attack. The damage done by this attack is powerful. (Deals 50 damage to a single target and that enemy cannot use his main energy type for 1 round. 1 Naihatsu, 1 Bloodline, Cooldown: 1)

Mini-Bomb: Yumaki throws a small bomb onto his opponent, then after getting to a safe location, Yumaki activates the bomb, which then blows up the enemy target and his team as well. (A bomb will be placed on the target the first round it is activated, and in the second round it deals 35 damage to the target and the enemy team receives 15 damage. 2 Random, Cooldown: 4)

Flash Bomb: Yumaki activates a Flash Bomb to distort the enemy while he goes to a safer location. (Yumaki is invincible this round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Detrick Montoya: Detrick is a member of the organization Halogen and is a member of Team Helium. His naihatsu power is to generate electricity from the air, and he uses it to damage his opponents. His secret weapon is his Claw Gauntlets which he uses to slice the enemy in a elegant fashion. With his claws and his naihatsu power, he is a devoted and powerful member of Halogen.

Claw Gauntlets: Detrick puts on his Claw Gauntlets in case his enemy is powerful enough for him. With the Gauntlets with him, he is more deadly than before. (Thunder Claw does double damage, Activates Electrocution and Detrick takes 25 percent less damage for four rounds. 1 Random, Cooldown: 3)

Thunder Claw: Detrick uses his basic technique called Thunder Claw, which uses electricity and his fists to shock his enemy with the electricity in his fist. This is even more deadly with his Claw Gauntlets. (Deals 20 damage to a single target. Deals 40 damage when Claw Gauntlets is activated. 1 Melee, Cooldown: 0)

Electrocution: Detrick generates electricity from his body into his Claw Gauntlets, and then shocks the enemy for a long period of time, electrocuting his opponent and making them suffer. (Deals 20 damage to a single target each round for 3 rounds. This is unaffected by damage reduction skills. Requires Claw Gauntlets. 1 Melee, 1 Naihatsu, 1 Random, Cooldown: 6)

Defensive Manuever: (Detrick is invincible this round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Lilith Jones: Lilith is another member of Halogen and a member of Team Helium. Her special naihatsu power is that her blood is a living poison that she can use to her advantage, and her other naihatsu power is her healing powers and can remove poison. Her main weapon is her needles combined with her poisonus blood on the needles, and once the poison is in the target's blood, she can kill her target with ease, making her a deadly foe.

Heal: Lilith is able to heal her allies using naihatsu and is able to heal any situations that come her way. (Heals an ally for 35 health points. 2 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Poison Needle: Lilith fires her poison needles at a single target, if it hits, then she will be able to use her secret technique. (Deals 15 damage to a single target and poisons them for 5 damage each round for 2 rounds, during this time, Fatal Poison can be activated on the target. 2 Random, Cooldown: 1)

Fatal Poison: Once her poison blood is inside her target, she can now activate her secret technique. Her poison strangles every part of the body that is affected with the poison until the body part affected with the poison is literally nearly broken apart due to the poison. If this is used on an important part of the body, then this attack is indeed fatal enough to kill someone. (Instantly kills the target who is affected by Poison Needle. 1 Bloodline, 2 Random, Cooldown: 5)

Defensive Manuever: (Lilith is invincible this round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Robert Marsh: Robert is a member of Team Poko and is the main hard worker in the group because of his naihatsu power. Other than increased intelligence, Robert's naihatsu power is to duplicate himself to make an army of him. With his powers and his weapons, he is a tricky fighter.

Duplicate: Robert duplicates himself to not only hide from his opponent, but makes him stronger as well. (Robert takes 50 percent less damage and activates his moves for five rounds. 1 Genkaku, Cooldown: 4)

Mass Duplication: Robert creates even more duplications of himself to protect his allies and to begin his special attack to defeat his enemies. (Robert's allies take 33 percent less damage for three rounds and activates Mass Duplication Strike for three rounds. Requires Duplicate. 1 Genkaku, 1 Random, Cooldown: 2)

Mass Duplication Strike: With all of his duplicates of himself, he attacks the opponent with a massive army of duplicates to deal damage to the enemy target. (Deals 80 damage to a single target. This is unaffected by damage reduction skills. Requires Mass Duplication. 1 Genkaku, 2 Random, Cooldown: 1)

Defensive Manuever: (Robert is invincible this round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)

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Posted on August 10, 2007 02:03

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OK here is some more i've looked at....

Blair Henson: Blast of Fire i would switch the damage around.. make it 20 damage than 15 afterwards and the 15 being undefendable... but it doesn't matter either way just 15 first then 20 after looks funny to me lol... her summon is a LOT like 3rds... i would rework the summon somehow.... its to much like his...

Sora Thomas: decrease crystal armors cooldown by 1 and make it 2... besides that shes pretty balanced...

Shiri Kazana: i like this char. and she/he is balanced...

Shawn Tyland: Electrical Currents energy cost is to low... make it 2 specifics.... like 1 gen 1 blue besides this he is pretty well balanced...

Okie dokies i'll do more later :)

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Posted on August 12, 2007 06:40

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Thank you very much, Joshwoo89. I hope to hear you again soon. And for those who may not know, this is a bump so I can keep this thing alive right now.

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