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Posted on July 8, 2007 21:11

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ATTENTION: Before you read this, the characters are written down since I suck at making templates and cannot find an artist, if you can help me find either an artist or a template maker, it would be most appreciated

(This will take two to three posts to start this topic, so please do not lock this, If you wish to know more about E.O.W. Please contact me about that, and I will explain everything to you from the characters to the story of E.O.W.)

I am making a collection of characters based off an anime that I have been thinking of for quite some time now. Please make comments about my characters since I want to make them better, and if you can, please help me make artwork for some of these characters, since I am unable to do so since I am terrible at making art. This collection of characters will not be used in the custom made characters by me.

Default Characters:

Blake D. Harrison/ Adam Ferguson/ Enzeru Del John/ Nicole
Jerimaiah Hughes/ Talmage Brown/ Dustin Brown/ Bryan Knight
Blair Henson/ Sora Thomas/ Shiri Kazana/ Shawn Tyland
Jasper Bigler/ Chris Renalds/ Jeremy Irons/ Tyler Palmer
Yumaki Zen/ Detrick Montoya/ Lilith Jones/ Robert Marsh (Yumaki, Detrick, Lilith, and Robert on Page 2)

Unlockable Characters: Minions Of Darkness
Ima/ Replicon/ Kura Inizuchi/ Skullron

Allies of E.O.W.
Devin Altwright/ Frank Gekko /Tom Deacon/ Kira Bradley

Squad Teamleaders
Edward Johnson/ Bryce "Jackal" Newman/ Zane Metaru/ Nina Scott
Keylin Yokami/ Scott Nowiki/ Selene Kienra/ Talvin Korios/ Brent Alaster/
Kylie Noten (Page 2)

Clones of Halogen
Codename: Blossom/ Codename: Leech/ Codename: Armor/ Codename: Virus/ (Page 2)

Students from Asuka Academy
Saiyuki Denaka/ Takashi Morinaka/ Keiko Akaeda/ Hideki Koyama (Page 3)

Students from Tarrack Academy
Snow/ Lily Tarrace/ John "Claw" Brent/ (Page 3)

Students from Rienhart Academy
Nima Stalworth/ Bruce Talwit/ Simon Del John/ (Page 4)

Students from Kaiser Academy
Daevon Lucious/ Lance Drey/ Burei "Birdman" Almont/ Hikami Soyuku (Page 5)

Students from Eureka Academy
Dan Morrison/ Taina Swartz/ Ken Obuso/ Liroy Duos (Page 7)
Kaisei Duos/ The Duos Brothers

Students from Naioshi Academy
Hanalei Daishi/ Zanimaru Jakuso/ Jitoshi Kaname/ Sentoshi Matenabu (Page 8)

First Enemies of E.O.W.
Faruque Almont/Tarrence Balrus/ Don Balrus/ Karashi Dulston (Page 5)

The Kongou Tansen Clan
Darrius Clyden/ Senjen/ Kaijin/ Gem Soldier (Page 6)

Team Oxygen of Halogen
Uden Calatine/ Fay Nejin/ Kayla Ford/ Kalene Ford (Page 6)

Opponents from the 39th Grand Tour Tournament (Page 7)
Nizon Nuoshi/ Garen Jao & Genzo/ Lillien Valsto/ Kain Solace

Mentors Of Blake (Page 8)
Chris Harrison/ De Harrison/ Grave/ Xavier Child

Coming Soon: Special Characters
Arcane Grave/ Asura Knuckle Chris/ Psychosis Blake/ Jasper: Tao Form
Water Blake/ Earth Nicole/ Wind Blake/ Fire Adam/ Metal Adam/ Thunder Enzeru
Faruque (King Marabuta Form)/ Light J.R./Darkness J.R./ The Profound Darkness

Coming Soon: Beast Forms
Blake: Feral Form/ Himishi: Demon Form/ Grave: Devil Form/ (More to be announced)

Minions of The Profound Darkness (Page 9)
Marabuta/ Skullren/ Sliver/ Flayer

Coming Soon: Mistress Himishi & Associates
Mistress Himishi/ Bojack/ Tren Nioshi/ Warhawk/ Wrento "Iron" Carl

Coming Soon: Unknown Forces
(Characters to be announced)

More Coming Soon (Not very soon, but soon, I have to work on missions)

Updated Missions: Page 9
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Here is the energy system of E.O.W., and let me say this before I begin: The energy of E.O.W. is made from four main energies (This is in order from the most common energy to the most rarest of energy that humans and people with powers have) Chi, Chakra, Naihatsu, Spirit Energy (Or also know as Reiatsu, if I am correct). Now here is the energy system:

Green: Melee And Weapon Combat (Melee): This is the most common attack that people use. People use hand to hand combat and weapon combat to battle enemies. When combine with other techniques, the attack is very powerful and can be used to the user's advantage.

Blue: Naihatsu and other energy attacks (Naihatsu): This is the attacks that are activated when people use their Naihatsu, Spirit Energy, Chakra, and/or Chi-based attacks that are powerful. When combined with other attacks, this makes the technique more powerful and the technique is even more powerful than before.

Red: Signature Techniques, Bloodline Moves, and Other Poweful Attacks (Bloodline): This is a person's most powerful attacks. This energy can be used to summon creatures, use techniques that only he/she can do, or attacks that the person has perfected to use for their very own. When combined with other moves, this makes the technique even more powerful, which results in more powerful summonings, ultimate attacks, or unleashing their fullest potential.

White: Genkaku Techniques (Genkaku): These techniques are used to create illusions, create spells, and to do other various attacks and techniques that are not technically qualified as naihatsu attacks. When combined with other techniques, the illusions are more powerful, and other attacks are increased in damage and summoning will be more easier.

Black: Random Energy: This is the random energy that is used by all people. Some random energy is mainly used by attacks that require little or no normal energy like puppet attacks and other attacks that do not qualify as Naihatsu attacks like spells, some melee techniques, and other attacks and techniques. When combined with any other energy, it increases the effect of that attack or technique.
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E-Rank New Student: First Starting Rank: Level 1-5
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D-Rank Student: Second Rank: Level 6-10
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C-Rank Student: Third Rank: Level 11-15
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B-Rank Student: Fourth Rank:Level 16-20
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A-Rank Student: Fifth Rank: Level 21-25
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S-Rank Student: Sixth Rank: Level 26-30
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Halogen Soldier: Seventh Rank: Level 31-35
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Saiga Force Member: Eighth Rank: Level 36-40
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Warrior of Legend: Ninth Rank: Level 41-45
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Headmaster: Tenth Rank: Level 46-50
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I will do my best to update everyday when I can, and please tell me what you think about all of my ideas, since I wish to do something with them, I will create the first few characters in my next post. Thank you for taking your time to read all of this. Once again, If you wish to know more about E.O.W. Please contact me about that, and I will explain everything to you from the characters to the story of E.O.W.

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Posted on July 8, 2007 21:17

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What series do these ideas oroginate?

Oh nevermind, I read the first paragraph.

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Posted on July 8, 2007 22:10

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Here are the first few characters:

Blake D. Harrison: He is the captain of Team E.O.W. and is an intelligent warrior. His Naihatsu power is plasma energy manipulation and he uses it to his fullest advantage, and he is able to use his powers and his fighting skills to damage his opponents.

Shoku-Shahou: Blake fires his plasma energy in the shape of bullets to attack his enemies. (Deals 20 damage to a single target. 1 Naihatsu, Cooldown: 0)

Puruzuma Oodzutsu: Blake charges up his energy to create a massive blast of energy from his palms. (Deals 45 damage to a single target and stuns the target for one round. 1 Naihatsu, 1 Random, Cooldown: 1)

Masashi Combo: Blake attacks the enemy with various blows to the stomach and attacks the enemy with a finishing blow. (Deals 15 damage to the enemy each round for three rounds. 1 Melee, 1 Random, Cooldown: 3)

Plasma Clone: Blake creates a clone from his own energy to take a hit for him. (Blake is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Adam Ferguson: Adam is a member of Team E.O.W. and is an expert in psychic powers. With his powers of telekinesis, pyrokinesis, and Shielding himself from enemy attacks, he is a powerful psychic.

Telekinesis: Adam uses telekinesis to throw an object or to hold an opponent and throw him into another area. (Stuns an opponent for two rounds. During this time, pyrokinesis and mind bullet deals more damage to an opponent trapped by telekinesis. 1 Bloodline, 1 Random, Cooldown: 3)

Pyrokinesis: Adam uses pyrokinesis to burn the enemy team and to deal great damage. (Burns the enemy team for 15 damage each round for two rounds. Deals 20 damage to an opponent trapped in Telekinesis. 1 Bloodline, 1 Random, Cooldown: 2)

Mind Bullet: Adam fires a blast of energy from his forehead and deals damage to the enemy. (Deals 20 damage to the enemy target. Deals 40 damage to a target trapped by telekinesis. 1 Bloodline, Cooldown: 0)

Shield: Adam creates a psychic bubble-like shield to protect himself. (Adam is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Enzeru Del John: Enzeru is a mage and is a member from Team E.O.W. His magic attacks can attack the enemy and can deal great damage to the enemy.

Fire: Enzeru uses the spell fire to burn his enemies. (Deals 20 damage to a single target and burns the target for 10 damage the next round. This is undefendable once in effect. 2 Random, Cooldown: 1)

Thunder: Enzeru uses the spell thunder to attack an enemy. (Deals 25 damage to a single target. 2 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Blizzard: Enzeru uses the spell blizzard to freeze his enemies. (Deals 20 damage to a single target and the target is unable to use a skill for one round. 2 Random, Cooldown: 1)

Protection Shield: Enzeru uses the spell protect to shield himself from an attack. (Enzeru is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Nicole: Nicole is the first clone created by the organization Halogen. She was created to have immense strenght and to have super-sonic screeching abilities. She is now a member of E.O.W. and uses her strenght to protect her friends.

Heavy Fist: Nicole attacks an enemy with her super strenght and her powerful fist attack that can even break stone and punch through metal. (Deals 25 damage to a single target. 1 Melee, 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Lion's Roar: Nicole Screams with full force and attacks her enemies with her super-sonic yell. (Deals 25 damage to all targets. 1 Genkaku, 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Heavy Lion's Roar: Nicole uses her ultimate technique to deal damage and to attack her enemies with full force. (Deals 45 damage to all targets. This is unaffected by damage reduction skills. 2 Genkaku, 1 Random, Cooldown: 2)

Defensive Manuever: (Nicole is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)

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Posted on July 9, 2007 00:01

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Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. It is our light, not our darkness, that most frightens us. Your playing small does not serve the world. There is nothing enlightened about shrinking so that other people won't feel insecure around you. We are all meant to shine as children do. It's not just in some of us; it is in everyone. And as we let our own lights shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same. As we are liberated from our own fear, our presence automatically liberates others. ~Shin.

Posted on July 9, 2007 01:16

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Here are the next default characters:

Jerimaiah Hughes: Jerimaiah is a member of Team Dynamite and is the team's fastest member. The reason why is because his Naihatsu power is super speed and using kinetic energy as a weapon by using friction. His speedy attacks are useful against most opponents.

Vibration: Jerimaiah vibrates at fast speeds to make himself harder to hit and to begin his attacks. (Jerimaiah receives 33 percent less damage and activates his attacks for four rounds. 1 Bloodline, Cooldown: 3)

Light Speed Combo: Jerimaiah goes at a fast rate and punches his opponent various times until the enemy is worn down and tired. (Deals 25 damage to a single target. 1 Melee, Cooldown: 0)

Kinetic Strike: Jerimaiah creates enough friction in his feet to make his attack very powerful, and then once Jerimaiah has enough friction, he attacks his opponent with powerful force. (Deals 55 damage to a single target and destroys one random energy. 1 Melee, 1 Bloodline, Requires Vibration. Cooldown: 1)

Dodge: (Jerimaiah is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Talmage Brown: He is a member of Team Dynamite and is a tactical person when using his powers. His naihatsu power is energy manipulation and his signature move is his Shining Fist attack. He also has the ability to increase the power of his allies and to increase his own power as well.

Shining Fist: Talmage creates enough power and energy into his fist to attack his enemy with his technique, the Shining Fist. (Deals 30 Damage to a single target. 1 Naihatsu, 1 Random, Cooldown: 1)

Energy Regeneration: Talmage gives his own energy to an ally to make him stronger or increases his own energy to make him stronger. (If used on an ally, his/her attack power will be increased by 50 percent for two rounds. If used on himself, Shining Fist does 100 percent more damage and activates Shining Burst for three rounds. 2 Naihatsu, Cooldown: 5)

Shining Burst: Talmage puts all his energy into his palm in the shape of a giant ball called Shining Burst. (Deals 25 damage to all enemy targets and destroys one random energy. Requires Energy Regeneration. 1 Naihatsu, 1 Random, Cooldown: 1)

Teleport: (Talmage is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Bryan Knight: Bryan is a member of Team Dynamite, and his naihatsu power is sound manipulation through his headset microphone and his power. He is able to disable the enemy's defenses and weaken them as well.

Prepare Microphone: Bryan prepares the proper volume needed for his microphone and stores energy into his mouth to prepare his attacks. (Activates Bryan's attacks for five rounds. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)

Soundwave: Bryan shouts and creates a soundwave from his shouting. This soundwave paralyzes the enemy team is makes them unable to defend. (The enemy team will be unable to properly defend for four rounds and deals 15 damage to the enemy team. 1 Genkaku, 1 Random, Cooldown: 3)

Distorting Soundwave: Bryan targets a single target and produces a soundwave that drains the body's energy and the enemy's defense will be weakened. (Deals 20 damage to a single target and decreases the enemy's defense by 25 percent. It's ability to weaken defense can only be used four times on a single opponent, but still does normal damage. 1 Genkaku, Cooldown: 0)

Defensive Manuever: (Bryan is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Dustin Brown: Dustin is the team captain of Team Dynamite and is the most unique member because of his power. He is able to create thick, powerful needles that can cover his entire body or his hair, and he can shoot the needles at will.

Needle Armor: Dustin covers his entire body with needles and makes himself harmful to the enemy's melee attacks. (Dustin takes 50 percent less damage and if any enemy hits Dustin with any attack that requires Melee will take 15 damage for four rounds. 1 Bloodline, 1 Random, Cooldown: 3)

Needle Kiss: Dustin fires his needles at an opponent to deal damage. When Needle Armor is activated, the attack is faster and hits the enemy with great accuracy. (Deals 20 damage to a single target. Deals double damage when Needle Armor is activated. The starting damage is reduced to 15 during Spiked Needle Ball. 1 Melee, Cooldown: 0)

Spiked Needle Ball: Dustin creates more thicker and powerful needles over his entire body and then rolls himself around to create a big ball of thick and huge needles in the shape of a ball. He then rolls onto the target, dealing damage and making himself invincible. (Deals 10 damage each round for two rounds while making Dustin invincible for two rounds. The starting damage is increased to 20 damage when Needle Armor is activated. 1 Bloodline, Cooldown: 3)

Needle Wall: Dustin creates needles all over his body and stands to make a needle wall which will block most attacks. (Dustin is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)

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Posted on July 9, 2007 02:27

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Yep, that works for the first set.

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Posted on July 9, 2007 02:38

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Second set's good too now.

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Posted on July 9, 2007 04:17

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I have changed All of Team E.O.W. and I have changed both Talmage and Dustin, and yes, Bryan's distorting soundwave amplifies the damage against targets that have no defenses up. Here is the next team:

Blair Henson: She is captain of Team Star and her abilities make her the strongest member of Team Star. Her Naihatsu ability is the manipulation of fire, and she uses fire to damage her opponents. Thus, combining her melee capibilities with her fire and her summoning abilities, she is an excellent fighter.

Blazing Palm: Blair uses her fire combined with her strenght to attack her foes. (Deals 15 damage to a single target and burns them for 10 damage the next round. You are unable to attack a target with this attack twice in a row. This damage is undefendable once in effect. 1 Melee, Cooldown: 0)

Blast of Fire: Blair places enough fire into her palm, and then like a flame thrower, she bursts it onto the enemy team. (Deals 15 damage to the enemy team, and deals 15 damage to them the next round. This is unblockable once in effect. 1 Melee, 1 Naihatsu, Cooldown: 1)

Summoning: Fire Spirit Genko: Blair uses all her energy to summon Genko, her own Fire Spirit. Although Genko is not a major summoning, he is a powerful summon that can attack Blair's foes while protecting her. (Deals 15 damage to the enemy team each round for three rounds, while Blair cannot go below 1 HP for three rounds. 1 Naihatsu, 1 Bloodline, 1 Random, Cooldown: 6)

Defensive Manuever: (Blair is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Sora Thomas: She is a member of Team Star and the main defender of the team because of her special ability. Her Naihatsu power is to make Crystal Mirrors appear out of thin air, and she uses her mirrors to attack her enemies and to defend her allies.

Mirror Strike: Sora's Crystal Mirrors are able to produce a certain light that is able to strike at enemies and steal their naihatsu and Sora can use the gained naihatsu for her own. (Deals 20 damage to a single target and steals one random energy. This becomes an AoE move when Mass Crystal Mirror shield is activated. 1 Bloodline, 1 Random, Cooldown: 1)

Crystal Armor: Sora can also manipulate the Crystal Mirrors to form them in any shape she pleases. Sora forms the mirrors into armor for her allies to wear to protect them in combat. (Makes one ally invincible for one round. 1 Bloodline, Cooldown: 2)

Mass Crystal Mirror Shield: Sora combines various Crystal Mirrors to form a barrier around her allies to protect them from enemies. (Protects the entire team for two rounds. During this time, Mirror Strike is an Area of Effect move. 2 Bloodline, 1 Random, Cooldown: 5)

Crystal Mirror Shield: Sora creates a crystal mirror to shield her from enemy attacks. (Sora is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Shiri Kazana: She is a member of Team Star, and she is the most trickiest member because of her ability to create portals where she can pass through and go to another area far away or at a close distance. She can also create portals near opponents to attack them, or teleport an ally to safety.

Meditate: Shiri must be at a perfect state of mind to fully control the portals she creates. (Activates her attacks for four rounds. 1 Random, Cooldown: 3)

Portal to Safety: Shiri creates a portal to get an ally to a safer location. (An ally is invincible for one round. 1 Genkaku, Cooldown: 0)

Teleport Strike: Shiri creates a portal to her and various portals around an enemy. She then attacks at her portal, while fists come out at the enemy's portals, dealing damage to the enemy. And since the enemy is near various portals, he will stay there or else he will teleport right back to the same area he was before. (Deals 10 damage each round for five rounds to a single target, while Shiri takes 25 percent less damage. This attack can be used on more than one target. 1 Genkaku, 1 Melee, Cooldown: 2)

Teleport: Shiri creates a portal to teleport to a safer area. (Shiri is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Shawn Tyland: Shawn is the leader of Team Poko, and is highly cocky of his naihatsu power. His power is manipulating a green-like electricity. He also requires the help of the other members of Team Poko to assist him in combat, but he is more of a tactical fighter than he is a strong fighter.

Electrical Current: Shawn makes the entire area into one huge lightning rod, and stuns the entire enemy team while making the area a lightning rod. Once the stunning ability stops, a bolt of thunder will strike at a random target. (Stuns the enemy team for one round. After this, a random enemy will take 25 damage. 1 Genkaku, 1 Random, Cooldown: 3)

Summon Poko Allies: Shawn summons the various members of Team Poko. With his team with him, he can plan for them to attack the enemy team. (Activates Team Poko Strike for three rounds. 1 Genkaku, Cooldown: 2)

Team Poko Strike: All the members of Team Poko attack the enemy all at once. This deals great damage to a single target. (Deals 70 damage to a single target. 1 Melee, 2 Random, Cooldown: 1)

Retreat: Shawn runs from the battlefield to go to a safer area, and then comes back to attack. (Shawn is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)

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Posted on July 9, 2007 05:46

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#10

I have edited all of Team Star. I am now going to do Team Dark Knights and Tyler Palmer, the final default characters.

Jasper Bigler: He is the captain of Team Dark Knights, and is a ninja himself. His main power is the manipulation of wind, and his Chakra-based powers aid him in battle. With his powerful wind techniques and ninja skills, he truly has potential to become a powerful ninja. He is already one of the most powerful students in the academy.

Shuriken Strike: Jasper throws various shuriken combined with chakra at an opponent to attack the enemy team with full force. (Deals 25 damage to all targets. 1 Naihatsu, 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Windmill Tornado: This is Jasper's signature move. The move is when Jasper spins his Giant Shuriken around, creating a vortex of wind and unleashes it upon his foes, dealing damage to the enemy. (Deals 40 damage to an enemy and that enemy cannot defend next turn. 1 Naihatsu, 1 Bloodline, Cooldown: 1)

Windmill Shuriken: Jasper summons his Windmill Shuriken to aid him in battle. With it, he is able to hit an opponent from a far away distance with full force and devastating results. (Deals 30 damage to a single target. 1 Melee, 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Replacement Technique: (Jasper is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Chris Renalds: He is a member of Team Dark Knights, and is very useful with his naihatsu power. He is able to shoot burst of energy from his eyes, and with his glasses, he can do various other techniques as well.

Optic Blast: Chris shoots an enemy at a long distance to damage the enemy. (Deals 25 damage. 2 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Optic Wave: When his glasses turn yellow, his glasses enables his optic blast to hit all who stand in his way. (Deals 20 damage to the enemy team. 1 Naihatsu, 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Bubble Blast: When his glasses turn blue, he can create a beam in the shape of a bubble to trap his enemy into a round bubble. (Stuns the enemy target for two rounds. 1 Naihatsu, 1 Random, Cooldown: 5)

Replacement Technique: (Chris is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Jeremy Irons: He is a member of Team Dark Knights, and is a master at teleportation instantly. With his teleporting abilities, he is a great ninja, and a powerful warrior in combat.

Meditate: To teleport, he must think freely and to be able to be calm during all sitituations. (Activates his attacks for four rounds. 1 Random, Cooldown: 3)

Teleport Strike: Jeremy teleports behind his enemy and attack him. (Deals 25 piercing damage to a single target. 1 Melee, Cooldown: 0)

Chaotic Barrage: Jeremy instantly teleports and attacks his enemy for various times until the enemy is weakened. (Deals 15 damage each round for four rounds to a single target. During this time, Jeremy takes 25 percent less damage. If the enemy uses Melee skills during this time, they lose the ability to gain energy for 1 turn. 1 Melee, 1 Genkaku, Cooldown: 3)

Teleport: (Jeremy is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Tyler Palmer: He is a member of Team Poko and is Shawn's best friend. His Naihatsu power is to turn into a clay-like substance demon and to attack his enemy with his power. His brute strenght is powerful and not to be taken lightly.

Transform: Tyler transforms into a clay like creature who is able to attack the enemy team. (Activates Tyler's attacks for five rounds and Tyler takes 50 percent less damage. 1 Bloodline, Cooldown: 4)

Clay Bullet: Tyler shoots a bullet of clay from his mouth to damage his foe. (Deals 25 damage. 1 Naihatsu, Cooldown: 0)

Explosive Clay Bullet: Tyler creates a bullet with explosive properties, and then uses it to attack the enemy with extreme power while it damages the enemies nearby. (Deals 40 damage to a single target, while the other members of the enemy team takes 20 damage. 1 Naihatsu, 1 Random, Cooldown: 1)

Clay Shield: Tyler creates a shield made of clay to defend him from enemy attacks. (Tyler is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)

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Posted on July 9, 2007 06:21

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Team Dark's alright.

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#12

Jeremaiah: His only good move is his prep, and it's too good. Nerf and buff accordingly

Talmage: You should re-think his energy regeneration. Because it makes him so powerful, while doing relatively little for an ally by comparison, there's no reason you'd ever use it on anyone but him, unless he was about to die.

Brian: Weak. Kabuto has the same skill, but it doesn't require prep (btw, defense boosts are considered defending, so you don't need to say that it negates them)

Shawn: Spiked Needle Ball=Meat Tank :suspicious

Blair: Ditch the cooldown on Blazing and make it unable to affect the same target twice in a row. Also decrease the damage on Blast by at least 5.

Sora: I never knew "Shino" could be spelled with an "A" and an "R" :suspicious

Shiri: lol you said "most trickiest." Anyway, her ally invuln skill doesn't need more than 1 cooldown.

Shawn: First character I actually like. Given that its prep is specific, I say you should add 5 damage to Team Poko Strike

Jasper: Real ninja didn't use chakra... :suspicious

You should do some research on Wikipedia. Anyway, since his other moves are so powerful, you definitely need to nerf Windmil to 30.

Chris: You should change this guy's name to "Needs to be buffed Renalds"

Jeremy: Wow, I didn't think you could make a character who needs to be buffed even more than Chris, but apparently I was wrong.

Tyler: Nerf the single hit and splash damages to 45 and 15 respectively, or add 5 damage to his other move and make the cooldown for the prep 5.

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Posted on July 10, 2007 06:13

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I have changed and updated most of the characters, and I have changed Team Dark Knights and Tyler a little bit. Naruto Red Fox, thank you for helping me with this, and Chris Nemo, I did say that in the E.O.W. universe, people can use four different types of energies, and Jasper uses Chakra, so in this universe, he can use Chakra like the others use naihatsu powers, so it would be accurate that he uses Chakra and I have said in the first post that very few normal humans and people with powers can use four different types of energy, but most people with powers use Chakra, Naihatsu, and Spirit Energy, while most and nearly all humans mainly either do not use powers or simply use Chi (or kinetic energy) as the basic means of attack. BUT you are correct that I forgot to add a power for Jasper, since it would explain how he can use Chakra, so I will do this now. And while we are on the topic, I could not think of a better name for some of the characters, so I had to choose what was best, and some of the techniques were either the ones I had to think up, and attacks that I had to re-create into something seen before, but something new at the same time.

I will now create the Unlockable Characters, starting with the evil generals of the first villian of E.O.W.

Ima: She is the main henchman of Faruqe, and she is a poweful being. Her naihatsu power is simple energy manipulation, but combined with her secret weapon, a giant key, she is able to create massive damage to all who stand in her way.

Giant Key Smash: Ima uses her weapon, a giant key to smash all of her opponents in her way. (Deals 25 damage to a single target. 1 Melee, 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Cannon Burst: Ima shoots energy out of the key to attack her enemies. (Deals 10 damage to a single target and stuns them for one round. 1 Naihatsu, Cooldown: 0)

Giant Cannon Blast: Ima concentrates all of her energy into her key, and then lets it all out in a huge burst, destroying objects and enemies alike. (Deals 25 damage to the enemy team and stuns them for one round. 1 Naihatsu, 1 Genkaku, Cooldown: 2)

Defensive Manuever: (Ima is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Replicon: A mysterious creature with one eye and tentacles that works for Faruqe. He has the ability to shapeshift into anyone he chooses, and the ability to turn enemies into stone. With these powers, he is an excellent member to Faruqe's army.

Transform: Replicon transforms into anyone to get the upper hand on the enemy. When transformed into someone, he has all the powers that the person he shapeshifted into has. (Transforms into an enemy target for four rounds. 1 Genkaku, 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)

Tentacle Strike: Replicon uses one of his tentacles to strike his foes. (Deals 15 damage to a single target. He cannot use this technique while transformed into someone. 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Petrifying Gaze: Replicon transforms the target to stone. (Stuns the target for one round. He cannot use this technique while transformed into someone. 1 Genkaku, Cooldown: 1)

Defensive Manuever: (Replicon is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Kura Inizuchi: She is another ally of Faruqe and her naihatsu power is to extend her hair to long distances. Now that she has braided her long hair, she is even more dangerous since her hair can trap opponents and damage them as well.

Hair Snare: Kura uses her hair to trap all enemies in her way. (Stuns the enemy team for two rounds. 1 Genkaku, 1 Bloodline, Cooldown: 5)

Hair Whip: Kura uses her hair to attack her enemies with great force. (Deals 30 damage to a single enemy target. This does 100 percent more damage when Hair Snare is activated. 1 Genkaku, 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Absorbtion: Once snared in her hair, Kura uses her hair to drain the enemy of their naihatsu. (Destroys one random energy and steals two random energy from the enemy. Requires Hair Snare. 1 Genkaku, 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)

Defensive Manuever: (Kura is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Skullron: A faithful member of Faruqe, and is useful as a magician. His naihatsu power is to summon skeletons to aid him in combat or to protect him even more.

Skeleton Armor: Skullron creates an armor made from skeletons to increase his defensive powers. (Skullron takes 50 percent less damage for four rounds. 1 Bloodline, Cooldown: 3)

Summoning: Skeletons: Skullron summons skeletons to aid him in combat and to assist him in defeating his foes. (Deals 30 damage to a single target. This is undefendable damage. 1 Bloodline, 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Major Summoning: Blood Skull: Skullron summons his strongest skeleton, Blood Skull. Blood Skull can easily kill a single foe, and take the victim's naihatsu and give it to Skullron. (Kills one target and your team gains two random energy this round. This can be only used once per battle. Only one major summoning can be used once per team. 1 Melee, 1 Bloodline, 1 Naihatsu, 1 Genkaku, Cooldown: 255

Skeleton Defense: Skullron summons skeletons to guard him from attacks. (Skullron is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)

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Posted on July 16, 2007 22:50

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I am making the next unlockable characters, and I may do the missions for the characters after the third set of unlockable characters is released. This group is called Allies of E.O.W. because all of these characters are allies of Team E.O.W. and that all of them have abilities that makes them helpful allies.

Devin Altwright: He is one of the new academy students that wishes to create a team of his own. For now, he helps Team E.O.W. since he has been assigned as a "little brother" of that team to help him learn everything about the academy and to further his training. He uses his armor and his weapons to aid him in battle.

Activate Armor: Devin has created his own cybernetic armor to aid him in battle. When he needs to put it on, he activates it with his watch to transform into his battle armor. (Devin takes 33 percent less damage and activates his attacks for four rounds. 1 Random, Cooldown: 3)

Sword Slash: Devin uses his sword to cut his enemies and most objects when he needs to. (Deals 30 damage to a single target. 1 Melee, 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Piercing Strike: Devin strikes the enemy with full force and disables the enemy's defenses, making this a lethal blow. (Deals 50 damage to the enemy target. This is unaffected by damage reduction skills. 2 Melee, Cooldown: 1)

Defensive Manuever: (Devin is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Frank Gekko: Frank Gekko is another "little brother" to Team E.O.W. He has no known naihatsu power but can use naihatsu energy. He is also able to transform into an reptile-like creature that makes him stronger and faster than he is while in human form.

Reptile Form: Frank transforms into a reptile-like creature that is able to increase his power by great amounts. (Increases his abilites and gives him a 25 percent damage reduction for three rounds. 1 Bloodline, Cooldown: 2)

Buster Cannon: Frank has two buster cannons on him and uses them to blast the enemy. While in his reptile form, he is faster and uses the buster cannons even better then before. (Deals 10 damage that increases by 5 in normal form, which stacks up to 35 During Reptile Form, this deals 25 Damage and the enemy has a 5% chance for their skill to have no effect for 2 rounds. this increases by 5% per each time BC has been increased in Normal Form. 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Constricting Spear: Frank fires a spear from his buster cannons to stun the enemy and deal damage as well. While in his reptile form, he is even more stronger and deals more damage then before. (Deals 10 damage and stuns the target for one round. When Reptile form is activated, this deals 20 damage and stuns the target for one round. 2 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Defensive Manuever: (Frank is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Tom Deacon: He is another "little brother" of Team E.O.W. and has a very unique naihatsu power. He is able to control time and can stop time to stun enemies, create particles with his naihatsu energy, and can speed up time for an ally to increase the power of an ally.

Time Out: Tom stops time for the enemy, making them unable to move for an amount of time. (Stuns the enemy team for two rounds. Once this move is activated, Tom cannot use his other skills. 2 Genkaku, 1 Random, Cooldown: 5)

Time Particles: Tom uses his own naihatsu energy to create partcles that deal damage and destroys a person's naihatsu. (Deals 15 damage and destroys one random energy. 1 Genkaku, Cooldown: 0)

Speed Time: Tom makes an ally or himself faster than he or she normally is. This also makes Tom more powerful if he uses it on himself. (Makes one ally take 25 percent less damage for three rounds. If used on himself, this increases Time Particles power by 100 percent for three rounds. 1 Genkaku, 1 Random, Cooldown: 5)

Defensive Manuever: (Tom is invincible this round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)
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Kira Bradley: She is a member of Team E.O.W. and is mainly the strategist of the team, but she can also fight if she has to. Her naihatsu power is to control all metal around her and to use metal as a weapon. With this and her healing abilities, she is a powerful ally.

Heal: Kira's medical skills help heal her ally using her medical kit and her naihatsu. (Heals an ally for 30 health points. 1 Naihatsu, Cooldown: 0)

Healing Wind: Kira combines her healing naihatsu with the wind to not only heal wounds and damage, but seals any wound back to normal and heals any type of poison damage. (Heals the entire team for 15 health points. This also removes any poison effects. 1 Naihatsu, 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Metal Spike: Kira uses her manipulation of metal to strike her opponents with metal transformed into a spear. She then throws it into the ground and controls it while the spike is underground. And then, at the right time, she strikes it at an opponent. (Deals 25 Piercing damage to a enemy target. This is unaffected by counter or reflect skills. 1 Naihatsu, 1 Random, Cooldown: 0)

Defensive Manuever: (Kira is invincible for one round. 1 Random, Cooldown: 4)

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Posted on July 17, 2007 00:20

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Ima: This character has three attacks. This means that Cannon Burst shouldn't do so much damage as the character is primarily offense rather than support, unlike Sakura. As such, Cannon Burst should be made to do 10 damage, Giant Key Smash should do 30, and Giant Cannon Blast is fine.

Replicon: Tentacle Strike needs to be reduced to 15 damage.

Kura Inizuchi: Hair Snare needs to have a higher cost. Similar to Shikamaru's ability but doesn't take a prep. Adding an extra chakra would make it like Tayuya's move, but Tayuya can't use any other attacks while it's active. Given the other abilities, I'd simply increase the cost by 2 random, since she can steal chakra to afford it and this requires at least 2 rounds to do. Absorbtion should just cost 1 Genkaku, 1 Random.

Skullron: He's ok.

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