Madara Uchiha Gaiden: Chapter 23 Released!

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#1 ///Madara Uchiha Gaiden\\\\\\ By CVajax ______________________________________________________________________________________________ Author's Note: Yo! This is my second fanfic, the untold story of Madara Uchiha. It takes place a long time ago, during the First Great Shinobi War. The Hyuuga clan is fighting for power in their territory. This story also ties into Naruto Kurofuji, my other story, much later in this fanfic. I'd suggest reading Naruto Kurofuji first. Credit: 1. Naruto Shippuuden Manga 2. Author of this- http://forums.narutofan.com/showthread.php?t=106576 Updates 1. Story starts. First 3 chapters out by Monday. Oh yeah 2. Chapters 4-7 out by weekend. Then after spring break ill have 1-2 chapters out per week. 3. Season 1 Ends after Chapter 10. Sorry 4. Season 2 Opens! Bam! Release Dates Chapter 1: 3/22 released Chapter 2: 3/22 released Chapter 3: 3/23 released Chapter 4: 3/24 released Chapter 5: 3/25 released Chapter 6: 3/27 or 28 released Chapter 7: 3/30 released Chapter 8: 4/6 released Chapter 9: 4/7 released Chapter 10: 4/12 rleased Part 1 Ends Chapter 11: 4/19 released Chapter 12: 4/20 released Chapter 13: 4/25 released Chapter 14: 4/26 or 27 released Chapter 15: 5/3 released Chapter 16: 5/4 rleased Chapter 17: 5/10 released Chapter 18: 5/11 released Chapter 19: 5/17 released Part 2 Ends Chapter 20: 5/18 released Chapter 21: 5/24 released Chapter 22: 5/25? released Chapter 23: 5/31 released Chapter 24: 6/1 Oh yeah!

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#2 un vs man

cvajax Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1210 Joined on: February 11, 2007

#3 ..huh?

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#4 kool tell me when I like apple sauce,tacos, and bannas ] Aj's 8-man tournies Hall of Fame 1.Pr0t0n 2.(neji_hyuuga)

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#5 cvajax wrote: ..huh? what? ..::MossTree::Always Remember DNC::They know me too well::.. chem5 wrote: I think you're out of her league..you could do better. Why haven't you tried hooking up with Velma? ..::Credits: Sig - [The Lovely Lynne <3]::..

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#6 i was talking bout what the empata guy said

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#7 oh gosh say sumtin real I like apple sauce,tacos, and bannas ] Aj's 8-man tournies Hall of Fame 1.Pr0t0n 2.(neji_hyuuga)

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#8 Chapter 1: "Our History; The Beginning" Our history. Our ancient world. A place of poverty, violence, and corruption, with the next generation at stake. This is the beginning. The world was in a horrible trance. Clans had continued to battle each other for power. Governments were established as quick as others fell. Hostility was at an all time high. A grave, grave time. Even the clouds seemed to be crying. Neomshi Hyuuga wondered about all this before she realized a storm was coming. The wind was picking up rapidly. She got up, and started running back to her house. As she was running back to her house, she saw an elder. He was limping as he walked down the street. Neomshi realized he had returned from a battle. She kept running. It hadn’t seemed to bother her, seeing how she saw this nearly every day. Many had huge, permanent scars. Some came back paralyzed, others didn’t come back at all, either to continue the fight, or because of their death. And with each day Neomshi saw this, the more she decided she needed to help. “Father?” asked Neomshi. Her father, leader of the Hyuuga clan, opened his eyes. It was a bright cloudy day in the middle of May. Three years had passed, and Neomshi was rounding the age of 18. He sat on the bench outside their temple, in the garden. “You disrupted my meditation, Neomshi,” he replied back. “I’m sorry, Father. But you’ve been so busy lately, this is the only time I get to talk to you,” said Neomshi. She sat down next to him. “Why? What’s wrong?” asked her father. Neomshi looked away, out to the field. “Father, I know you wouldn’t feel comfortable if I did this, but I need to go into battle with our troops.” Her father stared at her. “Please. The last three years I have been working on nothing but my taijutsu and medical jutsu. I know I can be of help.” Her father nodded. “Fine. I will allow it, but…” His voice trailed off. “I will come back, father,” finished Neomshi for him. She hugged him. “Ready? Lets pull out troops,” yelled the captain. Neomshi got up, and looked back at the temple. She couldn’t find her father, so she kept moving. They had received their mission; a few enemies had crossed past their border onto their territory. They had to assassinate them at all costs. Neomshi walked in the back of the group of ten soldiers. It was the first time she will ever be in battle, or even leave her home. She began to fidget her fingers. Everyone knew Neomshi back home as a shy, modest type. She was very kind and fair. She had long, black purplish hair, and was actually very beautiful, though she would never think that. “Stop,” whispered the captain. Neomshi looked around. They were in the forest, surrounded by giant trees. “Activate your Byakugans! They should be around-“ Suddenly a kunai struck right next to the captains leg. There was an exploding tag attached to it. “Run!” yelled a soldier. The team split away in opposite directions. They managed to dodge the explosion, but were separated from eachother. Vulnerable. “No!” Neomshi could hear the captain. It was an ambush, at least fifty ninjas surrounding them. “Is that…the Woodland clan?” thought Neomshi. It was, the famous and terrifying Woodland clan. “It’s no wonder the trees looked so tall,” thought Neomshi. NEomshi saw something coming from the bush. She ran. She ran as fast as she could, and didn’t stop for anything, and kept going until she collapsed. The young Hyuuga girl rested on the side of a tree. “Where-where am I?” she wondered. She started making hand signs for the Byakugan. “What?” she cried, as two limbs sprouted from the tree and pinned her. She managed to activate her Byakugan. “They’re made of…chakra?” “Yes, they are,” said a voice. She looked to her left. It was a Woodland member. “Die, Hyuuga!” he cried, taking out several kunai.

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#9 Chapter 2: “Light and Dark” He ran to Neomshi, kunai in hand. Neomshi closed her eyes. But nothing happened. She opened her eyes slowly. The Woodland member was on his knees, his face not more then an inch or two away from her face. She looked at his chest. A huge blade ran through the middle of his chest. She tried to look at the person with the blade, but realized the Woodland member covered her mouth with the wood from the tree. She was losing oxygen, and slipping in and out of consciousness. There was a dark figure standing behind the dead Woodland memer. Neomshi fainted. Neomshi woke up. She leaped up, screaming and looking around. She was laying on a blanket in a large cave. A fire roared next to her. She lied back down on the blanket, feeling light-eaded. “Seems you’re awake,” said a voice. She looked to the opening of the cave. A young man came through the entrance. He was unbelievably handsome. He had long, straight hair, and wore a long black cloak. He seemed to have a lot of chakra. But what was most interesting about him was his bright, red eyes. “God, it’s wet out there,” he said, taking off his coat. “Wh-What happened? Where am I?” said Neomshi. The long haired man sat down. “I killed the man who was about to kill you. He was from the Woodland clan, and seemed quite powerful,” he said. “Oh…well thank you. Sorry to be rude, but who are you? Why’d you stop him?” He paused for a moment. “My name is Sobojo. I’ve come from far away, but I’m currently living at a town nearby here. While I was walking through the woods, I heard all these noises. I figured a battle was going on. Then I saw you, and…I don’t know, I guess I couldn’t let a beautiful girl get killed.” Neomshi blushed. “Oh! What about my team?” Sobojo frowned. “I took you back here, and ran out to see the rest of the battle. But it was over. There was one survivor from your team, who was standing next to his captains body. He ran back to wherever he came from. I, uh…I’m sorry for your loss.” She looked away. “I had no choice but to run…I wasn’t strong enough,” she thought. Sobojo kept staring at her eyes. “You’re from the Hyuuga clan, no? I can tell from your amazing eyes.” She glanced back at him. “Uh…yes. But I think your eyes are more amazing. Did you know, the Hyuuga’s eyes were developed by Kintaró, the God Of Light? The God of Light’s main enemy was the God Of Darkness, Sobojo, your name. Kind of weird, huh?” Sobojo seemed perplexed. “Yeah, weird…anyways, it’s late, and it’s raining out. It be best if you stayed here tonight.” She nodded. They stayed there the whole night, talking and laughing. When the sun came up, they were still talking. They began to set out on their own paths. “I’ll be here in this town for a while. Maybe I’ll see you around there?” asked Sobojo. “Yeah, I’ll see you!” said Neomshi. As they walked in the opposite directions, Neomshi couldn’t stop smiling, even though her entire team had been wiped out. She realized right there that she was in love with this man, who she hadn’t even known for a day.

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#10 Chapter 3: “The New Eye Technique” Since then, Neomshi and Sobojo spent a lot of time together. They truly began to love one another. However, the more she saw of Sobojo, the less she saw of her father. And after a year of dating, Sobojo asked Neomshi to marry him. Neomshi thought about it for a few days. Was she willing to leave everything she once knew to be everything behind? But in the end, she decided to be with him. Neomshi left the clan, since out-of-clan marriages were not allowed. They were married, and bought a house in the town. Like most male ninjas, Sobojo did assassinations for money. He was noted to be the swiftest and best assassin in all the land. But he seemed more interested spending time with his wife then his job. Neomshi loved Sobojo more than ever, even if he had his flaws. Sometimes, he would leave in the middle of the night, and not return until morning. But this happened once in a while, maybe every other week, and Neomshi could care less. A year later, the couple became a family. Neomshi was pregnant, and surprisingly, she seemed happy about it. Neomshi spent a lot of time thinking of the child’s name. “It’ll be a boy,” said Sobojo, after Neomshi had to sit down when the baby kicked her hard. A few weeks later, the baby came. The village medic lifted him up. “Congratulations, it’s a baby boy!” said the medic. “Oh Sobojo, it came to me. The perfect name,” said Neomshi, holding the baby. “Madara. Little Madara Uchiha.” Sobojo laughed. “’Big Hero’?” he said. “He doesn’t seem that big. And when did we decide to use my last name? I thought since you kept your maiden name…” But he knew why she did. It was to remind her of where she came from, that she was a Hyuuga. “Honey? What’s wrong with his eyes?” asked Neomshi. The baby had red eyes, like his father, but also a fade of white. And next to the pupil was a symbol, that looked like the number six. Thus, the sharingan was born. Madara grew up. The town seemed to grow with him, more people coming in. Things were peaceful there, despite what was happening outside it’s borders. By the time Madara was three, there was three “six” symbols around his pupil. When Madara started school, the other children made fun of him for his eyes. So he grew his hair long, to cover his strange eyes. Around that time, Madara got a new brother, named Kazako. Their family was one of the most richest in the town, mostly from Sobojo, and they were well respected. His family had seemed to be one of the families in charge, and they were making the town more like a clan then a town. Madara and Kazako grew to be very powerful, and had strange yet amazing powers. Kazako and Madara constantly fought each other, as brothers usually did. But they continued to do it, mostly to push themselves, into their teenagehood, when Madara was fourteen, Kazako eleven. “Bring it, weakling!” yelled Madara. Kazako came running. Madara blocked Kazako’s kick. But Kazako threw a punch, too. Madara dodged by throwing himself to the ground. He looked up. “Earth Style: Head Hunter Jutsu!” Kazako fell into the ground. “Damn! I saw it coming, too!” Kazako and Madara did not yet know their power was from their eyes, the sharingan, but they were masters of it. They both had the sharingan permanently, their eyes never in a normal stage. Madara released Kazako. “I am older than you, therefore, I am stronger than you. Maybe in a few more years, Kazako.” He started to walk away.” “That’s what you think,” thought Kazako. He ran to Madara, kunai in hand. At the last second, Madara whipped around, blocking the strike with his kunai. “You bastard…you have the full intention of killing me. Die!” yelled Madara. The brothers both struck with their kunai, and both barely dodging the blow. Madara stared at Kazako. He dropped his kunai. “Kazako, your-“ “It’s ok, we just didn’t dodge fast enough. It’s just a little scratch.” “”Not the scratch idiot, your eyes!” Kazako’s symbols were spinning around and around extremely fast, and some image was being shown. “Brother, your’s too!” Madara stood inches from Kazako’s face, staring. Their eyes had changed shape completely. And this was the birth of a new technique, called the Mangekyou.

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#11 boring.... .:Go Burn Yourself:. - ::High Gfx Novice:: - Favorite Sig :.God created two hands, two legs, two ears, but only one heart?. The other one must belong to our lovers.:

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#12 *sigh* maybe its boring at first, but just you wait... therell be huge explosions and death and killingness and..stuff... Also I just realized Chapter 2 is kinda short, so I released it now.

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#13 the second chapter seemed like it was rushed

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#14 HOW DID KAKASHI GET A SHARINGAN?? PROUD TO BE PINOY!!!!!

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#15 intereztin... ...:::Life n Death:::...

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