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Posted on October 7, 2009 16:37

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thank you for the information. :amused

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Posted on October 30, 2009 23:39

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~Bump~

You forgot the unique, non-linear, and artistic style of poetry employed by E. E. Cummings.

Poems like this one.

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Posted on November 10, 2009 16:28

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Posted on November 12, 2009 19:37

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Thank you for sharing, and taking your time to write something up like that. i'll definatly try a haikuu once. We'll see^^

Posted on December 27, 2009 04:50

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Nice and informative guide. I wish to see more people using more intricate ways of poetry writing.

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#51

I think I got it.

A poem about a monster:

With teeth out sharp and eyes turning red
Dont base your fears on something you read...
Remember the man who made a good kill
He lived in a cottage along down the hill
But dont look back and just remember what I said!
Thinking of the beast fill's me with dread
With fear like this you'll be wishing your were dead!
It sickens me that its realy ill...
Doing all this purely on will
The thought freezes the room, sickle and still

It probably sucks but Im new to this, what do you think?

Posted on April 4, 2010 18:48

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A child

A child, only picking up pieces of this world
Seeing so much yet understanding little
Having no hate for race, gender or creed
No lust for power or for wealth
To them were all the same
To them were all on equal grounds
A child, so empty and yet so happy to.

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Words

Words are like a prision for your message
Sometimes masking your true intentions
So i'll look into your eyes and know how you fell
To hold you close, feel your heartbeat and hear you breath
To hold you close and just be content
And as we look into the deep dark sky
A thousand bright eyes looking back
To look up and know you blong
To something undescribable and beautiful.

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Never look up to the sun
Lest it leaves you life undone
But stay away from the darkness
Lest the light will leave your eyes

Posted on July 5, 2010 08:41

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#55

Nice guide it helped me a lot. :blink

This is my first poem. CnC if you wish:

Bloody Clouds

I'm standing in front of your dying body,
I've just realized my hands are bloody.
In my head there's a suspicious noise,
but deep inside I know it's only my soul's screaming voice.

Don't you ever look behind?
Aren't you afraid of the pieces you'll find?
Resenting me as if I've had no reason to do what I've done,
oh how foolish and naive you've become...

Rainy clouds have filled the sky,
I'm still here in front of you, why?
I've finally reached what I've been aiming for years,
but if so, why are my eyes full of tears?

As my scarlet blood is pooring from your hands,
and deep inside your fragile core lands.
Have you finally realized what you've done?,
Oh how foolish and naive you've become...

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